Well youe obviously seen my review for the earlier part of your PPV. So Im not gonna post all that again. But I will put my final thoughts on Buried Alive:In general it was well written.
You have good ideas, and I liked the ending how HHH got out of the casket and Taker was buried. That was a good idea on your part.
But I have to say, your general writing is improving from the start of this btb. BUT you could use a bit more description... For example:
You right: They throw lefts and rights
Well instead you could be like:
HHH winds back and throws a huge haymaker, nailing Taker in the jaw. Taker returns fire with a right of his own, followed bya quic right that stuns Triple H
You get my point? It just makes it better.
And also, at the end, you just went "Taker falls into the grave, and now HHH wakes up and pedigrees Undertaker and buries him"
That could definately use dome more description, sort of like above...
But all that stuff comes in time, and you will continue to get better. Just try to use more description. But overall, I liked the outcomes of the matches, and the storylines, and the matches werent even bad, just room for improvement.
Good job though.
7.5/10