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Travs

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If you can get your audience visualizing what's going on in the scene instead of just reading it, then you're doing well.
 

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And Zap, I am not saying it is a bad thing
 

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But what I am saying is there needs to be a good balance
 

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And you know me, I like description too
 

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At the same time though, if it is all description and what you say is crap, then you'll still lose.
 

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I found that to be the hard part. The talking was easy enough
 

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So Death, to improve that promo I'd say more description and maybe a few breaks in between speaking so it flows more realistically.
 

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Because if you think about it, you just spoke nonstop for basically one massive paragraph about three times.
 

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But when you did Wiz, you were straight fiya!
 
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