Kanye West

[Ryan]

Except for the dropout bear, which I did not make, I did everything else on here. Hope this wins my battle as it took a long time to make. Suggestions for improvements are appreciated.

I made an update to the banner but I didn't delete the old one with the dark background cause that's the one I entered into my battle. I just lightened the background and fixed something with the text that had been driving me crazy.

 

[Rated R Superstar]

Well he still fails in my eyes.

Anyways, it's good dude. I dig it.

 

[Ryan]

I'm def gonna probably do typographic work to make it look more finished.

 

[Ryan]

Made major changes guys. Hoping for last minute feedback.

 

[!PHENOM!]

Typography is awesome...it makrs the graphic more interesting....color choosen also well...a neat and slick work....keep it up

 

[The_King]

The portion with the bear and the typography is awesome. Unique approach that was executed perfectly.
My problem with the piece is that the surrounding background is just weirdly colored. I think if you would've brightened it/used more intense colors, the piece would've been better. Right now, it looks like a really appealing central focus slapped on an ugly brown background.
8/10.

 

[Ryan]

I suppose I see that point. I mean, I did do background work. It wasn't supposed to be bland but at the same time I didn't want to draw focus away from the center piece. Maybe a lighter brown would've worked? I definitely wanted to do a brown background cause I think brown works so well with the light blue.