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Yes, Pete. For my benefit, would you please lay out what we've been talking about. You have a better memory that I. lol.

ALSO: We've added 11 new characters since PWA hit (I realize that 5 of them are mine and Pete's) but we also have two new ones waiting in the wings. And Flip AKA Trending Worldwide is on an rp site that he says has a LOT of wrestling rpers. That, and the fact that UWF is dying, should give the ACW a chance to grow BIG TIME.


ADDED NOTE: I'm really liking the idea of pushing John McHenry and see where it goes. I say that we MAY want him to interfere in this weeks main event, no matter who wins and start making claims that NOBODY becomes champion without his help. lol. A KING MAKER kinda gimmick. MAYBE, at OVERDIVE, we can place him as SPECIAL GUEST REFEREE in the championship match (he would also have his own momentum building match). That would be where he injures Flair (need to get CHRISS on board too to some extent) no matter who wins. Then, we involve him in the championship match for the next PPV.
 
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Hmmmm could do that.

But yeah a push for McHenry does sound doable.
 

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5?

Mine: Lord V, Jacqui, Darren, possible Darren manager
Yours: El Loko, Maddie, Wisey, Bronko and Ressa.

More like 8/9 lol

Anyway, IDEAS DISCUSSED:

- Tag team of Stevie Starr/Darren Pesinger (waiting to hear from Shaun)
- Lord Vycious as a stooge to Claressa, doing her bidding.
- Potentially have Ressa use Flip's new guy (Salomon White) the same way she uses Vycious, and then have them tag and/or feud.
- Jacqui M defecting to Team ACW and feuding with Claressa King.
- Zasalamel feuding with Wisecrack/LWO and then defecting to their side.
- Using Zach Bronko in a bodyguard/enforcer to Claressa gimmick for a while.
- Potentially having some ACW guys beat up Pesinger after a match, leading to the introduction of his old PWA tag team partner and the reforming of the team (in case Starr/Pesinger does not go through).

LOL enough goodness there for ya Slim?

Please note that these are literally ALL the ideas Beedz and I had. What that means is, some of them are only half-serious and have not been discussed at lenght. Also, I would rather revitalise the Tag Division (there are more people interested in having tag teams) and build the war angle than run for any belts right now.

Any feedback would be welcome.
 
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5?

Mine: Lord V, Jacqui, Darren, possible Darren manager
Yours: El Loko, Maddie, Wisey, Bronko and Ressa.

More like 8/9 lol

Anyway, IDEAS DISCUSSED:

- Tag team of Stevie Starr/Darren Pesinger (waiting to hear from Shaun) Up to you too, I think.
- Lord Vycious as a stooge to Claressa, doing her bidding. Will come out with the story
- Potentially have Ressa use Flip's new guy (Salomon White) the same way she uses Vycious, and then have them tag and/or feud. Later, maybe
- Jacqui M defecting to Team ACW and feuding with Claressa King. In time...gotta establish her as the PWA regulars first
- Zasalamel feuding with Wisecrack/LWO and then defecting to their side. UP to SLIM, once again a culmination of two or more months of story
- Using Zach Bronko in a bodyguard/enforcer to Claressa gimmick for a while. Comes with the storyline
- Potentially having some ACW guys beat up Pesinger after a match, leading to the introduction of his old PWA tag team partner and the reforming of the team (in case Starr/Pesinger does not go through). In Time...

LOL enough goodness there for ya Slim?

Please note that these are literally ALL the ideas Beedz and I had. What that means is, some of them are only half-serious and have not been discussed at lenght. Also, I would rather revitalise the Tag Division (there are more people interested in having tag teams) and build the war angle than run for any belts right now.

Any feedback would be welcome.

ALSO
New Characters with RRS, EOM, Flip/Trending Worldwide, Andy, King, Shaun, TWA was supposed to rp and then the Vampire and Fetter's new guy, Joey Styles...lol

That's a mess of rpers!!
 

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Yeahhhh don't have too many characters though... cause that is quite a bit between the two of you.

But as far as the other stuff... I guess it depends on how things go.
 

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Tru that, Slim...Tru that.

Well, back to task, boys...

Opening Bout:ONE MORE TIME!
Match Type: Triple Threat
Stipulation: N/A
Time Limit: 10 Minutes (1 RP Cap)
Tristin Stryker vs Evan Anderson vs Jacqui Monroe
Grader/Writer: SLIM



Second Bout:
Match Type: Triple Threat
Stipulation:
Time Limit: 10 Minutes (1 RP Cap)
Henry Calvash vs Marcus Crimson vs Billy Young
Grader/Writer: PETE
Feel like tackling Ashez and EOM?



Third Bout
Match Type: Triple Threat
Stipulation:
Time Limit: 10 Minutes (1 RP Cap)
Eric Snow vs Kraven vs Cory Allen
Grader/Writer: PETE
ANOTHER EASY ONE PROBS



Fourth Bout: Thunder Strikes!!
Match Type: singles
Stipulation:
Time Limit: 10 Minutes (1 RP Cap)
Raiden vs Johan Johanson
Grader/Writer: BDC



Fifth Bout:
Match Type: singles
Stipulation:
Time Limit: 20 Minutes (2 RP Cap)
John McHenry vs Aaron Asterisk
Grader/Writer: PETE
EASY MATCH PROBS...Asterisk will prob no show....you can write this now



Sixth Bout:
Match Type: Triple Threat
Stipulation:
Time Limit: 20 Minutes (1 RP Cap)
Andrew Sanders vs Vampyro vs Zasalamel
Grader/Writer: BDC


Sixth Bout:
Match Type: Tags
Stipulation:
Time Limit: 20 Minutes (2 RP Cap)
Stevie Starr and Darren Pessinger vs Mercy and Indiana
Grader/Writer: BDC


Main Event: So you both wanna be in the same ring all the time, eh? Part 2
Match Type: 2 on 1 Handicap
Stipulation: N/A
Time Limit: 30 Minutes (2 RP Cap per team-MEANS FLAIR has to do TWO and his opponents do one a peice!)
SYN and Drew Alexander
vs
Christopher Flair©
Grader/Writer: SLIM

ANY problems here? Petey, if you can't do three, I can pick up more this weekend.
The good thing is we have more contested matches. And next week will probably be even more contested.
 

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No problem at all :)

And so far it looks like Ashey's taking the one contested match out of my three.

BTW Slim, it's not that many characters, since LWO is a tag team (and Wisecrack their manager) and since Claressa and Vycious will only be appearing part-time (maybe Bronko as well). Besides, we've been there before (did I tell you about the time I had SEVEN CHARACTERS?!) and we can handle it.
 

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My only issue with that many characters for one person is IF the person with those characters has to go on leave ya know. Cause if that person ever does... then he is taking like a quarter of the roster with him and that really really really hurts. Thats the only reason why I like limits on characters. I wouldn't doubt that you could handle it just... ya know preparing for the future if ever somethin like that ever comes up then the fed would be hurting.

But yeah trying to figure out who is who and where they are helps cause just seeing a bunch of names is like whoa. But when they are shown that this is a tag team, these are part time, this one a manager then it really helps clear it up and take the shock off :)
 

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I understand, but personally, for me to go on hiatus would imply a family crisis, a crippling accident, a coma, or death. Otherwise, I would find a way to be here. I have RPed from airplanes and moving buses, for heaven's sake! :) So no worries there. And Beedz, while I can't entirely vouch for him, is pretty much the same.

So just to round up:

PETEY

Jacqui M - full time singles competitor
Darren Pesinger - full time singles competitor (potentially tag team competitor down the line, along with one of two other characters)
Lord Vycious - part time semi-management competitor (potentially full time down the line)
Bambi Juggs - valet to Darren

BDC:

LWO (El Loko/Maddog) - Tag Team
Claressa King - management
Wisecrack - manager to LWO
Zach Bronko - part-time enforcer/potential full-time competitor

Is this correct, BDC?
 

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Either way... never know what can happen on a day to day basis ya know. So yeah I'm always gonna be cautious bout that sorta thing.

I mean I had everything fine going one day... then unexpectedly one Sunday morning someone ran a stop sign and I wound up having to miss a month. All it takes is a split second mistake and not even on your part but on someone else's to cause something to happen ya know.

So I'd say just keep it at that and not try to go too over board with characters just cause you can. Plus it isn't that good for management to have tons of characters. Has a potential to look bad.
 

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That's cool, Slim.

Pete, we have our hands full with actual NEW people right now! Hot DAMN! This had the potential to be BIG! If we handle it right.
I'm going to try and have my matches done by Sunday in some form or fashion.

BTW: input on the tag match! PLEASE! Read them and give me your take. I want to write it, but I would like a joint decision to the most contested contest of the week.
 

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The tag match should be allowed to go through. Any and all interference should be run AFTER the pin. Otherwise you're squandering three of your best RPers on a no-contest. But then again I'd told you this already.
 

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I'll look at them.

I'ma try to get my matches written today. Well minus the ending just in case someone decides to show up. That way the weekend will be free for work since they doin it to me again.
 

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Yeah, I kinda figured. It's ok. The more we can get done ahead of time the better.

Remember we talked about McHenry interfering in the main event again. Whoever wins will win thanks to him. Should I talk the whole Kingmaker idea over with him?

And if ANYBODY gets messed up, just let the others know. I like the teamwork we have going here guys. This show could be the hottest thing on WS!!
 

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hey I was looking over Monroe's movelist... I think she needs more kicks, and her style should change a little. She's too small to be a power hitter. Brawler/high flyer seems like it would fit her persona a little more. Submissions work but she needs more submissions in her move list that will stand out more and be unique for her. And super kick is listed in her regular moves as well as set up... needs to be altered :D

Just my observation. Gotta make these women tough as nails but... smart too. They know that a power game against these guys would not work out well... realistically at least.