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My account is absolutely soaring
 

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Your username is ReagMaster, enough said.
 

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that's even worse
 

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Right, you've got LOADS of detail but IMO, there isn't enough dialogue (first promo only). Also, that big block of dialogue in the middle of it doesn't look appetising. A bit of paragraphing would do wonders.
 

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Drag, I was a legend on the other website before it shut down. And when that ''died'', so did I
 

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You said Tony was more relevant than I am.
 
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