Chat thread 2

[Travs]

If you can get your audience visualizing what's going on in the scene instead of just reading it, then you're doing well.

 

[Rosie]

And Zap, I am not saying it is a bad thing

 

[Travs]

You'd better not be.

 

[Rosie]

But what I am saying is there needs to be a good balance

 

[Rosie]

And you know me, I like description too

 

[Travs]

That's true, but you still need it.

 

[Rosie]

At the same time though, if it is all description and what you say is crap, then you'll still lose.

 

[DeathLock75]

I found that to be the hard part. The talking was easy enough

 

[Travs]

So Death, to improve that promo I'd say more description and maybe a few breaks in between speaking so it flows more realistically.

 

[Travs]

Because if you think about it, you just spoke nonstop for basically one massive paragraph about three times.

 

[Black Wizard]

I always felt I had trouble finding that balance

 

[Travs]

It's hard to find, but it's golden when you find it.

 

[Rosie]

But when you did Wiz, you were straight fiya!

 

[Travs]

Until I beat her

 

[Travs]

ONLY PERSON TO DO SO, MAY I ADD.