No, Andy, you had too much UNNECESSARY description. There is such a thing as WELL-DONE description (see: RRS's RPs).
Also, Dredson's dialogue was f-in' A.
Oh? Actually setting the scene and give the reader some insight into previous events is a little too much for you? You know, instead of just saying "some graveyard." I didn't have too much, I just didn't put it throughout the entire thing. I presented exactly what he was wearing and what he looked like, the fans, and the physical setting. Nothing more. A few lines were unnecessary, but it was by no means "too much," unless you're suffering from ADD.