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Crayo

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I was very impressed with yours Straight, great punctuation and you describe the events well. The only thing I would critique is the Vince Russo style booking, but overall I'm impressed. 8/10.

Zamo, the opposite. The punctuation and imagery could be improved, help the reader imagine what you're telling them too. Where as the booking was more realistic. 7.5/10.
 

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Obviously not a massive swerve every week but a couple of controversial characters/storylines with some unexpected turns is good and makes it more interesting for everyone involved imo.
 

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So now that I have posted a segment..which wasn't bad so what happens now?

@[seabs].
@[Jonathan].
 

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Zamorakian said:
So now that I have posted a segment..which wasn't bad so what happens now?

@[seabs].
@[Jonathan].


You're the head booker imo unless Jonathan can post one up to a similar standard. You're qualified enough imo.
 

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Give me a few hours, just started to watch EC as I've just got in and too stressed ATM.
 

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Crayo said:
There just can't be two head bookers, Jonathan could you just take a booker/writer role or something?

We're trying to establish who can judge a script better Zamo has written one and Jonathan is putting his up soon. It'll show who has a better understanding of what makes a entertaining script. The winner will be the head booker.
 

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Crayo said:
There just can't be two head bookers, Jonathan could you just take a booker/writer role or something?


Would be awesome..:'(