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[ThePlumber702]

not bad. good that you're taking depth into account, but id loosen up on the blur you got on the background guys

 

[Castiel]

Thanks for the advice man! I messed around with depth, and I think it definitely helps make things look better. I figured you would've mentioned the horrible render chosen for Sabin... it annoys me looking at it tbh, but it's saved as a Jpeg so I can't go back and fix that particular layer or anything. I just wanted a render of him from around 05... Lol

 

[Castiel]

Did my first avatar, obviously it had to be of Castiel! Lol Extremely happy with how the background turned out! Tried to add text, but just couldn't get anything I thought fit. Looks a bit blank in some spots, and I probably should've out the render higher. No clue why I lowered it...

Also messed around with a little alternate version. Lol

 

[ThePlumber702]

it actually looks pretty good man. Lowering it gave it a bit better composition than if you had pulled it all the way to the top.

Save all of your files as .png, not .jpg. .jpg will lower the quality of the files

 

[Castiel]

Damn, really? I'll start that now. Thanks man, I'm pretty happy with how that turned out.

I made a few graphics for my new BTB, I didn't bother to try anything with the text, normal text gets the point across here. I went with the theme of "red" for TNA. Two, with an alternate version of each

 

[Castiel]

PWF character + manager

 

[ThePlumber702]

I like the first one, but i think you should make the background text a little smaller... I'd also make the foreground text a bit smaller don't let it touch the edges of the sig. soo suck it on on the right and bottom a little.

second one is good, but put some of those bubbles over top of her arms/shoulders.. give it some depth.

 

[Castiel]

Duly noted, sir. I'll try your suggestion a littler later on! I appreciate for the advice!

 

[Castiel]

Changed the managers name, and tried the depth of the bubbles like you said, but it's a bit fucked up sense I couldn't get that one just over her chin to fully go away for some reason... oh well, I'm done messing with it. Lol

Also used Ashley Valence as a model for this:

Not sure if anyone totally gets what I was going for, but I think it's ok.

 

[Starlight]

Sorry, wrong topic.

 

[Smart Marx]

Castiel needs to rejoin PWF immediately. That is all.