The chat thread

[MGS32]

His promo is just really awfully written and I thought I'd just point out the issues

 

[Rosie]

Yeah...writing a promo with multiple people needs to be formatted right

 

[MGS32]

And even if it was formatted right the grammar is just awful and the content itself is just dumb.

 

[Rosie]

Yeah. People kind of knock grammar as "not important" but at the same time, it can hurt a promo if there is no flow and the grammar is past a point.

 

[Dojo]

who wait what?

 

[MGS32]

Its not hugely important unless its REALLY bad and he uses the phrase "Don't take me for granite"

 

[MGS32]

CM Shaddix dojo

 

[MGS32]

You squashed him a while back

 

[Rosie]

Granite is awesome, don't knock granite.

 

[Dojo]

ah yes

 

[MGS32]

Posted my feedback Suplex if theres anything I missed

 

[Rosie]

A lot of it I agree with

 

[MGS32]

I think one of the biggest things is swearing, I used to do the same and I feel too many promos waste those words. I feel if saved they can be used to bring real emotion into promos.

 

[Rosie]

Yeah, some characters swear more, I get it. But I have seen people who swear a lot and use it right

 

[Rosie]

He doens't

 

[Rosie]

Which, Adam, if I need feedback on a promo, mind if I ask you to give feedback?