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[Rosie]

You can refresh probably

 

[Rosie]

Oooh a like

 

[Rosie]

And P.S: If you want to say anything, tell me here

 

[Rosie]

That promo is a week or so old

 

[MGS32]

It shows a lot of promise, the character is really interesting and the pullbacks to your past while still not entirely explaining the backstory is good. I liked when you compared yourself to Reag and talked about similar up bringings but still being entirely different. Its an extremely good first promo, grammar is fine and formatting is fine. I'd say all you need to do is evolve your character but of course thats something that happens over time. Good stuf.

 

[MGS32]

I'll obviously need to check out your match too when it opens

 

[Zany Clowny]

Please kill yourself

 

[Rosie]

Thanks

 

[The Gipper]

roode

 

[MGS32]

ly2 swing

 

[Rosie]

Like I said, I have experience e-fedding, just this character is VERY different from what I did before.

 

[Zany Clowny]

<3

 

[MGS32]

But yeah Suplex just keep building your character, its a good character and the more you build on that the better. Your promo told a story rather than just fighting words.

 

[Rosie]

And that is kind of what I prefer to go for when it comes to promos

 

[Zany Clowny]

Strange how smarks love promos ij their e feds but don't care about them on the actual show

 

[Rosie]

Rather than just try to bury the other person, set up a feud and focus on why we are fighting and what a match means to a character.