SAW is WAR #1 Results

[Dante Cross]

Mike Wriggz vs. The C.A

Winner: Mike Wriggz​

Grader Note: Your match was much to be desired, it should be longer and more descriptive. Have it written like an actual story. Tell what went on backstage but more than that, give great descriptions of it, detail, and better visual so the reader can understand whats going on better

 

[Dante Cross]

Ladder Match: SAW TV Title Match
Alex Williamson vs. John Meno

Winner: Alex Williamson

Grader Note: Your match was much better than what you first gave, but still bad. You need to at least write a page of actual match, which is the fighting from bell to bell and actually make it seem real. Don't just throw out random moves and if you can, add feeling to your matches so that it's not as boring to read.

Also, due to the nature of this match, the title match that this was meant to be has been scratched and this was not for a title. I think both of you understand why.

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