Andy, you're wasting your time. Pete and BDC are the MASTER'S at pointless dialogue. Description is what's key gentlemen, my RP didn't have much dialogue, I wanted to focus on the description, which is what I'll continue to do, because honestly, it doesn't take a lot of brain power to always talk shit about your opponent, but to convey the emotions in a non speaking RP is actually quite challenging, and the outcome always looks so much better. Pete, in my opinion you use WAY too much dialogue, I'm really impressed with BDC's recent RP's, as they weren't all dialogue. I understand you want communication, but where the fuck is your character communicating from? Obviously shit is going to happen around them. "The scene opens in a graveyard..." Yeah, I like it, but I'd like to know more about this graveyard, but to also use that same scene for every RP? Gets extremely boring. You'll see why description is so important in my next RP that I will be dropping soon.
How's THAT for description?