I don't like this. Everything seems wrong, and it's just not asthetically pleasing to me. The picture is a poor choice, it seems darkened and over contrasted - making it difficult to make out detail. The background is fairly good, however doesn't help the picture. The text is poorly placed, and simple (not a bad thing, but not a good thing).
Sorry, I wish I had something positive to say on this, but I'm just not feeling it. Again, sorry.