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DX 3:16's Promo: Well the backstory is ok for starters. I don't like how Jericho's first iMPACT!/TNA apperance, is opening up the show with an interview backstage. You should have definatly banked on his "Countdown" intro, thats so original, and iconic. Not a major loss, but its not a minor scratch either. This dents what could have been a master piece to me. The questions being asked were pretty good, but not abundant IMO. Jericho's responses were nice, and long. I think this was a pretty average promo. A tad above average at best, but yeah. It wasn't bad, this is a good example of why your a veteran writer here so Noobs take notes.
Magnus's Promo: Contract writting for someone big like Jericho doesn't exactly take "just" a month. But backstory wasn't needed so I won't penalize you for that. Let me point out something I really liked here: You didn't make it a casual interview with Jericho in the interview section. You made it very formal, and introduced Jericho pretty well. I still think you guys should have banked on the whole "Countdown" thing but once again.. Thats cosmetic, and isn't a big deal. I went with the whole Jericho thinking TNA is a bunch of no bodies theme as well, so I have to give you some positive points on that. The body language is great here really putting Jericho over as an ass. One thign I didn't like was that he came across as a child, and immature with his replies on the 'Joe question'. Fat Joe? How old are you Y2J? Overall, this was an above avaerage promo really. It wasn't bad at all, and it was pretty damn good in my opinon.
Beer's Promo: Good questioning here. The presentation was nice, but you guys are going to wear out BKB's, or CT's font. Seriously lol... Anyways, on the promo. There was great, simple, but short questioning here. Jericho answered each question, and didn't get side tracked at all. Very professional, and realistic. Jericho had amazing body language here, and really got you some points from me.. I really didn't find any negative points here. It was at good length, and really in character. The reassurance thing at the end is good if you were planning to have an interfering factor in his feud with Aj.
The Vote: All promo's were exceptional. Firstly, I'd have to take out DX's promo just because Jericho making his "first ever" apperance really messed me up there. I have no clue why the countdown would go off to show Jericho in the back. Seriously, WTF? Now next we have Magnus, and Beer.. Both were above average, and really in character. But I will just have to go with..........
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BEER!
Beer.. Your promo was very well written, and I found no negative's here. Magnus your promo was good to but the imature attitude just wasn't doing it for me man. Sorry.. I hope we can still be friends :happy:. Congratulations on your win Beer.
Magnus's Promo: Contract writting for someone big like Jericho doesn't exactly take "just" a month. But backstory wasn't needed so I won't penalize you for that. Let me point out something I really liked here: You didn't make it a casual interview with Jericho in the interview section. You made it very formal, and introduced Jericho pretty well. I still think you guys should have banked on the whole "Countdown" thing but once again.. Thats cosmetic, and isn't a big deal. I went with the whole Jericho thinking TNA is a bunch of no bodies theme as well, so I have to give you some positive points on that. The body language is great here really putting Jericho over as an ass. One thign I didn't like was that he came across as a child, and immature with his replies on the 'Joe question'. Fat Joe? How old are you Y2J? Overall, this was an above avaerage promo really. It wasn't bad at all, and it was pretty damn good in my opinon.
Beer's Promo: Good questioning here. The presentation was nice, but you guys are going to wear out BKB's, or CT's font. Seriously lol... Anyways, on the promo. There was great, simple, but short questioning here. Jericho answered each question, and didn't get side tracked at all. Very professional, and realistic. Jericho had amazing body language here, and really got you some points from me.. I really didn't find any negative points here. It was at good length, and really in character. The reassurance thing at the end is good if you were planning to have an interfering factor in his feud with Aj.
The Vote: All promo's were exceptional. Firstly, I'd have to take out DX's promo just because Jericho making his "first ever" apperance really messed me up there. I have no clue why the countdown would go off to show Jericho in the back. Seriously, WTF? Now next we have Magnus, and Beer.. Both were above average, and really in character. But I will just have to go with..........
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BEER!
Beer.. Your promo was very well written, and I found no negative's here. Magnus your promo was good to but the imature attitude just wasn't doing it for me man. Sorry.. I hope we can still be friends :happy:. Congratulations on your win Beer.