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"Adam Burke sits backstage as a camera is pointed at him" Like the beginning, you could have done a bit more to set the scene.
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Like maybe where he is sitting backstage, if he is in his gear, what is his mood, when does the interviewer walk in?
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As for the lines themselves, they are not bad, but like I said, I don't feel the emotion from it. Is he brushing the loss off? Is he determined? Angry?
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Just aying, he said a majority of the leagues were bad at promos, then doesn't do anything spectacular to back up his sentiments. (Not saying that there aren't bad league promoers).
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