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*During a long and brutal back and forth match, Tyson and Blackjack run at each other and knock each other down with simultaneous clotheslines. The referee starts counting as the two men lay on their backs, dazed, he gets up to a count of six when Blackjack starts stiring, he crawls over to the ropes and drags himself to his feet. At the same time, Tyson has started to push himself up off the mat. He gets up to his knees and the ref checks on him, Blackjack comes from behind the ref and throws him out of the way, giving Tyson the opportunity to low blow Blackjack.

Blackjack falls to the mat as the ref turns back to see Tyson picking Blackjack back up, Tyson hits Blackjack with a Tombstone Piledriver. He goes for the pin. 1...2...Blackjack barely gets the shoulder up. Tyson gets up and starts screaming at the ref, he grabs him by the collar and throws him backwards before Blackjack comes up from behind and spins Tyson around. He goes for an Ace Kick but Tyson ducks and low blows Blackjack with his forearm. The ref calls for the bell as Blackjack rolls around on the mat, clutching his recently attacked groin. Tyson gets in the ref's face again as the announcer begins talking.*

Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen, your winner....Blackjack!

*This sends Tyson into a rage, Blackjack has already left the ring and retreated backstage. He throws the ref across the ring and starts punching him in the face as a few more refs sprint down to the ring, they get in the ring as well as a few security guards, they surround Tyson. Two of the refs near the ramp side of the ring get dragged out, the people revealed to have dragged them out are Ty Creed and Jason Frost, Ty wearing his robe, Jason with a beer bottle in hand. Jason smashes the bottle over the head of one of the refs as Ty throws the other one into the ring post. The two slide into the ring.

Tyson, Jason and Ty clear the ring of the security and refs, making sure to throw them over the top rope, leaving the ref that disqualified Tyson in the ring. He begs Tyson not to hurt him, Tyson smirks then points over to Ty, the ref turns around into a vicious Knee Trember, he spins around with a bloody nose, Jason superkicks the ref, he spins around again with more blood pouring out of his nose. Tyson grabs the ref by his hair, smirks at the crowd and then hits him with a Frostbite. Tyson gets up and pushes Jason out of his way, he starts stomping onto the mat, and screaming at the front row. Jason leans over Tyson and spits out some beer before laughing maniacally.

The two brothers turn back and stand in the middle of the ring, Tyson and Ty shake hands before Jason pulls Ty into a rib crushing hug. Ty reluctantly pats Jason's back, Jason lets go and the three of them stand over the bloodied ref. Jason doing a gun symbol with his hand at the camera as Ty and Tyson do the Too Sweet symbol. Tyson's theme hits as we go to a commercial break.*



Not trying to be a dick..ah who am I kidding, I love being a dick. Was this supposed to intimidate the other talent? Because being able to destroy the refs and security guards is not intimidating on the slightest level, not even for storyline purposes
 

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Not trying to be a dick..ah who am I kidding, I love being a dick. Was this supposed to intimidate the other talent? Because being able to destroy the refs and security guards is not intimidating on the slightest level, not even for storyline purposes
Everyone doesn't need to look strong. And tbf he did do a decent promo were he tried and put a lot of time into....Something you did not. You only did a backstage thing last week
 

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Everyone doesn't need to look strong. And tbf he did do a decent promo were he tried and put a lot of time into....Something you did not. You only did a backstage thing last week
I don't have to put a lot of time into my promo. As long as it helps to display traits of my characters, then it is a relevant promo.

Anyways, it is plain as day that the promo he made was supposed to make the group look strong, anyone who reads that promo in it's entirety can clearly see that. But just attacking refs and security guards doesn't do that. A better way to go about it would have been after the match, Tyson starts attacking Blackjack, the ref tries to pull him off, and then gets hit with a finisher. He goes back to attacking him, but then security comes out, pulling Tyson off of Blackjack, allowing him to spend some time recovering in the corner. Tyson tries fending off security, but they overpower him. That's when his teammates come out, and they all start tossing security from the ring. At this point, they are all standing tall when out of nowhere, Blackjack catches Tyson with a finisher. Immediately the other two jump him, beating him down. As one continues to beat him down, the other helps Tyson back to his feet. All of them then take turns hitting Blackjack with their finishers, Tyson clearly going last since he's the leader. Then they all stand tall in the ring in celebration.

P.S. Not every good promo needs to be 2 paragraphs long. And not every 2 paragraph promo is a good one.
 
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Not trying to be a dick..ah who am I kidding, I love being a dick. Was this supposed to intimidate the other talent? Because being able to destroy the refs and security guards is not intimidating on the slightest level, not even for storyline purposes
I do have to agree with this. I honestly just wanted to get the group debut out of the way and I didn't want to sit through Demon's bitching about me attacking him, since I didn't ask him if I could attack him. I literally just threw it together, so yeah. You do have a point.
 

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I don't have to put a lot of time into my promo. As long as it helps to display traits of my characters, then it is a relevant promo.

Anyways, it is plain as day that the promo he made was supposed to make the group look strong, anyone who reads that promo in it's entirety can clearly see that. But just attacking refs and security guards doesn't do that. A better way to go about it would have been after the match, Tyson starts attacking Blackjack, the ref tries to pull him off, and then gets hit with a finisher. He goes back to attacking him, but then security comes out, pulling Tyson off of Blackjack, allowing him to spend some time recovering in the corner. Tyson tries fending off security, but they overpower him. That's when his teammates come out, and they all start tossing security from the ring. At this point, they are all standing tall when out of nowhere, Blackjack catches Tyson with a finisher. Immediately the other two jump him, beating him down. As one continues to beat him down, the other helps Tyson back to his feet. All of them then take turns hitting Blackjack with their finishers, Tyson clearly going last since he's the leader. Then they all stand tall in the ring in celebration.

P.S. Not every good promo needs to be 2 paragraphs long. And not every 2 paragraph promo is a good one.
Backstage doesn't do anything since it's backstage. The fans don't even have a clue who you are yet haha
 

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Backstage doesn't do anything since it's backstage. The fans don't even have a clue who you are yet haha
Considering I've done my introduction to get into this league, they do. And there are plenty of wrestlers in real life who spent the majority of their time promoing backstage instead of in the ring. So how about you get your butt-hurt self off of your high horse and move on, as I was giving Smudgy constructive criticism, something which has nothing to do with you. You chose to try to start a petty argument, and I'm choosing to end it now.
 

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Considering I've done my introduction to get into this league, they do. And there are plenty of wrestlers in real life who spent the majority of their time promoing backstage instead of in the ring. So how about you get your butt-hurt self off of your high horse and move on, as I was giving Smudgy constructive criticism, something which has nothing to do with you. You chose to try to start a petty argument, and I'm choosing to end it now.
Calling me butt hurt because I said backstage segments don't do much for your guy is stupid. You know what the backstage is for and it isn't to build your guy.
 

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This is getting boring and repetitive now. Take it to an inbox if you must.
 

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This is getting boring and repetitive now. Take it to an inbox if you must.
I agree, which is why I stopped responding. Clearly he's not planning on changing his opinion, which leaves no reason to continue the conversation.
 

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Emo, you weren't really giving Parasite constructive criticism, just on the edge if insulting him on trying to do something.

Frosty, shouldn't have even responded.

The interaction from the start shouldn't have taken place.

Cant wait to get a XB1 and bury you ;)
 
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