Any users write poetry?

[catlady]

I do poetic rants as well. lol

 

[Swift]

I could probably write some decent stuff if I put the effort.

 

[Swift]

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[Danielson]

Yeah that one was. tunga:

I'm not always right, but when I am I think i'm cooler than I really am ha. Good stuff though britta

 

[Danielson]

I could probably write some decent stuff if I put the effort.

Well I think you should because you have knowledgeable posts everywhere else. Give it a shot, won't hurt anything.

 

[Danielson]

I do poetic rants as well. lol

Love to hear some

 

[catlady]

Love to hear some

Once again, based on my beliefs but here's one of my rants. I have like 3 others I believe. They are a lot longer then my poems. This one is called "So How Do You Bleed?"

There's a light at the end of the tunnel... But is that light actually light, or a new found darkened horizon? Chained linked brain waves race down the interstate chasing riches but only finding rags. How are you so blind? Did you not see the signs? They were painted in black and white and flown down the riverside. Your eyes seem to deceive you if your looking around and feeling safe. No where is safe now, and home isn't a place, its a state of mind that's been deprived of faith and self value. Did you take your prescription? Whats wrong with you! Some one call the doctor, we need new pills to rattle our selves. Try something new! They promise, they swear, "THEY DON'T KILL YOU". Well, now that depends on what your definition of don't is and is was. I'm not buying it and will stick to my straight edge values, you can keep the blue pills, I trust God. Technology has made men mad, but not mad for knowledge, just unknowingly mad. Buy this, sell that, try this, do that. Am I the only one that see's these big black boxes in our way are decoys to detract and eradicate all that we once were? Foolish me, I'm the one who is blind and can no longer see. Do you see me? I'm the one who believes in God, who gets mocked for loving something I can't see, yet you all so foolishly love only what can be seen. How vague will it be when all the world comes to one world order, and they devour your rights like its all "part of the plan". You will panic, and curse me more for not telling you so, but it has been written so long ago.

Yet, I sit, full of ****, in my ways. Not many believe me, or even care to listen. There is a heaven, there is a hell and if you don't smart up, you will be dumbed down. Don't buy into the drugs "that save you". The drugs are meant to kill you, so you don't know the meaning of being "saved".

Hollywood is nothing more than a distraction from our selves. They are brainwashed puppets of a satanic bond of money and lust and will burn in hell for what they teach us. The youth still follows them like sick lost puppies waiting for an answer. What they wear or what they do does not concern you. Are you so foolish? They play tricks on you to only distract you. To make you believe in things you don't want to. WAKE UP! The fire is all around you. Burning you alive as God tries to find a way to save you, but you don't want to be saved. You don't want to know Jesus' name. You want to remain the same and chase empty dreams of money and fame... all while forgetting your own purpose and changing your real name.

What really happened to us? How did we become so spiritually dead and so physically broken? Pride seems to rule our hearts while love hangs on for dear life. Black clouds cover our mind and instead of questioning the lies, we question the truth. We all feel love, we all feel hate. Our spirits know God and heart's crave faith, yet we lay so scattered and broken, longing for truth that was never spoken. We all bleed red blood. Good nor evil will change that. If I am so different from you, can you explain how? If I am bleeding wrong, how do you bleed? Do you crave the unseen, and wish to only be loved? All's we all want is to be truly loved, yet God is love... and so many reject God.

The air seems bitter on the brightest summer day, when you know the truth. There is something, much more, than this. The truth may scare you, but the truth will save you. It may not make sense, but once God is in you... You will see life for what it truly is.

 

[CM Punk]

Do you write this to relieve inner stress or pain?

 

[catlady]

Do you write this to relieve inner stress or pain?

Its how I say whats on my mind without offending people. So yeah, its like a venting tool. I just call it poetic ranting.
ity:tunga:

 

[Danielson]

Once again, based on my beliefs but here's one of my rants. I have like 3 others I believe. They are a lot longer then my poems. This one is called "So How Do You Bleed?"

There's a light at the end of the tunnel... But is that light actually light, or a new found darkened horizon? Chained linked brain waves race down the interstate chasing riches but only finding rags. How are you so blind? Did you not see the signs? They were painted in black and white and flown down the riverside. Your eyes seem to deceive you if your looking around and feeling safe. No where is safe now, and home isn't a place, its a state of mind that's been deprived of faith and self value. Did you take your prescription? Whats wrong with you! Some one call the doctor, we need new pills to rattle our selves. Try something new! They promise, they swear, "THEY DON'T KILL YOU". Well, now that depends on what your definition of don't is and is was. I'm not buying it and will stick to my straight edge values, you can keep the blue pills, I trust God. Technology has made men mad, but not mad for knowledge, just unknowingly mad. Buy this, sell that, try this, do that. Am I the only one that see's these big black boxes in our way are decoys to detract and eradicate all that we once were? Foolish me, I'm the one who is blind and can no longer see. Do you see me? I'm the one who believes in God, who gets mocked for loving something I can't see, yet you all so foolishly love only what can be seen. How vague will it be when all the world comes to one world order, and they devour your rights like its all "part of the plan". You will panic, and curse me more for not telling you so, but it has been written so long ago.

Yet, I sit, full of ****, in my ways. Not many believe me, or even care to listen. There is a heaven, there is a hell and if you don't smart up, you will be dumbed down. Don't buy into the drugs "that save you". The drugs are meant to kill you, so you don't know the meaning of being "saved".

Hollywood is nothing more than a distraction from our selves. They are brainwashed puppets of a satanic bond of money and lust and will burn in hell for what they teach us. The youth still follows them like sick lost puppies waiting for an answer. What they wear or what they do does not concern you. Are you so foolish? They play tricks on you to only distract you. To make you believe in things you don't want to. WAKE UP! The fire is all around you. Burning you alive as God tries to find a way to save you, but you don't want to be saved. You don't want to know Jesus' name. You want to remain the same and chase empty dreams of money and fame... all while forgetting your own purpose and changing your real name.

What really happened to us? How did we become so spiritually dead and so physically broken? Pride seems to rule our hearts while love hangs on for dear life. Black clouds cover our mind and instead of questioning the lies, we question the truth. We all feel love, we all feel hate. Our spirits know God and heart's crave faith, yet we lay so scattered and broken, longing for truth that was never spoken. We all bleed red blood. Good nor evil will change that. If I am so different from you, can you explain how? If I am bleeding wrong, how do you bleed? Do you crave the unseen, and wish to only be loved? All's we all want is to be truly loved, yet God is love... and so many reject God.

The air seems bitter on the brightest summer day, when you know the truth. There is something, much more, than this. The truth may scare you, but the truth will save you. It may not make sense, but once God is in you... You will see life for what it truly is.

That was freakin' awesome I think you are a little bit better at the rants and that was a ipebomb: Wow... Enjoyed that throughly

 

[Danielson]

Not saying the poems weren't good either at all. I just enjoyed the rant a little more. The last poem you posted was also great for me as well

 

[CM Punk]

Its how I say whats on my mind without offending people. So yeah, its like a venting tool. I just call it poetic ranting.
ity:tunga:

You wrote them when you were a teen?

 

[catlady]

That was freakin' awesome I think you are a little bit better at the rants and that was a ipebomb: Wow... Enjoyed that throughly

Haha thanks! I write these to vent.

Here's another one called "The Valley of the Ignorant"

Some seem so blinded by their own ignorance. They walk head held high, believing they have a purpose without believing in anything at all. Shame be to the man that cries, yet the man that never does; dies young. How is it that in a world so prim, popper and perfect do we act so inadequately imperfect? We all have our own demons, this is true, yet do our demons now have demons? This world seems over run by garbage and not the type you can bag. The filth is spread mainstream in papers, movies and music. Filth seems to spew from the mouths of the youth like an infectious, disgusting disease. Sure, sex sells, yes; but sex also gets a young girl pregnant. Thanks MTV, I got that memo.

Did anyone ever think that this world is in dire need of a savior? Afraid to leave the doors unlocked, the windows opened or to be out at night. We shelter ourselves as the sun sets and never look back. Fear seems to be our night time companion and the fear we have won't keep us warm. We fear death, disease but most of all... Each other. It seems as though we have an ignorance that has plateaued us all. If we are rich or poor, young or old... We all seem to lack real intelligence when it comes to how the mind works. Our eyes see things we may not want to see... Yet most of us choose to not turn away. We soak in all that we see. Our eyes, then, shock our hearts and our hearts can't make any sense of it. So its up to the mind. The same mind that mimics and replicates anything it soaks in just for better understanding. That's only when we're 5 years old. Did it ever dawn on anyone that the children end up the way they do for lack of parenting or day I say, ignorance? There is always room for mistakes and we all make them, but who's counting anyway? One mistake could get someone killed but that never stopped one from owning a gun, now has it? For as much fear as we hold in our back pockets, we sure have a lot of balls in our fronts, to doubt God.

So stand, head up a dark hole, and tell me what you see. It's hard to see anything with the blind leading the blind, now isn't it?

 

[Danielson]

I'm getting the vibe Britanica isn't a fan of the status quo. Her rant really gets to the core of human behavior

 

[catlady]

You wrote them when you were a teen?

No not the rants, just the poem that I said I did. The rants are from the last few years.