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Yeah...I thought he looked....A LOT like Finn Balor when I saw the image...No, like all he needs is the leather jacket and pastier skin and he is Finn Balor.

Honestly...you should try to change more to make him your own. Just changing a few words doesn't make him your own, it isn't anything unique. There is nothing wrong with taking inspiration, but there is a line where it goes from taking "inspiration" and then copying and with the similar attire and appearance, I think that is being on the lines of copying. Quite literally almost the same attire, face painted alter-ego with a name relating to the supernatural, beard, short hair. I'm not trying to be harsh, but I think you need to make a fair bit of changes to make him your own.

Edit: And I get it, these days almost nothing is original and it isn't easy making a good character, but still...just a bit too much like Finn Balor...

Yeah, I'll think of something else for an attire & gimmick (At least I got the curly mustache and matching goatee going on) Thanks for your honesty bud!
 

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Yeah, I'll think of something else for an attire & gimmick (At least I got the curly mustache and matching goatee going on) Thanks for your honesty bud!

I say keep the face if ya want...the Moustache is very fancy.

But change the attire up more and think of a new gimmick.
 

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UPDATE ON MY CAW:

I Introduce to you the "Modern Day Gentleman" William McCoy!

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I believe that it is quite an improvement from my last design, plus he has a gimmick now that is sorta kinda unique. So there's that. What do you guys think?
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UPDATE ON MY CAW:

I Introduce to you the "Modern Day Gentleman" William McCoy!

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I believe that it is quite an improvement from my last design, plus he has a gimmick now that is sorta kinda unique. So there's that. What do you guys think?
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I'm bored so why not randomly give you pointers on the thing I know nothing about? :p Like literally look at this monstrosity.
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Anyways...Pointers.

-Scarf looks nice but the design on it looks like someone drew on it. Like I can literally see a stick figure there lol. Maybe have it as stripes of red and darker…red or something? Just a suggestion

-I love the belt that you put there, that really works with it.

-Logos basic, like it but I would have the gentleman text maybe be the same font as club just as a personal preference, you don’t have to change that. I don’t mind

-I was about to say something about the shoes being red but then I realised the scarf and now I like it.

-Is it possible to have it the logo on both on the knee pads? It’s fine if you have a finisher like GTS or Nakamura knee or something like that where he hit someone with your knee. But if that’s not the case then it looks like weird to me.

-Facial hair on point.

Overall 76/100 moustaches
 

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... @DeathLock75 Hybrid says he misses you.

I'm bored so why not randomly give you pointers on the thing I know nothing about? :p Like literally look at this monstrosity.
Anyways...Pointers.

-Scarf looks nice but the design on it looks like someone drew on it. Like I can literally see a stick figure there lol. Maybe have it as stripes of red and darker…red or something? Just a suggestion

-I love the belt that you put there, that really works with it.

-Logos basic, like it but I would have the gentleman text maybe be the same font as club just as a personal preference, you don’t have to change that. I don’t mind

-I was about to say something about the shoes being red but then I realised the scarf and now I like it.

-Is it possible to have it the logo on both on the knee pads? It’s fine if you have a finisher like GTS or Nakamura knee or something like that where he hit someone with your knee. But if that’s not the case then it looks like weird to me.

-Facial hair on point.

Overall 76/100 moustaches

I'll take a 76% pass rate lol C's get decent CAWS
 

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I remember now why this place is dead.
 
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Back in 2k14 the Xbox league (when I was here last) was always busy. Now its slowly becoming a place of silence.

We're like the Ratway in Skyrim...
 
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Back in 2k14 the Xbox league (when I was here last) was always busy. Now its slowly becoming a place of silence.

We're like the Ratway in Skyrim...
I think it has to do with the Xbox install base for WWE games and a lack of recruitment.
 
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