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Opening promo: The pairing of Shane and Heyman is weird, and Heyman sounded like a generic face GM here which he shouldn't. Try to define their characters more, as neither came off like they normally do. I know it was just a way to start off your first show, but still.
AOTF vs Londrick: Nice opener, some good pace to it. Surprised that Black didn't use the Phoenix Splash tbh, but the finish was good, a counter for the end is always good. The promo afterwards from Jacobs was terrible tbh. They are not ass kickers. They are not badasses. They are the opposite, They hate this society, they hate people for conforming.
Kaz/Carlito promo: Was pretty good except when Carlito called Kaz small. Carlito is smaller lol. Carlito was well in character though.
Fatal Four Way: If Matt Hardy was a part of the Worldn Title tourney, he should not have been a part of this imo. TBH I thought the action would be a little quicker from the start, but it was still good. Morrison really should have gone over in this IMO. STriker needed to be built up befpre being handed a title.
VIP Lounge: Everything CM Punk said was evry in character with his dedication and all that. MVP missed a few of his main lines, but it was still good.
Thorn vs Rhodes: This was essentially to just build up Thorn. Did its job.
Kennedy/Aries/Storm/AJ promo: No one had any real defining characters in this promo, besides Kennedy saying Mr Kennedy, the Kennecy in AJ's face. Way too generic ofr my liking.
Steenerico vs WGTT: Looks like you are putting the tag teams on display which is good. Not surprised Steenerico went over, as I know how much of a Steenerico mark you are. It was a solid match, and it all flowed together fluently.
Orton promo: Was alright. Was bordering on generic heel promo, rather than cocky Orton or sadistic Orton.
Orton vs Kaz: Orton simply had to win this match, especially with a Kaz/Carlito feud coming. Was pretty good, but wasn't as good as you could have made it imo. A few more counters would have been nice. Kaz looked very strong in this match, so I guess he will be a high upper midcarder.
AC: Well your matches are very solid but your promos are very meh. Every heel was the generic I am going to kick your ass heel, except for MVP and Storm. That should be your main focus imo.
AOTF vs Londrick: Nice opener, some good pace to it. Surprised that Black didn't use the Phoenix Splash tbh, but the finish was good, a counter for the end is always good. The promo afterwards from Jacobs was terrible tbh. They are not ass kickers. They are not badasses. They are the opposite, They hate this society, they hate people for conforming.
Kaz/Carlito promo: Was pretty good except when Carlito called Kaz small. Carlito is smaller lol. Carlito was well in character though.
Fatal Four Way: If Matt Hardy was a part of the Worldn Title tourney, he should not have been a part of this imo. TBH I thought the action would be a little quicker from the start, but it was still good. Morrison really should have gone over in this IMO. STriker needed to be built up befpre being handed a title.
VIP Lounge: Everything CM Punk said was evry in character with his dedication and all that. MVP missed a few of his main lines, but it was still good.
Thorn vs Rhodes: This was essentially to just build up Thorn. Did its job.
Kennedy/Aries/Storm/AJ promo: No one had any real defining characters in this promo, besides Kennedy saying Mr Kennedy, the Kennecy in AJ's face. Way too generic ofr my liking.
Steenerico vs WGTT: Looks like you are putting the tag teams on display which is good. Not surprised Steenerico went over, as I know how much of a Steenerico mark you are. It was a solid match, and it all flowed together fluently.
Orton promo: Was alright. Was bordering on generic heel promo, rather than cocky Orton or sadistic Orton.
Orton vs Kaz: Orton simply had to win this match, especially with a Kaz/Carlito feud coming. Was pretty good, but wasn't as good as you could have made it imo. A few more counters would have been nice. Kaz looked very strong in this match, so I guess he will be a high upper midcarder.
AC: Well your matches are very solid but your promos are very meh. Every heel was the generic I am going to kick your ass heel, except for MVP and Storm. That should be your main focus imo.