Here goes my comment on your RAW after Mania and I thought it was a great show from start to finish with plenty of surprises and subtle differences to what happened in real life.
-Lesnar/Seth/Reigns/Orton - I really liked this opening. Rollins' cash-in was one of the best shock moments in history and I felt everyone reacted here in the way they should. Lesnar chasing Rollins away was good as well. The only thing I will say is I'd have liked to see Rollins watching the main event or at least have it explained he left the arena because of fear of Lesnar. Rollins vs. Reigns sounds good to me.
-The four horsewomen debuting - This felt like the most newsworthy item on the show and I like that you have called them up after Mania and you have brought all four of them up. It will be interesting to see how the tournament works as presumably, that means some of them are going to have to lose quite early. Good booking here though as you have eight strong women at the top of the division straight away. Oh, and of course Stephanie had to have her moment!
-US Open challenge - You spoiled the surprise in the pre-match description haha. Neville was a great choice though and this is one way of booking that I'm okay with as you didn't want him to lose on his first night. I hate no-contest finishes unless there's a really good reason to do them. I hope we get a Triple Threat for the title at Payback. Think that would be a good story to tell.
-Bryan vs. Ziggler - I am all in on a Best of 7 series between these two. It keeps them both busy and gives you a guaranteed epic match every time they meet on RAW, SmackDown, or PPV. The Bryan vs. Barrett match was very good as well. I think people forget how good Wade was when he was the Bad News character.
-NXT faction - Samoa Joe getting a big push straight off the bat is nice as Corbin can play the enforcer and then you have the tag team in Blake and Murphy. Good thinking and I am intrigued to see what they do from here and whether they will be chaotic or go straight into a storyline.
-Sting v Undertaker, Stardust back to Cody - Not much to say on these other than that they are great booking decisions. It gives Cody a new lease of life and the Undertaker story is a challenge for you because you have 52 weeks to keep it relevant. I reckon you'll steer clear of it for a few months.
Overall, I absolutely loved this show and enjoyed the level of detail both in the promos and matches. I really enjoy match writing myself so it is nice to read matches in detail. I will always say put the match result in spoilers though as it can take a reader right out of it. Great first show. I will be following for sure!