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John McHenry

John McHenry

John McHenry From Ohio
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  • John McHenry
    My name can actually be anywhere but yeah just one of the first three and RVD on the opposite side.
    Defiant
    I'll give it a go tomorrow.

    Just clarifying though; You want either Perfect, Jericho or Ziggler on one side, RVD on the other, and your name in the middle?
    Andy
    lol yeah. most of the content is good. just add a little bit more spice to them and go over them before you post 'em and you'll be good.
    Andy
    I'm not even talking about the fragments; I'm not talking about the sentence structure. I'm speaking about the grammar within said sentences.
    Yes, it sure is! I was the only person here that was using them. I suppose I must accept that you also represent ~ now.
    Dale
    You should add in extra outcomes for the VBookie to make it a little more interesting and precise. Give us a shout if you want some ideas, I used to do it over on another forum.
    I read both RPs, and liked his structure a little better - yours was a bit confusing, especially because you just jumped into the video package without mentioning that that was what we were reading. I made it out, but some people might not have understood your intent.

    That, and you do not use punctuation in your dialogue AT ALL.

    With that said, I liked your character development, dialogue (although the lack of punctuation was annoying as hell) and descriptive bits.
    Ha you were never that bad, I just was so protective of the site, I was trying to avoid negativity as opposed to spam. I also was having a really bad week that week. Glad it's under the bridge and you stuck around.
    Troy
    Thanks for that. By the way what stream do you use again for RAW? BigEvents is being a pain again.
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