RP Feedback

[The Wrestling Addict]

All request/leave feedback in this thread.

No feedback in the RP threads!

 

[Derrick]

Well the only one who posted 'cept me is John McHenry, and well, to be honest, I never saw his character before, but from what I've seen, he's done a nice work in the RP, and for an unknown reason his character really reminds me of JBL lol

Any feedback for Angel?

 

[John McHenry]

There's a lot of back story already built up to him didn't want to use to much before we know anything about each others abilities.

 

[No More Sorrow]

There's a lot of back story already built up to him didn't want to use to much before we know anything about each others abilities.

I liked what you did with your RP, i think mine came out like shit though.

 

[Chriss]

My first RP here is not that much good as I wanted it to be but I think that it´ll be better and better when I step in a feud with somebody.

 

[Lewb]

My first RP here is not that much good as I wanted it to be but I think that it´ll be better and better when I step in a feud with somebody.

I enjoyed what you wrote, but thats a tt right? RP's are storybuilding and character development, not straight up trash talking?

Plus i wasn't in the ring and such so I'm not sure how this stands.

 

[Chriss]

I enjoyed what you wrote, but thats a tt right? RP's are storybuilding and character development, not straight up trash talking?

Plus i wasn't in the ring and such so I'm not sure how this stands.

Sorry about that one. Now I don´t have enough time but later I promise I´ll write a new one. Again sorry guys.

 

[Lewb]

Sorry about that one. Now I don´t have enough time but later I promise I´ll write a new one. Again sorry guys.

No probs dude. Id wait for confirmation anyway. Im not totally sure thats against the rules i wanted that clearing up too haha

 

[Diablo]

No probs dude. Id wait for confirmation anyway. Im not totally sure thats against the rules i wanted that clearing up too haha

You can do whatever you want in terms of roleplaying, including in ring segments, but if it's one sided and completely burying the other guy it'll likely be frowned upon since the other person quite obviously won't have a proper rebuttal. It's kind of like how Jericho wrote in his book that you should never bury someone completely because if they beat you, what does that make you look like? Crap.

 

[Chriss]

You can do whatever you want in terms of roleplaying, including in ring segments, but if it's one sided and completely burying the other guy it'll likely be frowned upon since the other person quite obviously won't have a proper rebuttal. It's kind of like how Jericho wrote in his book that you should never bury someone completely because if they beat you, what does that make you look like? Crap.

I overwrrited it so it´s not the way it was. In my first promo a did completely bury Johnny Octane. Now it´s overwrriten and so much better.

 

[Derrick]

Dudes, I'd like to know your feedback on my RPs. Thanks.

 

[John McHenry]

I overwrrited it so it´s not the way it was. In my first promo a did completely bury Johnny Octane. Now it´s overwrriten and so much better.

What do you mean "overwrited" it? Cause that's not a word. If you mean you changed it you need to verify that's ok cause in most feds once it's posted you can't change it.

 

[The Wrestling Addict]

Yeah, once it's posted, you can't go back and redo it. I didn't think I needed to say that in the rules as I figured everyone knew.

 

[Deuce]

My bad, I accidentally did 2... liked my 2nd more but I know Derrick beats me.

 

[John McHenry]

Seems a few people have I'd let it go this time. but typically once someone sees that an rp post has been edited in anyway shape or form it's typically a loss. If its not a loss it usually starts shit.