Uhh.... No offence. Not my cup of tea.... in the slightest.
Much, much, much too blurry around the edges of the background. Not sure if this is the quality or if this is done by you, but it's pretty bad. Everything is very bad quality picture-wise in general, apart from the two focal points. The text works well, except the fancy writing, looks out of place. The idea was excellent, poorly executed. 5/10.