K, I know this should probably be in 'Show your Talent'. But noone ever visits that thread and I actually want some opinions on this. Besides it's not really about 'showing my talent'
Yeah, so this is a promo I'm halfway through for a BTB I'm working on with another member. I've tried a more descriptive style, I was wondering whether that improved the promo or just made it drag on.
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Break the Walls Down’ plays over the PA system as Y2J, Chris Jericho, steps out onto the stage. Jericho moves down the ramp with the saunter and sneer we’ve all come to expect as he enters the ring, wearing one of his usual lavish suits. The crowd begin to rain heat upon the former World Champion, ,who snarls slightly as he moves the microphone up to his lips.
Jericho: I see that the fans here are just as hypocritical and ignorant as every other group of wrestling fans.
This remark causes the crowd to unleash more boos and hisses directed at Y2J, but he just sneers with contempt and begins to speak again.
Jericho: Looks like this time some of your idiocy as rubbed off on me, here I am, thinking that there was a possibility that not all wrestling fans were blind, mindless sheep, but I was wrong.
The crowd boo but do not bother Jericho, as he chuckles before continuing.
Jericho: But berating and exposing the fans as the scum they are is not the reason I am out here tonight. This company right now does not have a champion, and that is not an image that should be sustained. The fools and hypocrites off this company such as John Cena, Shawn Michaels and The Rock should walk to the back of the line…
The crowd pop huge at the mention of some of their favourite stars, infuriating Jericho as he continues with a predominant growl in his tone
Jericho: And Paul Heyman should present the championship to the only man deserving of it in this company, actually in fact, in any wrestling company, the greatest professional wrestler of all time, Chris Jericho!
The crowd launch heat like a battalion of archers upon Y2J, before beginning a thunderous ‘You Suck’ chant. Jericho glares at the crowd before chuckling calmly and speaking into the microphone yet again
Jericho: When will you learn your opinion’s do not matter! You can chant all you want, it does not and will never change the fact that-
‘Sexy Boy’ plays over the loud speakers as the fans erupt with appreciation for the legendary Heart Break Kid. Jericho’s reaction is far less pleasant as he glares down towards the stage, Shawn Michaels strutting out with a cheeky grin on his face as Jericho looks furious in the ring. Michaels already has a microphone with him and begins to speak
HBK: Jericho, looks like a little bit of your idiocy has rubbed off on me. You see, I actually though, that Chris Jericho might actually might not be such a pompous fool in WAW, but oh how wrong I was. You’re still whining, demanding and chucking tantrums like a 2 year old. But it’s risen to a whole new level, now you’re claiming to be the greatest wrestler of all time? Jericho, you step into the ring with The Icon, The Showstopper, The Main Event, The Heartbreak Kid, Shawn Michaels, and I will prove to the world that the only thing you are is the worlds greatest liar.
Y2J walks around the ring angrily as the crowd cheer, before stopping at the ring ropes and leaning on them with one arm towards Shawn, laughing low in his throat and speaking again
Jericho: Shawn, when will you learn that you’re past it. You had your time in the spotlight, back in 1996. But your legacy is forever tarnished now you try to come and steal the shine away from true superstars like me. I am going to be the WAW Champion, and there is nothing you can do about it. I’m never going to wrestle you again!
Heat surrounds Chris like an oven as the proverbial ball is thrown back to the Showstopper, who begins to speak.
HBK: Why is that Chris? Is it because you think you can beat me, or you don’t want to find out you can’t?
Y2J’s facial expression turns from joy to rage as Michaels smiles at Jericho.
Jericho: You know what Shawn? I accept!
The fans throughout the arena pop huge as Shawn removes his shirt and walks down to the ring, Y2J beginning to take off his jacket and unbutton his shirt. Before the two can fight however, ’Voices’ plays throughout the arena, signalling the entry of the Legend Killer. Sure enough, Randy Orton steps out onto the ramp and begins his slow walk to the ring, his stern, calculated stare unchanged as he enters the squared circle and retrieves a microphone. Y2J and HBK remove their eyes from one another and look at Randy.
Orton: Well isn’t this cute. The old enemies get it on more time for championship gold. Please, both of you, it’s about time you both left for good. The One Man Dynasty is about to begin, and by the time it’s over, both of you will be forgotten relics only remembered by the ones who are old enough to remember your greatest triumphs. This is the Age of Orton. Jericho, Michaels, that belt is mine. If either of you disagree, I’d be glad to kick your heads in and climb over your bodies.
Randy drops the mic as each man stands poised to strike in the ring, each one waiting for another to make the first move.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Thoughts?