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You had some good lines, but maybe focus on making your lines flow a bit more.
 

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we can have a match if you want botchie
 

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Since you mentioned you have an A in English, just like an essay, having a clear message and flow can help.
 

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Also cheers *raises glass of milk*
 

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I could do with knocking off some rust before my PPV match
 

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whatever, dark match or vice
 

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though idk how vice is booked
 

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