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That makes sense, Petey...slooooooooooow build...

John says he's on board with our ending. ALTHOUGH in the long run, he's leaning FACE.
 

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Alright boys! As promised, here is THE FINAL MATCH!!

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Cory Allen v Kraven v Eric Snow

Ashley Sparxx: The following is a Triple Threat contest and it is scheduled for one fall! Introducing first, from Delray, Detroit, Michigan, weighing in at 185 pounds, CORYYYYYYY AAAAALLLLEEEENNNN!!

"Juggalo Homies" begins to play as Cory explodes onto the ramp, carrying out his usual high octane entrance, slapping hands with the fans, then acrobatically slingshotting over the ropes, to the approval of the small but loyal crowd. A fan is shown briefly, holding up a sign that reads "COREY I'M SINGLE", as the lights dim and another song starts up on the PA system.

Ashley Sparxx: And introducing his opponent, from parts unknown, weighing in at 226 pounds, he is 'THE INSANE ENIGMAAAAAAA', KRAAAAAAVEEEEEENNNNN!

Kraven steps through the curtain to the sounds of "Enter Sandman"'s trademark intro, slowly making his way to the ring under the purple lights and eerie mist. As the lights come up again, he stares a hole into young Cory Allen, as the third and final contestant begins to make his entrance.

Ashley Sparxx: And introducing their opponent, from Chicago, Illinois, weighing in at 200 pounds, he is 'THE X-FACTORRRRRRRR'....ERIIIIIIIIIC SNNNNOOOOWWWWW!!

"Pardon Me" by Incubus blares through the speakers, as smoke and pyro go off in front of the entrance curtain. After a short delay, the man of the hour appears, opening his arms wide to embrace the supposed acclaim of the crowd before making his way to the ring.

Martin Mays: And Eric Snow certainly seems confident here, after what we saw earlier tonight in 'The X-Factor', when he got involved in a brawl with Cory Allen...

The feed cuts to frame-within-a-drame mode, as we see a replay of that incident in a small box, the main screen still showing Snow completing his entrance. Shortly thereafter, the bell rings, and the match begins!

The three men begin by circling each other for a few seconds, before both Cory Allen and Kraven lunge at Eric Snow. "The X-Factor" ducks under their double clothesline, and applies one of his own as his two opponents turn around. He then picks up little Cory Allen and throws him forcefully to the outside.

Kareem Ali: Eric Snow, with authority!

Martin Mays: But watch out...!

In busying himself with Cory Allen, Snow has left Kraven unattended, and as he turns around, he runs right into a big punch from the freak! It seems like he is going to topple over, but he just manages to hook his forearms onto the ropes. Kraven takes advantage of his vulnerable position to land a couple more European uppercuts, before Allen, on the outside, pulls Eric Snow's leg, making him fall forward. As Kraven takes the chance to get a few shots in, Allen punishes Snow's leg with a jumping leg drop, before slingshotting his way back up to the apron, over the ropes, and onto Kraven!

Martin Mays: Look at Cory ALLEN!

Caught unawares, the freak from parts unknown topples to the floor, as Cory gets the first cover of the matchup!

ONE...

TWO...

Eric Snow breaks up the pin, lunging forward to punch Cory in the ribs. The young cruiserweight accuses the blow, writhing in pain as Snow goes for the cover himself.

ONE...

TWO...

Kraven kicks out, as Cory also breaks the pin with a punch to the head of Snow. Then, as all three men slowly clamber to their feet, Snow is the first to react, with a dropkick to the back of Kraven! Pumped up, he runs to the ropes behind him, gains momentum, and launches onto the oncoming Cory Allen with a big splash!

Martin Mays: Impactful move there by Eric Snow...goes for the cover...

ONE..,

TWO...

Kraven breaks up the count with a boot to the skull of Snow, then, as he writhes around, picks up Corey Allen and throws him to the outside. He then begins to stalk Eric Snow, as if deciding the best way to annihilate him.

Kareem Ali: Look at Kraven...he's like a cat stalking his prey...

In the end, Kraven decides to pick up his groggy opponent and apply some chops to the chest, as the crowd 'ooh's. He then delivers a few more uppercuts to the dazed Eric Snow, before throwing him to the opposite ropes. He never capitalizes, however, as, from behind, Cory Allen launches onto him with a flying clothesline! Snow, coming back from the ropes, gets Kraven's full body weight on him as the two men fall onto the mat!

Kareem Ali: That's gotta hurt for Eric Snow, caught in the crossfire there...

There is a lull in the match, as the three men clamber to their feet. Cory is first up, and he pulls Kraven to his feet and also begins to apply chops. This takes the two to the further turnbuckle, where they become occupied with one another, leaving Snow to his own devices at the other end of the ring. Slowly, but surely, the high-flying cruiserweight begins to get up. He looks over, sees his two opponents involved in a brawl, but decides not to intervene. Instead, he turns around, and begins to climb the turnbuckle, as the crowd cheer, unsure of what his plan is. The commentators are not too sure either:

Martin Mays: Eric Snow deciding not to go for his opponents...and it seems like he's got a plan here...

Kareem Ali: He'd better have a plan, Martin, because none of those two boys will be sleeping on the job, and they're gonna come for him!

After a moment, however, Snow's plan begins to become evident, as Allen manages to throw Kraven onto the outside and seems to remember there is another opponent to deal with. He turns around, expecting to find Snow on the floor several feet away, To his surprise, however, his opponent's not there; instead, he is perched atop the turnbuckle, grinning down at him. It is at this point that Martin Mays finally catches on:

Martin Mays: Uh-oh...Cory Allen could be in big trouble here...and here's Eric SNOOOOOOOOH MY! X-SPLASH on Corey Allen! This could be it!

And indeed, Eric Snow has just lunged off the top rope in the frogsplash he calls the X-SPLASH! Cory, caught unawares, receives the full impact on his chest, as Snow goes for the cover. Kraven begins to climb the apron, attempting to break the pin, but he is groggy and clearly won't make it on time. And indeed, Cory's shoulders are down, the referee on his knees...

ONE...

TWO...

THREE!

Martin Mays: ...and Eric Snow's got it here! A cunning game plan made up on the fly, that ended up undoing Cory Allen! This is the exciting caliber of wrestling we have here on ACW, and proof positive that our superstars can beat any newcomers!

Ashley Sparxx: Here is your winner, 'THE X-FACTOOOOORRRRR...ERIIIIIIC SNNNNOOOOOWWW!"

Eric looks pleased with himself as Ashley raises his hand and the camera fades out onto a commercial break.
 

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Future reference...

Phoenix entrance theme... G4L - Rhianna... and she only wears red and black. no other colors :D And yeah that was a lot of respect being shown... lil too much.
 
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lol...I wondered.

Her, I had no real info. You should write her promos. I'm showing Claressa in the background next week and maybe a jump. Then a full out intro at the PPV.
I want to have Episode eight and then the PPV. Will drop my card for approval.
 

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Yeah I was thinking episode 8 and then PPV. heh you got her down pretty good though. Good job. Lot better than TWA ever did.
 

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LOL how was that too much respect being shown Slim?

I think Jacqui and Phoenix are 'birds' of a feather, pardon the pun :D
 

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Phoenix is a different breed of character. If I had time to explain it all you'd understand. But short version... she is a cold hearted woman. She'll have fun when she feels like it but she rarely ever shows any respect to anybody. So showing any is... something but it kept going on and on.

Oh yeah... I was curious... what was up with Sanders having so much offense in the match even though he didn't show up to RP at all?
 

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I guess BDC was just keeping it interesting - I did the same in my matches apart from with JMac's squash.

And I understood about Phoenix - guess Beedz was writing her a little like face Claressa, right BDC?
 

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It just felt like Zas was outclassed and had to sneak out a win instead of dominating.
 

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sorry, didn't mean it to sell that way. Andy shocked me (dont' know why) no showing us. I thought it looked pretty brutal both ways. Believe me, he's getting his ass kicked this time.
 

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I plan on stepping things up a little more with my RP. Each show... I get a little more intense :D
 

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heh nahhh never killed anybody in my promos :p
 

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Yeah, I love intense. Thus a division is rising...or a group of dark/hardcore people. Oh, yes, there will be blood!