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And here is what I have so far for the match opener. Should be a few moves away from a finish.

“Can't Be Touched” by Roy Jones begins to play as Stryker comes out with a cocky grin on his face. He walks down to the center of the ramp, flexes then continues on down to the ring. He gets to the ring then jumps up onto the apron, enters the ring then waits in one of the corners.

Ashley Sparxxx: The following contest is scheduled for one fall and is a triple threat match. Introducing currently in the ring… from New York City. Tristin Stryker. And his opponent.

"Let it Rock" by Kevin Rudolf and Lil Wayne jams throughout the arena as Evan Anderson steps through the curtain. He is wearing his signature sunglasses and walks down the entrance ramp with a smirk on his face. He goes to high five a fan but moves his hand and mocks the fan. Anderson hops on the apron and poses as he enters the ring. He gets on the top rope and takes off his glasses. He hops down and chills in his corner.

Ashley Sparxxx: Ladies and gentlemen, from Miami Florida, this is Evan Anderson. And their opponent… hailing from Des Moines, Iowa and weighing in at one hundred and sixty pounds. We like to introduce to you… Jacqueline Monroe.

"We Will Rise" by Arch Enemy hits and Jacqueline walks out from the curtains. She has her eyes set on her two opponents and determined to make a statement she doesn’t go for the pumping of the crowd or anything but heads straight to the ring. She walks up the ring steps and enters the ring. She takes her spot in one of the empty corners and keeps looking back and forth at her two opponents as Ashley Sparxxx exits out of the ring. The referee stands in the middle of the ring and signals for the match to begin and the bell ringer rings the bell as the three push each other out of their corners and towards the center of the ring.

Martin Mays: And here we are about to go. First woman to compete here ever since our fearless owner. And this is a triple thread match.

Kareem Ali: This should be very intense.

Martin Mays: I’m excited to see if this chick can survive or if she is in over her head with this one.

As they get closer to each other, Anderson and Stryker nod in agreement as they look at Monroe. She doesn’t back up in the slightest but the two of them double team as they pick her up and walk towards the ropes. They then unceremoniously dump over the top rope to the floor. Stryker returns to the middle of the ring and motions for Anderson to come over. Anderson leans over the ropes looking at Monroe as she is clutching at her back after that hard fall. “This is no place for a bitch. Get your ass back to the kitchen.” Anderson smiles as he turns to Stryker and engage in an elbow and collar tie up.

Kareem Ali: Wow… very harsh words from Anderson there.

Martin Mays: He’ll be paying for those words later. Any woman that gets in that ring does not want to hear that.

Kareem Ali: What are you? The spokesperson for women everywhere? You lost your balls?

Martin Mays: Yeah… in your woman’s mouth.

Kareem Ali: Shut up.

Back in the ring Anderson has Stryker in a headlock and flips him over onto his back on the canvas. He cranks on the headlock as Stryker starts to stir a little and get back up to his feet. Upon reaching their feet Stryker gets his arm up and gives Anderson a couple of forearm shots before pushing him forward into the ropes. Upon the rebound Anderson mulls over Stryker with a shoulder block sending him back down to the canvas. Anderson lifts both arms up to the crowd as they boo him. He turns around as Jacqueline springboards off the top rope and connects with a flying forearm smash into Anderson’s face knocking him down to the canvas. Monroe quickly gets up to her feet and mounts Anderson and starts raining rights and lefts across Anderson’s face. The quick brutality of it has some of the punches missing but most of them connecting against his cheek, his nose, under his eye, his mouth. She is relentless as Stryker stands and watches. He gets tired of watching and gets behind Monroe and locks his arms around her waist and using his strength lifts her off of Anderson and up over his head with a release german suplex causing her to flip in the air and land on her stomach. She clutches at her stomach right after landing.

Kareem Ali: That woman is vicious.

Martin Mays: Yeah but that landing… that just looked plain rough.

Anderson starts to stir as Stryker finishes stomping on the back on Monroe. He returns his attention to Anderson. Stryker gets Anderson up to his feet and his face has blood coming from his nose and swelling has started under his eye. Stryker smiles at the brutality that was unleashed on Anderson. He places his hands on Anderson’s head and starts headbutting him repeatedly. Over and over and over against his forehead before Anderson starts to crumple down to a knee. Once Anderson is down, Stryker grabs Anderson around the neck and drops to his back delivering a short snap DDT. He rolls Anderson over for the first pin of the match.

One…

Two…

Monroe dives across the ring pushing Stryker off of Anderson to end the count. Stryker gets up, obviously furious at the count being broken feeling that he had it won he lunges wildly at Monroe with a clothesline and misses. As he turns around he is met with a boot to his chin.


Kareem Ali: SUPER KICK!

Martin Mays: And with authority. That chick is nobody to mess around with.

Kareem Ali: Bet she would be killer in bed.

Martin Mays: Come on mannn… we’re live. Leave your fantasies for… Uh oh.

Mays stopped mid sentence as he sees Monroe grab for Stryker’s arm. She lifts it up and sits on Stryker’s chest. She places her right leg underneath his neck and uses her left leg as she places her right foot right where the bend of the left leg is. She tightens the hold and rolls to her side keeping hold of the arm.

Kareem Ali: Now that is a position I want to be in.

Martin Mays: Not unless you want to be choked out you don’t.

Monroe indeed has Stryker locked in a very tight triangle choke and he is starting to struggle to breathe. Anderson is starting to get to his feet but is still woozy from the headbutts as he stumbles backwards into a corner. Stryker looks like he is fading but in one big gasp he pulls himself up to his knees, up to his feet, uses his other arm and with all his might lifts up Monroe whom still has the triangle choke locked in very tight. He lifts her up and falls forward. The impact has Monroe release the hold as Stryker seems to has nearly collapsed. Monroe is writhing in pain after the massive power bomb. Anderson being the only one that is still on his feet stumbles over to Monroe and it is as if seeing her got his bearings straight. He pulls her up roughly by the hair and whips her into the corner. He then starts raining rights on top of her head over and over. The crowd started counting but the punches were happening in such rapid succession that they couldn’t keep count. Monroe starts sinking in the corner and Anderson starts stomping away at her midsection. Once she hits the canvas he shakes his head as he lifts her back up to her feet. He chops her across the chest as the crowd lets out a collective “WOOOOOOOOOO!” He isn’t satisfied as he rips her shirt revealing her sports bra and chops her again across the chest. Monroe in tremendous pain is clutching at her chest trying to catch her breath as the crowd let out another “WOOOOOOOOOOOO!” He gets his head under her arm and sits her on top of the turnbuckle. He climbs up to the middle turnbuckle and sticks her head under his arm. He gets her arm over his and powers her over for a massive suplex.

Kareem Ali: Appears as though Anderson has found his second wind and is taking it out on Monroe.

Martin Mays: Bitch deserved it.

Kareem Ali: What you mean… you were…

Martin Mays: Just get back to watching the match.

Anderson rolls over on top of Monroe and the referee starts a count.

One…

Two…

Thre…

Monroe manages to shoot her left arm up as that was the only part of her not covered by the weight of Anderson. Anderson rolls off of her obviously frustrated. He gets up to his feet and as he reaches down to pick up Monroe again he is met by a big boot to the side of the face by Stryker having finally recovered from the triangle choke unleashed by Monroe earlier. Stryker still clutching at his throat periodically picks up Monroe but is surprised by a small cradle attempt.

One…

Two…

Thre…

And Stryker barely manages to escape out of it as Monroe is still out on her back. Stryker coughs a couple of times before regaining most of his breath back.
 

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Nice match. Small detail though, according to my promo Jacqui is already in the ring when the other two enter.
 

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This is the (unformatted) Triple Threat between Crimson, Calvash and Young. The two who roleplayed have tied, but I didn't know how to end it so that they both won and Crimson lost. Hopefully, my ending isn't too ridiculous...

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Henri Calvash vs Markus Crimson vs Billy Young

Calvash comes out first, and stands in the ring waiting for his two opponents. Billy Young follows soon afterwards, and cuts his promo, before taking to the squared circle.

Martin Mays: Here we have these two newcomers...two very cocky young men...and they each say they are the best around! But methinks they are going to have to prove it here tonight!

Kareem Ali: Well, you know what they say, Martin..."all bark, no bite"...and these two are barking their little hearts out, so make of that what you will!

At this moment, Markus Crimson's intro hits, and soon the big red menace comes out, eyes set on the ring.

Kareem Ali: And speaking of "all bark, no bite", here's a guy who's "all bite, no bark!" Talk about your strong and silent type, Martin - this guy barely says a word! I wonder if they ever taught him English back at the orphanage?

Having completed his entrance, Markus Crimson is now scaring Ashley Sparxx out of the ring by giving her a frightening stare. Then, as the curvaceous announcer scarpers out of the ring, he locks eyes with the two smaller men, one in each corner across from him. Despite the difference in size, neither Young nor Calvash seem intimidated by the big man, and both look like they're concocting strategies to take him down.

Once the bell rings, however, it is Crimson who moves instantly, advancing towards his opponents and picking each of them up by the throat, in a double chokeslam. He then forces them up against the turnbuckle, straining their back, before tossing them over the ropes into the outside.

Kareem Ali: What dfid I tell you about dogs just now, Martin?

Martin Mays: Well, they also say "it's not the size of the dog in the fight", don't they?

Kareem Ali: Yeah...whoever says that obviously has never lived.

As the commentators argue, Crimson has exited the ring and gone to pick up his two opponents. He rams Young against the steel steps, while Calvash is sent head-first into the apron. As Crimson prepares to roll the Canadian into the ring, however, he is hit with a clothesline from behind by Billy Young. This causes only mild discomfort to the monster, but as he turns around to punish the smaller man for his gall, he is hit in the chest with a dropkick!

Martin Mays: Billy Young putting his body on the line here, but he has managed to stop the big man!

Kareem Ali: Got lucky...just got lucky...

Calvash and Billy Young are now double-teaming the bigger man, whom they have managed to bring down. Calvash sits on Crimson's chest, applying punches to his head, while Young stomps about the viking's midsection. Having seemingly done away with their foe, the two roll into the ring and concentrate on each other.

Here begins a masterclass of reversals, which has the fans 'oooh' ing and 'aaah'ing. Each of the two men tries to lock in some form of submission or another, but neither succeeds, and in the end it is Young who prevails, as he performs a bulldog, planting Calvash. He goes for the cover.

ONE...

TW...

The pin is broken by the revived Markus Crimson, who then tosses Young across and goes for the cover himself. Calvash, however, prevents this by kicking out his feet, making the larger man stumble. Taking the opportunity, Calvash nimbly nips up and prepares to attack Crimson. Before he can, however, he is caught by a spear from Billy Young, who then wastes no time in attacking Markus Crimson with punches, before eventually throwing him over the ropes.

Martin Mays: Look at Young! Young on the offense, and tossing Markus Crimson out with authority!

Young, however, has lost too long, and Calvash is already clambering to his feet behind him.

Martin Mays: And Calvash still reeling from that Spear...but look at this! Bulldog from Calvash, payback from earlier! Here's the cover!

ONE...

TWO...

A kickout at two by Billy Young, as Calvash now picks him up, Irish whips him to the ropes, then connects with a leg lariat for another cover!

ONE...

TWO..

THR...

NO! Young kicks out just in the nick of time, leaving a frustrated Calvash. So distraught is he, that he does not see Markus Crimson coming up behind him, and gets hit in the back of the head with a clothesline. Crimson then picks each man up over his shoulder, as if they were two sacks of potatoes, and slams them to the mat with a big double pump handle slam! He covers both men...

ONE...

TWO...

TH...

NO! in a strange twist of fate, both competitors kick out at the exact same time, leaving the commentators astonished:

Kareem Ali: Did you see that, Martin Mays? They couldn't have synched it better if they were trying to!

Despite the kickout, however, both the smaller competitors are still in rather bad shape, rolling around on the mat. However, as Crimson stands over them, assessing what to do next, each of them reacts at (once again), the exact same time, showing sufficient presence of mind to grab one of Crimson's legs and make him trip, attempting a rollup cover! In their semi-dazed state, none of them is 100% aware that the other is covering, and as a result, the referee ends up kneeling to count a double cover!

ONE...

TWO...

THREE!

Kareem Ali: What the hell happened? Who won?

Martin Mays: They both won, Kareem! They both covered Crimson!

Kareem Ali: But...but...

Ashley Sparxx: Ladies and gentlemen, here are your joint winners of this match...Billy Young and Henri Calvash!

The referee raises the limp hands of both men, with both still writhing around in the mat, not quite aware of what's going on, as the show cuts to commercial.
 
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Oh I don't carry matches over from promos in the promo thread. Has potential to throw things off.

But ummm how exactly is McHenry gonna interfere in the main event? trying to figure that part out before I get to it.
 

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Not in the promo section, the ptomo in question is my actual RP for Jacqui :)
 

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Well see now you throwing me off... cause if others were to do stuff from the ring then wouldn't everybody start off in the ring? And if that were the case then how would matches get started if they are all in the ring?

I don't know what you are exactly requesting.
 

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Ya just try your best to make it work, if they all do something contradictory. BUT, from past experience, if they take the time to read the other rps and their opponents rp starting out in the ring, they would include that when they came out. This is where we differed from all others. To each and every one of us, it was all about the show. CONTINUITY was important. Not saying confusion didn't happen. But most of us were aware of what the other was doing. And it was all left to management to decide if we could use it or not.

Using what they rped also told the creator that we really read what they wrote and that it was important. Creator rights and all.


As for McHenry? It's up to you, we don't have to do it, but I thought we kinda agreed to it. I'd just have him come out...ref gets blindsided....McHenry cleans house...drags winner on loser. But, like I said, I'm leaving that up to you. I'm just trying to build a reason for McHenry to be in the hunt for the belt. This is purely because of consistency. He has an awful record. But he can blame Flair... "NOT MY FAULT!" lol
 
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So lemme get this straight...there has never been a situation where a wrestler in your fed cuts a promo BEFORE their match, and then is already in the ring when his/her opponents come out? Because that's all this was.

Alternatively, are you saying I shouldn't bother with in-ring promos from now on?

All I'm asking is, plop my RP at the beginning of the match, then have the other two come out with Jacqui already in the ring, and start the match normally. It's not complicated :)
 

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if you want, I will drop the whole thing when we're done like I did last week.

I love piecing it together. Would love to see everybody be happy with my style.
 

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BTW Slim, not trying to be aggressive, just trying to make heads and tails of it :)

Hey Beedz, does my ending make sense? I should add a few seconds' indecision by the referee before attributing the double victory perhaps?

More matches to follow! Any word on whether Shaun will RP or should I fill in the second?
 

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IDK about Shaun...have one ready...

I have one match written and another all but the ending. Hoping Derrick will rp. He was so excited about this character, but you know how it goes! lol!
 

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IDK about Shaun...have one ready...

I have one match written and another all but the ending. Hoping Derrick will rp. He was so excited about this character, but you know how it goes! lol!
 

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Okay I got my idea for McHenry now.

And as far as the ummm promo thing goes... doing it that way is kinda like trashtalking way where everyone goes to the ring... but then it creates this sorta lifestyle where everyone lives at the arena including the fans and that isn't how its supposed to be. Like if we were to have an in ring promo... yeah it can happen in the ring but it would be at some house show or something... not at the actual event of the actual show. That way when the show starts... it starts off fresh with nobody in the ring unless it has to.
 

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Okay I got my idea for McHenry now.

And as far as the ummm promo thing goes... doing it that way is kinda like trashtalking way where everyone goes to the ring... but then it creates this sorta lifestyle where everyone lives at the arena including the fans and that isn't how its supposed to be. Like if we were to have an in ring promo... yeah it can happen in the ring but it would be at some house show or something... not at the actual event of the actual show. That way when the show starts... it starts off fresh with nobody in the ring unless it has to.

Yeah, that's where our different philosophies of rping collide. When we did rps, we were building the show. The promos, the segments, the interviews...they were all done in rp. And YES, there was trash-talking. You have to forgive me a bit. PWA is all I know. So when you guys talk about separating trash talking and rping (where the rp is anything but the show)...I say why? When it opens up more possibilities. I loved the chains..what you guys would call Trash talking. I ALSO loved origin rps about the past. And definitively loved rping segments that, in my eyes, were only for the show.

Everything had to do with building the character. And, to me, that included the character's past, his present life situation, the way he conducted himself during the show, his inring promos, his interviews...the whole shabang...

I noticed the discussion going on about merging the ideas and I thought..I will be doing both. It's what comes naturally. I would like to see us losen up a bit as time goes on as a part of our merger.
 

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Well that last TT by Syn threw me off and now I won't be able to get the match done. Sunday is always my busiest day. So ummm... could anybody pick up that match cause that screwed me.