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Greetings all, this is my first BTB in 4 years so be gentle with me.

My aim with this is to operate under strict rules, and to not just have my own way with my dream roster. I'll be sticking to what the WWE already have and trying to make the best of it. Please don't expect to see Samoa Joe or Ultimate Warrior on my show. I want to see if I can do something different and better than the WWE creative staff, if I had the same roster and restrictions that they do.

Also, please note that I will NOT be putting pages and pages of detail into match descritptions. The way I see things, the booker's job is to craft the angle and the storytelling, but the wrestler's job is to convey that physically in the ring. I understand that most people will react badly to thing and will no doubt leave comments advising me to add more detail to the matches, but this is not something I plan on doing. Thanks for reading and enjoy.


HELL IN A CELL
Jack Swagger pinned Kofi Kingston to win the U.S. Championship
Chris Jericho & The Big Show retained the Unified Tag Team Championship
Legacy defeated D-Generation X
John Cena pinned Randy Orton to retain the WWE Championship

AFter the HELL IN A CELL Pay Per View, no further announcements are made about Guest GM's.

Episode One
John Cena kicks off Monday Night Raw telling everyone that "The Champ Is Here!" Cena holds up the championship belt and says that there is nowhere in the world he'd rather be than right here on Raw as the WWE Champion! Cena's celebration gets interrupted by Chris Jericho & The Big Show.

The two men strut down to the ring in their designer suits, ignoring the negative fan reaction. Jericho tells Cena that whilst he may be the top dog on Raw, they are the Unified Champions of the entire wrestling WORLD! Jericho tells Cena and everyone else that they are The Masters Of The Universe! Jericho gets in Cena's face and says that anytime he wants he can destroy Cena, just...like...that! Cena slaps Jericho across the face! A brawl erupts but is quickly finished as The Big Show clobbers Cena to the canvas! John Cena is at the mercy of the Tag Team Champions!

But here comes Mark Henry! Mark Henry charges towards the ring and makes the save! Henry knocks Jericho on his ass, and then starts trading blows with The Big Show! Henry gets the better of Show, clotheslining him over the top rope! The frustrated Tag Team Champions storm away from the ring as Mark Henry helps Cena to his feet.

Jamie Noble Vs Chavo Guerrero
These two get 15 minutes to show what they can do. After vying for position they chain-wrestle to the delight of the fans. Chavo attempts a Tornato DDT, but Jamie breaks free and turns it into a Northern Lights Suplex. Chavo kicks out at two and scores with a Brainbuster to get the three count.
Winner - Chavo Guerrero via pinfall

Backstage:- Chris Jericho and The Big Show storm into the General Manager's officer to come face-to-face with...Mr. McMahon! Jericho demands to see the GM, and Vince informs him that anything he wants to say, he can say to Vince. Jericho says that Raw is a chaotic shambles! Jericho says that as the premier superstars of the WWE Universe, they need a General Manager week-in and week-out to cater to their every need. Mr. McMahon says that NOBODY makes demands of him! Not only will they face John Cena and Mark Henry in tonight's main event...but the Unified Tag Team Titles will be on the line!

Carlito Vs Festus
Carlito spends the early parts of the match avoiding the big-man, dodging his long reach and nailing him with quick shots. Carlito goes for the Backstabber early on, but Festus counters with a huge elbow to the face! In the middle of the match, Cody Rhodes and Ted DiBiase walk out onto the stage and watch the match. Carlito comes off the ropes and hits Festus with clotheslines and forearms again and again. Festus then hits the ropes and nails Carlito with a Running Big Boot straight to the face! Festus gets the upset on Carlito! The Legacy shake their heads and leave the stage.
Winner - Festus via pinfall

Divas Championship
Mickie James(c) Vs Maryse
This match barely gets underway when Chris Masters bursts into the ring and attacks both women! Masters hurls Maryse into the turnbuckle and then locks Mickie James in the Masterlock! The fans boo him out of the building as he wrenches the helpless Diva in the deadly hold! A team of WWE Officials and Referees hit the ring and try to break the Masterlock! Mr. McMahon comes down to the ring and pleads with Chris Masters to break the hold. Eventually Masters complies and drops the lifeless Mickie to the canvas, before being escorted from the ring by an army of WWE Officials.

The NEW United States Champion Jack Swagger brings his All-American Title Celebration to Monday Night Raw! A marching band plays the champion to the ring as red, white and blue streamers and balloons descend from the rafters! Swagger tells the Raw audience that the All-American American is now the United States Champion! From Alaska to Texas, from L.A. to New York he is the wrestling champion of the greatest nation in the world! Swagger's celebration is rudely interrupted by The Miz, who demands a title shot.

The Miz argues that in Sunday's Pay Per View he wasn't pinned and he didn't submit, so he is owed a shot at the U.S. Championship. This comment brings out Kofi Kingston to a big crowd reaction from his fans. Kofi congratulates Jack Swagger for beating him, but says he has a re-match clause in his contract and he wants a re-match! Swagger tells his challengers that Raw's got no General Manager, and he won't be defending his championship unless he is ordered to by someone in charge. The Miz tries to grab the belt from out of Swagger's hands, leading to a brawl between all three men.

Main Event - Unified Tag Team Championship
Chris Jericho & The Big Show(c) Vs John Cena & Mark Henry
Jericho slaps Cena across the face to kick-start Raw's main event. The two men trade hip-tosses and dropkicks until Cena slaps on a headlock, walks to his corner and tags in Mark Henry. Henry throws Jericho into the corner and batters him with huge forearms and right hands. Henry dominates Jericho until Big Show gets into the fray and throws Henry out of the ring! Cena and Big Show go at it, trading blows, Cena attempts the Attitude Adjustment but Jericho leaps up and hits the Codebreaker! The Big Show gozzles Cena on the canvas and delivers a devastating Chokeslam!
Winners - Chris Jericho & The Big Show via pinfall

The Unified Tag Team Champions celebrate their victory as Monday Night Raw comes to an end.
 

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Dirt Sheet

wwe.com has announced that following his victory over John Cena on Monday night, The Big Show has been named #1 Contender to the WWE Championship. But wwe.com also has an article up highlighting that The Big Show was not the legal man when he pinned John Cena.

Mickie James suffered an injured collarbone at the hands of Chris Masters Masterlock on Raw, and will be out of action for the time being.

Raw Preview
Last week the self-procalaimed "Masters of the Universe" proved their dominance by defeating John Cena and Mark Henry. This week Mark Henry has challenged either member of the Unified Tag Team Champions to face him one-on-one in the ring!

And with The Big Show being named the new #1 Contender to the WWE Championship, what reaction with John Cena have for the World's Largest Athlete?

United States Champion Jack Swagger has announced that his All-American Title Celebration will continue this week on Raw, as he takes on a former U.S. Champion from the past.
 

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Episode Two

Mr. McMahon kicks off the show, walking to the ring as only a McMahon can walk. The Chairman says that in three weeks time the WWE will present a brand new event in sports entertainment...BRAGGING RIGHTS. Mr. McMahon says that Bragging Rights will feature Tri-Branded wrestling matches, pitting the best of Raw against the best of ECW and the best of Smackdown. Furthermore, the WWE Universe will get to vote on stipulations for the event. Mr. McMahon announces that the first match to be signed for Bragging Rights will see Chavo Guerrero, The Hurricane and Rey Mysterio take each other to the very limit!

Primo Vs Evan Bourne
After the match starts, Legacy come out from the back and join the commentary team, explaining that they have an interest in Primo. Primo controls the action and nearly wins it with a Springboard Dropkick early on. Evan Bourne catapults Primo into the corner and follows up with a brutal corner-dropkick. Evan climbs to the top rope and flies off with his Shooting Star Press...but Primo rolls out of the way! Evan hits nothing but canvas! Primo leaps up the turnbuckle and hits a Diving Headbutt directly to Evan Bourne's skull! As the referee makes the three-count, Legacy give Primo a standing ovation.
Winner - Primo

Backstage:- Mr. McMahon's office is full of angry Divas demanding to speak to the General Manager. The Divas are angry about Chris Masters attack on Maryse and Mickie James last week, and want to know what's going to be done about it. Mr. McMahon says that the situation will be dealt with.

Jack Swagger's All-American Title Celebration continues on Raw, as the United States Champion challenges a former US Champion to a special exhibition match...HOOOOOOOO! Out comes "Hacksaw" Jim Duggan! Duggan marches to the ring to a huge ovation from the fans! He waves Old Glory back and forth in the ring, then aims his 2x4 at Swagger like a rifle!

Jack Swagger Vs "Hacksaw" Jim Duggan
Duggan asks for a Test of Strength and over-powers Swagger, forcing him down onto one knee and then knocking him over! Swagger charges at Duggan but runs into a brick-wall and can't move him! Swagger hits the ropes and charges again, this time Duggan nails him with a clothesline! "Hacksaw" yells out "Hooooo!" to the fans and gets into a three-point stance for his football tackle...but Jack Swagger kicks him straight in the face! Swagger executes a German suplex and then hits the Gutwrench Powerbomb!
Winner - Jack Swagger

After the match as Jack celebrates, The Miz comes out onto the stage. He says that while Swagger might be great at beating up has-beens like Duggan, but when it comes to a real man, when it comes to the future of the WWE, Swagger has no chance against The Miz! Swagger says that if The Miz has a problem, he should take it up with the General Manager...and then starts laughing.

MVP Vs Chavo Guerrero
These two superstars get 20 minutes to display their fine abilities. Chavo hits the Three Amigos and draws "Eddie" chants from the fans. MVP whips Chavo into the corner and then charges in with a running big-boot to the face! MVP goes through the routines of Ballin', only for Chavo to kick up to his feet and drill MVP with another German Suplex! Chavo climbs the turnbuckle and signals for the Frog Splash, but MVP dives into the ropes and crotches him. Chavo recovers in time to trade blows with Porter, and lifts him up for a Brainbuster, but MVP kicks his feet and regains leverage to land on the canvas. MVP then quickly hits the Playmaker!
Winner - MVP

Kofi Kingston Vs Chris Masters
Masters attacks Kofi before the bell even rings! He attacks Kingston from behind and locks him in the Masterlock! Chris Masters wrenches on the hold, swinging Kofi from left to right! The referee tries to get involved physically, but is unable to break the hold! The bell is rung repeatedly, but Chris Masters keeps the hold locked on tight! Kofi Kingston screams in pain! The referee pulls and pulls on Masters' arm! Masters released the hold, but then turns to the referee and locks him in the Masterlock! WWE Officials and referees rush to the ring and surround Chris Masters! Masters releases the referee and is dragged out of the ring by security. As Masters is dragged away, Mr. McMahon comes out onto the stage and tells him that he is suspended!
No Contest

A Video Promo airs highlight Chris Jericho and The Big Show, dominating all three brands of the WWE.

Following the video package, the Unified Tag Team Champions strut down to the ring. Chris Jericho announces that not only are they the only champions of all three brands of the WWE Universe, but now The Big Show, the World's Largest Athlete, is the #1 Contender!

Mark Henry interrupts Jericho's bragging and says that he is here to flatten whoever gets in his way! Henry says that 7 days ago he challenged one of them to man-up and face the World's Strongest Man, and right now it's Go Time! Henry storms towards the ring and The Big Show charges out to battle him on the ramp! The two huge wrestlers trade blows! Henry rams The Big Show into the guardrail and starts hammering him with forearms! The Big Show sends Henry crashing into the steel ring steps and then sends him into the ring.

Main Event
Mark Henry Vs Chris Jericho
Like a vulture Jericho kicks and stomps down on the huge man while he's on the canvas! Jericho comes off the second rope with an elbow drop and goes for the quick-cover, but Henry powers out of the press with authority! Henry whips Jericho into the corner and then charges in with a crushing Avalanche! Henry delivers a Belly-to-Belly Suplex, driving Jericho into the canvas! Henry attempts goes to the ropes for a Running Splash, but gets tripped by The Big Show and lands flat on his face. Jericho hits the Lionsault! He has trouble turning Mark Henry over onto his back for the cover, and when he does Henry manages to kick out! Jericho goes for the Codebreaker, but Mark Henry catches him and turns it into the World's Strongest Slam! The Big Show climbs into the ring as Mark Henry makes the cover...
Winner - Mark Henry

The Big Show attacks Mark Henry straight away, stomping him to the ground and then locking on the Colossal Clutch. Jericho recovers enough to hit a dropkick to Henry's face while he's locked in the hold! Jericho grabs the tag team title belt and readies to nail Henry with it...but John Cena makes the save! Cena hammers Jericho and takes him out with the Attitude Adjuster! The Big Show hauls Jericho out of the ring and stares down the WWE Champion as Raw comes to an end.
 

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I actually like this format better. Although it's not as detailed, it's easier to read. So that's a plus for me. As for the show....

Episode 1: I liked that Legacy was out to scout Carlito's match. It fore-shadows that they are looking for recruits. I comepletely forgot that Fetus was even on RAW.

What I didn't like was what you did with McMahon. You made him seem like he was the big man when Jericho and Show confronted him in the office, but later during the divas match he "Mr. McMahon comes down to the ring and pleads with Chris Masters to break the hold". He went from big boss man standing up to Jeri-Show, to "pleading" with the lesser guy Masters.

Episode 2:

Legacy makes another appearance but this time is Primo. I don't think they should have actually been on commentary, they should have just sat there. Let the fans try and think about what Legacy are doing, rather than coming out and telling everyone what they are doing.

Are you a Swagger fan. He's the only one that gets any color. And lol @ the Red, white, and blue that you're giving him. Well red, yellow, and blue.

Why did McMahon give Masters a match if he was going to suspend him? Couldn't he have done that last week? You kinda made Kingston look like a joke and apparently an after thought to the US title picture. That seems to be all about Swagger/Miz now.

But still, it was a good read.
 

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wwe.com announces the main event for BRAGGING RIGHTS - John Cena Vs Christian Vs CM Punk. The WWE Universe will be able to vote on whether the WWE, ECW or World Heavyweight Championship will be on the line.

The website also has an interview with Kofi Kingston about the attack he suffered from Chris Masters. The former US Champion says that Masters didn't have the guts to look him in the eyes and wrestle him, so he took the cheap way out. Kofi told the WWE Universe that he'd take Chris Masters on for real, anytime, anywhere.

Raw Preview
The WWE is hurtling towards the first ever Tri-Brand competition, and it all starts on Monday Night Raw! The full card for BRAGGING RIGHTS will be unveiled, and the World Heavyweight Champion CM Punk will be in attendence!

Jack Swagger's All-American Title Celebration will continue Monday night as the United States Champion will challenge Santino Marella in a Raise The Flag Match.

Ted DiBiase and Cody Rhodes will be in tag team action as Legacy take on MVP and Primo.

And the Main Event of Raw has been signed by Mr. McMahon himself as Chris Jericho attempting to assert his dominance over WWE Champion John Cena!
 

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Episode Three

Michael Cole and Jerry Lawler welcome us to the show and run-down the newly announced matches for BRAGGING RIGHTS.


Each brand's respectice champion will face off in a Triple Threat Match as John Cena, Christian and CM Punk will headline the Pay Per View. The WWE Universe will get to vote for which championship will be on the line in the Main Event.

Chris Jericho & The Big Show, the self-proclaimed 'Masters of The Universe will defend the Unified Tag Team Championship against ECW's team of Ezekiel Jackson & Vladimir Kozlov.

United States Champion Jack Swagger and Intercontinental Champion John Morrison will be involved in a Double Jeapordy Match against a member of the ECW Roster. In this match-up both championship belts will be on the line, and if either champion is pinned then they will lose their title. The WWE Universe will get to vote on which ECW Superstar gets this fantastic opportunity, where they'll have everything to gain and nothing to lose!

In what is sure to be a Match Of The Year Contender, Chavo Guerrero will defend Raw's honor, The Hurricane will fight for ECW and Rey Mysterio will represent Smackdown in a Triple Threat Match for Bragging Rights!

The WWE Universe will then get to decide how extreme and bloody they like their action, as Mark Henry, Tommy Dreamer and Batista go to war! Votes will determine whether this will be a First Blood Match or an Extreme Rules bout!

Raw's MVP will take on ECW's Ripper Paul Birchall and Mr. McMahon's latest signing Drew McIntyre in three-way action.

And the battle for the future of the WWE will commence between The Miz, Zach Ryder and Dolph Ziggler in what will either be a Steel Cage Match or a Ladder Match, as voted for by the WWE Universe!​


After the Pay Per View card is announced, CM Punk's music plays and the World Heavyweight Champion starts off Raw to a thunderous chorus of boos from the crowd. CM Punk says that the Raw fans are weak. Weak in mind and weak in body. Punk says they lack what it takes to be Straight Edge. They lack what it takes to master Muay Thai, or to become the World Heavyweight Champion. CM Punk says that the Raw fans lack the drive and the dedication to do anything with their lives, which is why they cling to somebody like John Cena. Punk says that the Raw fans are leeches...and this brings out Cena!

John Cena storms down to the ring and gets in Punk's face! Cena says that nobody...Nobody!...insults the Raw fans! Cena reminds Punk that these fans built the WWE Universe! Cena reminds Punk that these fans are the reason the two of them have jobs, and get to do what they love for a living! And on his show, nobody is allowed to insult them! Cena says that Raw might not have a General Manager, but he will throw Punk off the show if he has to! Punk pulls out a front-row ticket and tells Cena that he's here to enjoy the show.

Carlito Vs Kofi Kingston
Kofi contols the action from the bell, whipping Carlito into the ropes and flooring him with a series of leg-lariats. Carlito proves to be the stronger of the two and slows the pace down with a front-facelock and then a reverse-hammerlock. Whilst in the reverse-hammerlock, Kofi leaps up and kicks off the second turnbuckle, driving Carlito into the canvas for a quick 2-count! Cody Rhodes and Ted DiBiase are seen walking out onto the stage to watch this bout. Carlito hits a dangerous looking DDT, but Kofi kicks out. Carlito looks for the Backstabber...but Kofi has the move scouted and dodges the attack, spinning around and hitting the Trouble In Paradise! Legacy have a conference with each other on the Raw stage as Carlito is pinned.
Winner - Kofi Kingston

Backstage:- Jack Swagger is in Mr. McMahon's office, complaining about the Double Jeapordy Match at BRAGGING RIGHTS. Swagger says that McMahon could be handing the United States Championship to Smackdown! Or to ECW! McMahon says that would be great for business, and fans would tune in to see Shelton Benjamin as the US Champion. Or maybe to see William Regal with his European hands on the gold. Or...better yet...John Morrison as both the Intercontinenal AND United States Champion! Mr. McMahon says the ratings would be through the roof! Jack Swagger storms out of the office.

Chavo Guerrero Vs Evan Bourne
The two lightweights trade hip-tosses and dropkicks in the early goings. Evan scores with a springboard Enzuigiri to get a very close, near-fall! That shot looks to have woken Chavo up, as he nails Evan with a stiff European Uppercut! Chavo traps Bourne in the corner and punnishes him with quick blows to the body. Chavo starts off the Three Amigos, the rolling suplexes, but instead of a third suplex he finishes off with a brutal looking Brainbuster!
Winner - Chavo Guerrero

Primo & MVP Vs Legacy
MVP and Ted DiBiase start off, vying for leverage and position with a collar-and-elbow tie-up. MVP sends DiBiase into the ropes and clens his clock with a running boot to the face! MVP tries to capitalize but Cody Rhodes nails him with a closed fist to the back of the head! MVP staggers forwards and walks straight into a roll-up! Legacy nealy steal the win with a near-fall! Legacy keep MVP in their corner and wear him down with quick tags and hard shots. Cody goes for the Cross Rhodes, but MVP connects with a huge knee to the face! MVP crawls across the ring, looking for the hot tag! Primo is on the ring apron...but he's not reaching into the ring, he's not stretching his arm out for the tag. DiBiase elbows drops MVP before the tag can be made and drags him back to the Legacy corner. Rhodes and DiBiase continue to double-team MVP with their quick tagging, until Porter gets a second-wind and floors both men with huge clotheslines! MVP staggers across the ring to his partner...but Primo is distracted by someone in the front row! MVP wants to make the tag but Primo is looking in the opposite direction! DiBiase locks on the Million Dollar Dream and then nails the Dream Street!
Winners - Legacy

After the match MVP confronts Primo and the two men have words in the ring, as Legacy walk backwards up the ramp, keeping a watchful eye on events.

Michael Cole gives us an update on Mickie James, and they roll the footage of the savage attack from Chris Masters two weeks ago. Cole says that Mickie's collarbone is still injured, but she will be returning next week to work as an Interviewer for Raw. Chris Masters is still suspended.

Jack Swaggers All-American Title Celebration continues as the United States Champion comes down the ring with the American flag. There are flagpoles attached to opposide ring-posts, and Swagger explains that the first man to raise his country's flag will win.

Raise The Flag Match
Jack Swagger Vs Santino Marella
Despite being the foriegner in this situation, Marella gets a great fan reaction, much to the chargrin of Swagger. Swagger grabs a microphone and tries to start a "USA!" chant, but the Raw fans ignore him. Marella grabs the microphone and succeeds in getting the Raw crowd chanting "IT-AL-LY! IT-TAL-LY!" Swagger hits him with the microphone and proceeds to beat him down!

The fans boo louldy as Swagger punishes Marella with powerful knees and boots to the body! Marella reverse an Irish Whip and clotheslines Swagger! The crowd cheer as Santino fights back! Santino throws Swagger out of the ring and then tries to send the Italian flag up the flagpole...but Swagger grabs his boots and trips him up. Swagger locks Santino in the Abodominal Stretch, and then reaches back with his free hand to pull the cord and raise Old Glory! Santino powers out of the hold with a hip-toss before the flag is fully raised! Santino rams Swagger's head into the flag-pole! The Raw fans love that! Santino is nearly successful in raising the Italian flag, but Swagger hits him with a German Suplex from behind!

Swagger rips the Italian flagpole off the ring post and beats Merella with it! He tears the Italian flag from the pole, wraps it around Santino's neck and chokes him unconscious! Jack Swagger then saunters over to the corner and fully raises the U.S. flag.
Winner - Jack Swagger

Michael Cole announces that the Unified Tag Team Champions Chris Jericho & The Big Show will be on ECW On SyFy tomorrow night to confront their opponents at BRAGGING RIGHTS.

Main Event
John Cena Vs Chris Jericho
Jericho comes to the ring accompanied by his tag team partner, and the #1 Contender for the WWE Championship, The Big Show. When Cena makes his entrance he walks around the ring and stares down CM Punk, who is sat in the front row. Jericho calls for a test of strength to start with, but Cena wins this and forces Jericho onto his knees. Jericho struggles to get one hand free and then pokes Cena in the eyes! Jericho grabs a headlock and wrenches on it, before delivering a Bulldog.

Jericho looks set for the Walls Of Jericho, but Cena kicks him off and floors him with a running, leaping shoulder-block! Cena grabs Jericho's head and rams him into all four turnbuckles! The Champ tries the Attitude Adjustment, but Jericho gets free and hits a half-nelson suplex! Jericho springboards off the ropes with the Lionsault...but Cena gets his knees up to block the move! Cena pulls Jericho up for the Attitude Adjustment, but CM Punk jumps the guard-rail! CM Punk is up on the ring apron, taunting Cena! Cena drops Jericho and knocks Punk off the guard-rail...but as he turns around Jericho nails him with the Codebreaker! Chris Jericho gets the three-count!
Winner - Chris Jericho

As the referee raises Jericho's arm in victory, CM Punk smirks as only he can, and Michael Cole says that the first shot has been fired in this war for BRAGGING RIGHTS!
 

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Breaking Point is shaping up to be a good ppv.

Your Cena promo was spot on. His exchange with Punk was pretty good, promo of the night.

I'm glad that you didn't just drop Legacy checking on Carlito. His 1st loss shouldn't have rendered him out of the group, but 2 losses aint looking too good. As for Primo, with his in-ring style, I can't really see him as a heel. If you're going down that route, it should be interesting.

I hope that others will vote too when you have the Bragging Rights voting poll open.
 

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I personally think that you should write out promos, matches if you don't want to do them and they drag with the same outline it's fine everyone has their own style but when you run down the card you can still have Cole talk and Lawler talk in quotation marks instead of that being recapped as well. You have a two hour Raw show and with it all recaped into minimal typing, the show looks like a half an hour show.

Cena and Punk were decent, it is hard to review this and comment on something when it is a short overview of the promo and recpaped. You don't have to post a show every few days like you did, I suggest taking your time and making it out in full for promos such as those but I guess that promo was decent, it did serve a purpose to get Cena and Punk to go at it in a battle of words. I hope that Punk inifies the titles seeing as you have both champions on Raw.

Carlito and Kingston was alright, it could have shown more of Kingstons high flying maneuvers and being a dominant mid carder. Though I guess it was an alright filler.

It seems you are pushing Swagger much, I like this. I personally think that he has a young Kurt Angle in him and a very bright future ahead of him if booked properly.

I applaud you for doing something with Chavo Guerrero, heck he could also be in legacy if you wanted him to- Chavo is a great wrestler and a third generation one for that matter and he does deserve better then what the wwe is doing with him currently.

Primo & MVP? seems like a bit of a random thrown together team on the spur of the moment...

Punk taking on Cena would be great, next week it should be Punk & Jericho taking on Cena & Henry that would be something nice to have as a main event.

You should think about using italics, bolding, coloring, fonts it makes it much easier on the eyes.

Good luck with your thread, 4.5/10 ... keep at it and keep going don't give up.
 

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Although I won't be covering ECW and Smackdown, I will be re-capping events on those brands which effect Raw. Obviously, with Bragging Rights coming up, that will be more than normal.
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ECW On SyFy
The show opens up with Chris Jericho and The Big Show, the self-proclaimed 'Masters Of The Universe', strutting to the ring in their designer suits, carrying the WWE and World Tag Team Championship belts.

Jericho: "Ladies and gentlemen, you are in the presence of REAL champions! I know that you're not used to it on this show, but tonight you have some true Superstars. We are the Masters Of The Universe! We are the Unified Champions of the WWE! And we are the most dominant force on Raw, Smackdown and ECW!"

This brings out the combined union of William Regal, Vladimir Kozlov and Ezekiel Jackson. The three men gather on the ECW stage as Regal raises a microphone.

Regal: "Gentlemen, allow me to welcome you...to our show. Furthermore, let me introduce you to your opponents for Bragging Rights, and the next Unified Tag Team Champions, my esteemed colleagues Mr. Kozlov and Mr. Jackson!"

Jericho: "Regal, you and your international nobodies might be the top dogs on ECW...but we have been ruling the WWE for over a decade! Between us we have held 44 championship titles! And tonight, any one of you who wants to test us....can face....the Big Show!"

Regal: "Not only will I face that gargantuan ruffian, but I'll beat him, and prove to the WWE Universe why I, William Regal, should be in that Double Jeapordy match at Bragging Rights!"

William Regal Vs The Big Show
Regal is accompanied to the ring by his Roundtable, and Jericho stands in The Big Show's corner. The Englishman avoids the huge man's reach and employs a hit-and-run tactic, nailling The Big Show with blows to the kidneys and back. Regal climbs to the second turnbuckle to get enough height to grab a headlock on The Big Show. Regal tries to force Show to his knees, but the World's Largest Athlete crushes him with a back-suplex!

The Big Show grabs Regal by the throat and lifts him up for a Chokeslam, but Regal gets free and drops down to kick Show's legs out from under him. Regal kicks and stomps on Big Show, dropping knees down to his face and then locking on an armbar. The Big Show powers out of the hold, getting to his feet, whipping Regal into the ropes and then clobbering him with a huge clothesline!

Ezekial Jackson slides into the ring and stands between Big Show and Regal! The referee starts yelling at Jackson to get out of the ring, as Vladimir Kozlov sneaks in behind and delivers a quick series of headbutts to the Big Show's back! Jericho gets in the ring and starts brawling with Kozlov! Ezekial Jackson grabs The Big Show, but Show hurls him out of the ring! Regal pulls a pair of brass-knuckles from his tights and nails The Big Show in the back of the head! Regal covers the Show, folding his legs up to his chest and gets his feet on the middle-rope for leverage!
Winner - William Regal

The Ruthless Roundtable quickly make their way up the ramp, raising Regal's arm in victory!
 

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wwe.com has an interview up with one-half of the Unified Tag Team Champions Chris Jericho, where he talks about pinning John Cena.

"I beat him one-on-one. I pinned him one, two, three. The Big Show did the same thing and became the #1 Contender. So as far as I'm concerned, I'm the #1 Contender as well. We both are. That's fair."

And Smackdown General Manager Theadore Long has announced that John Cena has been granted a One Night Contract for this week's Friday Night Smackdown! What response will the WWE Champion have for CM Punk after his interference on Monday Night Raw?
 

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A re-cap of Raw's involvement in Friday Night Smackdown

Friday Night Smackdown!
WWE Champion John Cena kicks off Smackdown, walking down to the ring with the championship belt around his waist.

Cena: The Champ! Is! On Smackdown! And damn it feels good to be back! Back on the show where I first started! The show where I got my first match in the WWE! The show where I become the United States Champion! And the show where I first became the WWE Champion! Now thanks to Teddy Long, I have a special One Night Contract and I'm here for one reason. C...M...Punk! Punk likes to play games, he likes to sit on the sidelines and get in other people's business. Now me? I don't play games. I'm a straight-up soldier. When I got a problem with someone I go straight at them. So tonight, with my One Night Contract, I want CM Punk's ass in this ring!"

As soon as this challenge is extended, the World Heavyweight Champion walks out onto the Smackdown stage.

CM Punk: "You're just like everyone else in this arena, John. Always looking for an excuse for your failures. Always blaming something or someone else for your weaknesses. And you are weak, John. I can see it in your eyes. On Monday Night you lost to Smackdown Superstar Chris Jericho, tonight you're gonna find out why Smackdown is the #1 brand, and why CM Punk is the World Heavyweight Champion!"

Later in the show...

Mid-way through the show, Chris Jericho and The Big Show, the self-proclaimed 'Masters Of The Universe' come to the ring in their designer suits, carrying the Unified Tag Team Championship belts.

Jericho: "Once again we have decided to grace Smackdown with our presence. We don't have to be here. We spent Monday night on Raw, Tuesday night on ECW, and now we're here on Smackdown! We are the hardest working Superstars in the WWE. The ONLY Tri-Brand Champions in WWE history!"

Jericho's bragging gets interrupted by Smackdown General Manager Theodore Long! Teddy walks out onto the stage to make an announcement.

Long: "Well playas, it sure is good to have the Unified Tag Team Champions on Smackdown. And since you're already here tonight, I have an announcement for ya. There is going to be a change to the tag team title match at BRAGGING RIGHTS."

Jericho turns to The Big Show and asks his partner what's going on?

Long: "So far, we got a team from ECW, and we a team comprised of The Big Show from Raw, and Chris Jericho from right here on Smackdown. Well, me and Mr. McMahon put our heads together and decided that there should be a third team in that title match. A team that is part-Smackdown, and part-ECW. A team that are former Tag Team Champions. A team that some people call...The World's Greatest Tag Team!"

Shelton Benjamin and Charlie Haas step onto the Smackdown stage! Chris Jericho is steaming mad and The Big Show snarls as Haas and Bejamin shake hands with Theodore Long!

Later in the show...

Main Event
CM Punk Vs John Cena
The fans are hot for this one! Punk and Cena lock up and Punk drills a knee into Cena's gut! Punk throws more knees into John Cena before whipping him into the ropes. Cena comes out with a shoulder-barge that knocks Punk on his back! Cena grabs Punk by the hair and nails him with a series of hard right hands. Cena back Punk into the corner, but the World Heavyweight Champ turns things around with vicious knife-edge chops! The crowd chimes in with their "Wooos!" as the two champions trade shots back and forth.

Duing the match Chris Jericho and The Big Show come walking down the ramp in their wrestling attire. Cena lands some big suplexes but Punk fights back with his Muay Thai strikes. Cena charges the ropes, but The Big Show pulls down the top rope and Cena falls out of the ring! The Big Show holds Cena up and Jericho nails him with a Superkick! The referee calls for the bell!
Winner - John Cena via Disqualification

Theodore Long comes out onto the stage and orders everyone to stop brawling!

Long: "Oh no playas, oh no! This is not how the show is going to end! Big Show! Jericho! You want to get involved in this match? Well then how about we make this a 6 Man Tag Team Match!"

Shelton Benjamin and Charlie Haas come sprinting down the ramp from the back and join Cena in the ring!

John Cena & The World's Greatest Tag Team Vs CM Punk, Chris Jericho & The Big Show
Cena gets to rest up on the ring apron while Haas and Benjamin take it to The Big Show. They use quick tags to try and wear the big man down. Jericho comes in to even things up and the four men ignore the referee and brawl. Amongst the chaos, CM Punk attacks Cena from behind and hauls him up for the GTS...but Cena gets free and nails Punk with the Attitude Adjustment to get the three-count!
Winner - John Cena via pinfall

Cena celebrates his victory in the ring, but as he turns to the stage he sees Christian standing there with the ECW Championship, staring him down!
 

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wwe.com has an article up on the General Manager of Raw. The article re-caps Eric Bischoff, Steve Austin and Stephanie McMahon's times as General Manager, as well as the run of 'Guest Hosts'. The article also quotes Mr. McMahon on the subject of a General Manager for Raw.

"Both myself and the Board Of Directors recognise the need for a General Manager on Monday Night Raw. If you view The Rise And Fall Of WCW DVD, it's easy to see what happens when the inmates start running the asylum. I'm consulting with the Board Of Directors to make the best possible business decision for Raw."


The website also reported that a landmark deal has been struck between ECW, Raw and Smackdown. According to wwe.com, every edition of Monday Night Raw and Friday Night Smackdown will now feature an ECW Export Match, showcasing a match between Superstars from the ECW roster. This deal will allow ECW to reach a larger audience twice a week.

Look out for the first ECW Export Match this Monday night on Raw.
 

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The hype for the ppv has been pretty good thus far. You should add in some crowd reactions. The annoucement of the Worlds Greatest tag team seemed like they would faces. With Teddy annoucing them and there already being 2 heel tag teams in the match. But since you're started your btb from where WWE was, then Teddy would be a heel. So I was confused about that.
 

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Monday Night Raw Preview

In seven days time the WWE will explode in the first ever Tri-Brand competition, BRAGGING RIGHTS! Last week World Heavyweight Champion CM Punk and WWE Champion John Cena, traded blows on both Raw and Smackdown! This Monday night, ECW Champion Christian will be in attendence and he has promised to deliver a message to his opponents at BRAGGING RIGHTS!

This week's Raw will also play host to the very first ECW Xport Match as Yoshi Tatsu and Sheamus go one-on-one to try and convince the WWE Universe to vote for them in the upcoming Double Jeapordy Match Sunday night!

After last week's miscommunication in tag team action between MVP and Primo, the two men will look to settle their difference inside the ring. And the question the WWE Universe is asking; will Legacy play a role?

Four weeks ago the WWE Divas Champion Mickie James suffered a devastating injury at the hands of unhinged Raw Superstar Chris Masters. Monday night Mickie will return from injury to host her own talk-show All The Right Moves.

And Raw's main event will see WWE Champion John Cena face off against Chavo Guerrero.
 

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I like this. I agree with you about the pages of detail. I think that Be The Booker means more making up angles then who can write a match better than whom.

I'm currently, reading the first show, and I love the opening angle with Cena and the Unified Tag Champs.

I'll have a full review up soon.