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will give this a read Indy
 

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thank you my man, appreciate your opinion as well even though you can't vote
 

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as I said, love your first promo
 

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This isn't a huge thing (personal preference), but you don't really have a smooth intro. Intead, you kinda just cut to the chase, straight into action.
 

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Also, this is your first sentence. One sentence: Annoyance is what I've felt ever since I came into this company. Annoyance with these ''stars'', guys like Bishop and Spawn, who've at every chance they had, made a mockery out of IWT and made a mockery out of the championships they fought for because it's a joke that they got the chances that I never got despite me putting in twice the effort, having twice as much love and dedication for this and most of all, being twice as good.
 

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that fits my character a bit imo, though, but really, when you've read the first promo, I'd feel like the first paragraph is an intro to the actual story that I'm trying to tell as well
 

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what did you think about the whole match, Dojo?
 
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