Chat thread 2

[Rosie]

Sometimes a bit toooo well....

 

[Travs]

For example, you start off with 'ah, this stage is big'

 

[DeathLock75]

Need to add more description. Got it

 

[Rosie]

Considering you once wrote a 4000 word+ promo with over 2000 words before you even spoke

 

[Rosie]

That is overboard.

 

[Travs]

You could put a little bit of description in between 'ah' and 'this stage is big' describing him looking down and around the stage and stuff.

 

[Travs]

Hey, when you've got time on your hands...

 

[Rosie]

lol

 

[Rosie]

For me, I'll may be writing my first promo either tomorrow or tonight, depending

 

[Rosie]

Also, Death, like the stipulation we added to your match?

 

[Rosie]

Submissions and Knockouts only?

 

[DeathLock75]

yea

 

[Travs]

But ignore Beaver's reply when I say that description goes a long way.

 

[DeathLock75]

If I get the win then use my finisher submission to end it. Feel like it would be a good ending (Only if I can pick up the win)

 

[Rosie]

lol we'll see.