I really need help to decrease my writing amount, but keep like the same content in it. A lot of people have told me to decrease how much I write for a show, and thats what I'm doing in my next. Rather than:
"Rikishi takes the blow, and bends his knee, showing his pain through his face, as the crowd applauds the attacker. Samoa Joe backs up into the ropes, and bounces off, with the crowd chanting his name now. Montel nails a diving elbow connecting with Rikishi's forehead."
I'll put this:
"Montel delivers a swift kick to the thigh of Rikishi, as he follows up by running to the ropes, and using the momentum to connect with a diving elbow.".
Any tips in shortening the show, I'm not going to say this:
"Some chain wrestling starts out as Rikishi, and Montel swap control of holds, and eventually see each other in a sidehead lock situation with Porter in control."