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[MikeRaw]

what do you think of me as a booker....i did WWE vs. ECW with CMS....check the BTB 24/7 thread for the link man....i am ECW

Well I dont recall reading your stuff. So i cant comment, howevery Ill check that old one out at some point and read a btb you make if you ever make a new on and then post my thoughts

 

[rosewt01]

What do you think of me as a booker, what can i improve?
Here is the link if you have not read my work:
http://www.impactwrestling.com/forum/showthread.php?t=20049

 

[The Anigma]

LMAO! This is classic, Mike.

I guess its safe to say that the Save_us.fromnoobs campaign has officially started.

LOL...this is great, Mike.

 

[MikeRaw]

What do you think of me as a booker, what can i improve?
Here is the link if you have not read my work:
http://www.impactwrestling.com/forum/showthread.php?t=20049

Ive read one of your shows so far. And now I checked out a bit more to answer your question and heres what i think:
Ive noticed a few people, some of the lesser expierienced people have the same problems. When writing a match, some people are pretty breif. For example, in one of your shows you wrote "Hulk interferes in the match. Distracts ref"
well that could be alot more creative/descriptive.
Try like this:
"In the ring, one of the wrestlers is going for a pin, he rolls him up but he pulls hte tights! Out of nowhere, Hogan goes wild, jumping up on the apron and yelling at the ref. The ref is distracted and Hogan tells him to watch out for the tights. The ref turns back around, stops the cheating, and Hogan gets off the ring apron"

See how much better that can be?
So Ill say this, it seems live you have alot of creative ideas, which is shown because you actually created a promotion run by Flair and Hogan, lol. So those ideas will help you be a better booker. But you need to help the ideas out by making the show better quality. People will still read your show because you have good ideas, and its still readable. But if you want to take the next step, just overall organize better. Like seperate with colors a bit better, try not to have commentary in the same thing as the match.
For example, yours was like this:

The ref tells them to get out the ring and Hulk listens by getting out the ring. Ric gets out afterwards.

Jamie: The GM’s getting angry.
Mike: Maybe a feud coming.

Reid lifts up Nick and tries to suplex him but Nick reverses into a suplex of his own.

Well I was like, wtf, who are these idiots talking. But its the commentatorsa, but it wasnt wellseperated. Maye try this:

blah blah blah, random match stuff....

---
Jamie: My god! Did you see that!
Mike: I sure did, what a hugh impact move
---

blah, blah, blah random matc stuff.

So I hope I helped. Just try to be a little more professional looking (layouts) and keep working on the matches and descriptiveness.
But your on the right track with ideas

 

[MikeRaw]

For your viewing pleasure:

To start things off, here is the roster listing of the highly succesful (I kid) "Custom WWE" This beauty was brougt to you by...WM Punk.

Raw
Standard Roster with Stone Cold Steve Austin
Sans Triple H
Smackdown
Standard Roster with The Rock
Edge is a Face
Trips is a heel

WWE C:Cena
IC:HBK
WTTC:Cryme Tyme
Women's:Vacant

WHC:HHH
US:MVP
CRIUSERWEIGHT:Greg Helms
WWETTCudleys

Anyone surprised this one never took off and became a hit???


Next up, a classic promo by "eyebrow2007"... From WMXX!!!!

We return with Vince in the ring with a bandage above his left eye after his war with austin at XX. He begins by badmouthing the crowd, and even mentions austin. He then claims tonight is a new beginning for the WWE and can look forward to another 20 years of WM moments. However, if the WWE is to start fresh then it needs to get rid of the dead wood, He pulls out a list of Superstars names, Jon Hiedenriech, Rosey, Rico, Nunzio, Stamboli, Mark Henry, all FIRED!
Eric Bischoff then enters. He storms to the ring, and demands Vince rethink. Vince pauses, and tells Bischoff to look him in the eyes because.....YOU'RE F I R E D!!!
Bischoff is shocked as Police come ringside and escort him from the arena. Vince leads a chant of Na Na Na Na Hey Hey Goodbye. He now claims that that made him feel good, so for Paul Heyman, pick up your pink slip, Youre Fired!!
He then thinks out loud saying that maybe it were a bad idea, then again no it was, because, the first of the new GM - .......... Bret Hart. The crowd go wild to the announcement, even though he turned at WM this is too big to boo.
Vince then gets ready to leave until.... Glass Shatters... Austin enters in a pick up truck. He strolls straight into the ring and stuns McMahon.
Austin pours beer all over Vince and proceeds to the ramp when he is called back to listen to 2 words, You're FIRED!!!
A shocked Austin is distraught and walks out saluting the crowd one last time.

I wish my promo skills were that polished...

And now, this guy decides a good way to start his btb with this... From Smackdown Dead aMans old thread...

How is this

Is it a surprise that btb was never seen again?

Thats it for now, but I could go on all day, lol.
These guys have miss the one thing thats important when being a booker... And that thing is...........................................
...............




..............

Skill.

 

[The Anigma]

LMAO @ WM Punk's roster...

I mean I can understand that it takes time to develop your skills but most noobs claim to be great and then turn out to be horrible. Don't say that you're a great booker and act like your show will be a hit when you know that it will turn out to be shit. It's just stupid and makes you look like a buffoon (LMAO). Anyway, yeah, there are quite a few noobs that are just real bad and not in the good way. Others are pretty impressive but there aren't many that are impressive.

 

[LadyHotrod]

LOL, good work MikeRaw.

 

[-TJ-]

Wow

 

[-TJ-]

Who do you see as the top 5 bookers here in the btb section? - I don't really considered some better then others so this isn't in any specific order.

CMS

Levi

Anigma

XBA

DX.

I wouldn't say you cause i haven't seen your btb in the long run

Do you have a good idea what you'll be doing with your btb in the future (like next month or so, after some of your current feuds end)? - I will be doing something no one else in this forum (I think) has ever done. A feud with TNA..... Duh Duh Duh! lol

What are you most proud of in your btb? Promos or matches? - Well my matches are always my strenght but i'm most proud of my Jerey Collins Storyline. Again something I believe no one has every done here. Make a fictional wrestler a well known star in my btb.

what do you think of my match writing? - I think you have improved alot and I think you hae a bright future instored for you

do you think my next TNE PPV will be good??? - I won't answer that question because I haven't seen it yet. You can't presume a btb will be good or bad until you've seen it..........

What music genre do you like? And more specifically, whats your favorite bands/singers? - Well I don't listen to anything specific. If i hear it and I like it. I'll listen to it.

 

[1chiban]

LOL at the Soma Drop. Where Umaga's concerned (with all those dodgy prescriptions) that's probably a better title for the move

Still v. poorly written though... showing themselves up

 

[The Anigma]

Since you've returned, who do you consider to be the top 5 BTB'ers?

Why does it say "The Icon" under your username?

Who do you think is the overall better booker? Why?
And you cannot use the "I don't know, it's a tie" as an answer.

XBA vs. Answer

Anigma vs. CMS

MikeRaw vs. Switchy

 

[MikeRaw]

Since you've returned, who do you consider to be the top 5 BTB'ers?

Why does it say "The Icon" under your username?

Who do you think is the overall better booker? Why?
And you cannot use the "I don't know, it's a tie" as an answer.

XBA vs. Answer

Anigma vs. CMS

MikeRaw vs. Switchy

Of course Im not gonna use "I dont know" lol. What do yo uthink I am, a noob?

-Top 5 btbers:
Anigma
Xtremebadass
CMS
brian kendricks biceps
The Leviathan could be higher up there but Ihe hasnt had a new shows since I started up my new btb, when he does ill be reading though.

- Why else? I felt like putting it there to accompany my Sting sig. I felt like it

-XBA vs Answer- XBA

-Anigma vs CMS- Anigma

-MikeRaw vs Switchy. Geez Switchy hasnt wrote in a long time but he was pretty damn good. Ill say back in the back I liked my btb better (that isnt me being egotittical) he was great at matches, I just liked my promos and storylines better, and my matches werent bad either. But my new one just started, and Im gonna live up to the hype hopefully, but if it ends up sucking, then it goes to Switchy. But for the record, switchy was more consistent.

 

[The Mac]

Thats fucking hillarious :

 

[chessarmy]

lol it was funny, this should teach these guys to take advice from other people and not take it as an insult, but use it to help make their BTBs better.

 

[wwerko619]

Who is your favorite superstar to write for ( in matches )?