Any users write poetry?

[arianna]

Thank you and you should give it a try again.

Yes, I should. :

 

[catlady]

I write every now and then. I use to write poetry all the time.

 

[catlady]

This is the one I wrote to my husband.

So far gone yet so close to home,
I find a void essence in my heart.
It keeps me at peace when I am weak...
and always calms my soul.
I give it recognition when valid lies are up risen,
because sane is insanity.
Perfection may never rest on a humble bed as mine,
yet to me you are perfectly so.
Like the ever changing tides of the ocean,
my love, it grows, even in the vanquished ruin.
Through every waged war in my beating heart,
still I resonate with yours.
Though it may not always show, my heart is eternity grateful,
and my love... I am yours.
Keep peace in knowing, I am no where in going,
with out you by my side

 

[Danielson]

That's beautiful brit

 

[catlady]

That's beautiful brit

Aww thanks! tunga:

 

[Danielson]

Share more whenever you write again

 

[catlady]

Here's one more. This one is based on my beliefs of how the end will be for us all.

Fire flies fall from the skies creating a desolate atmosphere.
Gasoline lays way for the fires dismay and engulfs all that is everywhere.
Rivers run dry as the earth, she cries and all seems so lost and decayed.
Millions are dead and ones who live dread what is going to happen today.
Disease flocks as the ticking time bomb clocks how many hours remain.
Flesh seems cold in the desert so old nothing will ever be the same.
Wages of war have set the high score as hatred lays way to pain.
Yet they are decieved- the ones that lie, they believe and all hope is down the drain.
Going green is now in, love is of sin and money is what runs the world.
Duplicate ways seem to be okay in a place to chaotically bold.
The rich have power and they devour the poor like fire on wood.
Slavery is reintroduced as people hang bagged and noosed, no longer does this world rein good.
Piercing cries are heard from the ones who lie, "Why have you forsaken me!?".
Yet God is good, He does all that He should and loved you so to let you be.

I have a ton more I just don't know where they are. lol

 

[CM Punk]

I should write one. Don't know what to write about though.

 

[Danielson]

Here's one more. This one is based on my beliefs of how the end will be for us all.

Fire flies fall from the skies creating a desolate atmosphere.
Gasoline lays way for the fires dismay and engulfs all that is everywhere.
Rivers run dry as the earth, she cries and all seems so lost and decayed.
Millions are dead and ones who live dread what is going to happen today.
Disease flocks as the ticking time bomb clocks how many hours remain.
Flesh seems cold in the desert so old nothing will ever be the same.
Wages of war have set the high score as hatred lays way to pain.
Yet they are decieved- the ones that lie, they believe and all hope is down the drain.
Going green is now in, love is of sin and money is what runs the world.
Duplicate ways seem to be okay in a place to chaotically bold.
The rich have power and they devour the poor like fire on wood.
Slavery is reintroduced as people hang bagged and noosed, no longer does this world rein good.
Piercing cries are heard from the ones who lie, "Why have you forsaken me!?".
Yet God is good, He does all that He should and loved you so to let you be.

I have a ton more I just don't know where they are. lol

That was freaking awesome. I love the part about the rich having power and they devour the poor like fire on wood. That is true and I liked the metaphors used.

 

[Danielson]

I should write one. Don't know what to write about though.

Anything you are passionate about. Give it a try we won't judge you.

 

[catlady]

Here's an old one I wrote when I was 17ish. I actually found a ton of them. lol

I rewind sometimes in my empty mind
To feel pain release like unwinding time
And sometimes the fear is to hard to appose
Knowing this path was wrong that I chose
I take an ounce of this sinful pleasure
An essence of lies bound in rapture
It's like a shot of poisonous rain
That drips down my spine like immortal pain
I try to stand up to catch my fall
But I'm broken to pieces with no one to call
No one understands this pain that I'm feeling
And no one even knows how I'm dealing
To chase a lie with a shot of depression
Like saying I quit and I'm only guessing
No one will ever know the life that I'm living
Welcome to my world of true addiction

Wow, I made a lot of depressed sounding ones. LOL

 

[Danielson]

Here's an old one I wrote when I was 17ish. I actually found a ton of them. lol

I rewind sometimes in my empty mind
To feel pain release like unwinding time
And sometimes the fear is to hard to appose
Knowing this path was wrong that I chose
I take an ounce of this sinful pleasure
An essence of lies bound in rapture
It's like a shot of poisonous rain
That drips down my spine like immortal pain
I try to stand up to catch my fall
But I'm broken to pieces with no one to call
No one understands this pain that I'm feeling
And no one even knows how I'm dealing
To chase a lie with a shot of depression
Like saying I quit and I'm only guessing
No one will ever know the life that I'm living
Welcome to my world of true addiction

Wow, I made a lot of depressed sounding ones. LOL

I was going to say midway through that post that this chick was freakin' depressed. That one had some soul in it and my favorite thus far.

 

[catlady]

Here is one more.

Reborn

Darken the days of ruin have come to vanquish me.
Heart heavily beating, chains at my feet.
Conquering love and abolishing all hate with in.
I can’t win, I won’t win.
Darker the days of ruin break my path and stone my breast.
Heart barely beating, pain… a burden test.
Fire breaking bonds of an ever lasting love.
Cherish this, cherish it.
Dark the days are not, ruin somehow its defeat.
Vanquish me not from your soul or from your feet.
Take me now as I am and ever were
Darken the days of ruin have bestowed me.

 

[Danielson]

Here is one more.

Reborn

Darken the days of ruin have come to vanquish me.
Heart heavily beating, chains at my feet.
Conquering love and abolishing all hate with in.
I can’t win, I won’t win.
Darker the days of ruin break my path and stone my breast.
Heart barely beating, pain… a burden test.
Fire breaking bonds of an ever lasting love.
Cherish this, cherish it.
Dark the days are not, ruin somehow its defeat.
Vanquish me not from your soul or from your feet.
Take me now as I am and ever were
Darken the days of ruin have bestowed me.

I sense a lot of biblical undertones in your writings

 

[catlady]

I sense a lot of biblical undertones in your writings

Yeah that one was. tunga: