the concept of it is good, but the way you made wasnt that good.
Why you had to have two MAIN psds?? Why not have one main psd, and the other one with less opacity? (If it was me, i would only stick to one main psd as you already got the animal rhino in the bkg).
Also the font i dont like, but what i can tell you is that you are on the right track.. keep up the practice dude.