OOC LDW General Discussion

[Jay-Ashley]

Rated weird for don't use that kind of language in this section.

Which word So or a?

 

[The Gipper]

What's a WWE?

 

[InsaneAlphaBeta]

What's a WWE?

Willy Wonka Entertainment.

The chocolate factory got a big push.

 

[Nostradamus]

I'd like to personally apologize for the delay in this episode. Took on a ton of responsibility irl (that I probably shouldn't have) also had work and college classes. It will be out soon.

 

[Jay-Ashley]

I'd like to personally apologize for the delay in this episode. Took on a ton of responsibility irl (that I probably shouldn't have) also had work and college classes. It will be out soon.

You fine.

 

[Rosie]

I'd like to personally apologize for the delay in this episode. Took on a ton of responsibility irl (that I probably shouldn't have) also had work and college classes. It will be out soon.

I didn't get a notification for this and legit was about to go to the thread to mention the delay lol. But yeah, a lot of stuff IRL has happened. I've managed to get my half done today and mine was more I was excited about a new game and didn't want to over-do it and force myself to write more than I have to all the time (I did that way too much in RWK). As for now, I am sure Jonny will get what he needs to be done if he can, but if needed, we will see about others who are willing to help. I know a couple people already pitched their names in for help if needed.

I am sorry, I know we've been mostly decent for getting shows at least close to on time (I mean, one or two days later than the estimated day I consider fine) and this is the first time there has been this kind of delay. At least we aren't keeping you in the dark for a month. Until then...

If anyone wants some of my general feedback on your character similar to what @Patriot Pants did, let me know. I'm sure I can find stuff to praise and areas to work on.

 

[Jay-Ashley]

If anyone wants some of my general feedback on your character similar to what @Patriot Pants did, let me know. I'm sure I can find stuff to praise and areas to work on.

Yeah, tell me why Jun is trash.

 

[Rosie]

Yeah, tell me why Jun is trash.

He isn't trash. I think the idea of someone being a fish out of water in a new country and is still a rookie has potential. Along with a couple of ideas you mentioned to me, there is potential. I think the next step is to get him being involved, getting interactions with people outside of matches to flesh him out and get stories with him refined and out there.

 

[Jay-Ashley]

He isn't trash. I think the idea of someone being a fish out of water in a new country and is still a rookie has potential. Along with a couple of ideas you mentioned to me, there is potential. I think the next step is to get him being involved, getting interactions with people outside of matches to flesh him out and get stories with him refined and out there.

...this isn't what I wanted

 

[Rosie]

...this isn't what I wanted

Me being honest and saying good things and that is too early to say he is bad?

 

[Jay-Ashley]

Me being honest and saying good things and that is too early to say he is bad?

Yes...

 

[Maniax]

I didn't get a notification for this and legit was about to go to the thread to mention the delay lol. But yeah, a lot of stuff IRL has happened. I've managed to get my half done today and mine was more I was excited about a new game and didn't want to over-do it and force myself to write more than I have to all the time (I did that way too much in RWK). As for now, I am sure Jonny will get what he needs to be done if he can, but if needed, we will see about others who are willing to help. I know a couple people already pitched their names in for help if needed.

I am sorry, I know we've been mostly decent for getting shows at least close to on time (I mean, one or two days later than the estimated day I consider fine) and this is the first time there has been this kind of delay. At least we aren't keeping you in the dark for a month. Until then...

If anyone wants some of my general feedback on your character similar to what @Patriot Pants did, let me know. I'm sure I can find stuff to praise and areas to work on.

Give me your honest opinions on both Mike and Alexandra?

 

[Rosie]

Give me your honest opinions on both Mike and Alexandra?

I already see improvement in how you've written so far. Both gimmicks reading them off have potential, with a mid-west country boy ready to kick ass and a girl (probably) being a star-struck manipulative diva. I think some of your first social media posts were a bit rough, but it has been getting better. So, improvement noted, looking forward to where you go next.

 

[Maniax]

I already see improvement in how you've written so far. Both gimmicks reading them off have potential, with a mid-west country boy ready to kick ass and a girl (probably) being a star-struck manipulative diva. I think some of your first social media posts were a bit rough, but it has been getting better. So, improvement noted, looking forward to where you go next.

Thanks Beavie, I am looking forward to where it goes for both, maybe a feud between them down the line? Demon had both his characters feud, why not mines? Who knows maybe there's a surprise in there.

 

[Jay-Ashley]

Thanks Beavie, I am looking forward to where it goes for both, maybe a feud between them down the line? Demon had both his characters feud, why not mines? Who knows maybe there's a surprise in there.

I would like to see a person promo against themself as it would be interesting