My BTB

[Smackdowns Dead Man]

Yes all need it.

 

[Michael1]

Really rushed, and really short. Add color and space it out like others have said. Also, make it longer.

 

[Smackdowns Dead Man]

Chris Jericho vs Jeff Hardy Intercontinel Championship Steel Cage

Chris Jericho enters first Jericho is so ready for this and the fans kind of boo. Next comes the highflyer, daredevil, Intercontinel Champion Jeff Hardy the fans love him. The steel cage is sat down while they were in the ring. Ding Ding. Jeff Hardy starts this off with a sidehead lock to Jericho Jeff let go and punched Jericho in the midsection. Jeff Hardy started building up his strength and momentum, but Jericho interrupted that and put Jeff Hardy’s left arm behind him and yanked it up Jeff screamed in pain but Jeff got out of it by doing a hard back elbow to Jericho’s chin. Jericho got back up and pulled Jeff Hardy’s hair, Jericho Irish Wipped Hardy into the Steel Cage Hardy fell. Jericho started to climb but Jeff got up and pulled Jericho down and did a huge spin kick. Hardy slammed Jericho’s head into the Steel Cage over and over again. Hardy finally stopped but he didn’t stop from there he kicked Jericho in the stomach and did a DDT. Hardy started looking for a Twist of Fate but when Jericho got up and Hardy tried the Twist of Fate Jericho reversed it and did a thunderous suplex. Jericho started getting ready for a Codebreaker, Hardy got up and reversed a Codebreaker and tried a Twist of Fate but Jericho reversed that and turned it into a neckbreaker. While Hardy was on the ground Jericho turned over Hardy and started punching his back and legs and he kneeded Hardy’s back a lot. Jericho started to climb up the Steel Cage but Hardy got up and dropkicked Jericho’s leg with Jericho falling. Hardy picked up Jericho and kicked Jericho with his boot with his back crashing into the steel. Jeff Hardy picked up Jericho and did a powerbomb. Jericho was screaming in pain his back was hurt. Hardy started climbing Jericho got up and started climbing as well they both had a fist fight near the top whoever was going to fall first might just be the loser. They both kept on throwing huge right hands at each other. After about 2 minutes they fell off the near top with both of their backs hitting the floor. They were both in pain stuggling to get up. After about a minute they both made it on their feet at the same time. Jericho did a high knee with Hardy falling. Jericho turns Hardy over for the Walls of Jericho, Hardy was in pain he was just about to give up Jericho was pulling Hardy’s legs as hard as he could and finally let go. While Hardy was on the ground Jericho started stocking Hardy for a Codebreaker, Hardy got up and Jericho tried a Codebreaker by Jeff reversed it and did a Twist of Fate! The crowd started shouting he got it! he got it! with Jeff smiling he climbed the steel cage and won the match.
Winner and still Intercontinel Champion Jeff Hardy.

The Soman Bulldozer and Armando Estrada were the first one to come out. Second was The Legend Killer Randy Orton. The Hell In a Cell dropped down with Orton standing there waiting for the bell. Ding Ding. Orton and Umaga lock up, Umaga broke out of the lock up and threw Orton out of the ring with Orton almost hitting the Cell. Umaga got out of the ring and threw Orton’s arm against the Cell. And then did again and again and again and finally stopped. Umaga threw Orton in the ring and covered him 1……2….. and a kickout by Orton. Armado Estrada started talking and giving plans to Umaga and soon as Umaga turned around Orton did a low blow. Orton went out of the ring and got a steel chair. First he smacked Umaga first with the steel chair and them commanded the ref to open the door into the Cell open the ref did and Orton nailed Armando Estrada with the chair with him busted open, Orton wacked Estrada with the chair again and again until it broke the went back to the ring and covered Umaga (Umaga was still in the middle of the ring). 1… and a kickout by Umaga.
King: I probably know why Umaga kicked out of that.
JR: Because Umaga had time to rest up.
Umaga and Orton locked up again, Umaga go out of it again and picked up Orton into a huge suplex, but Umaga changed that up into a Soma Drop. Umaga covered Orton 1….. 2….. and a kickout by Orton, Umaga took Orton’s small body and tossed him out of the ring. Umaga picked Orton up in a suplex and hit his back and against Cell with Orton screaming Umaga did it again, Umaga let Orton go but started grinding his face against the Cell Orton was in pain about to get busted open about 13 seconds later Umaga let Orton go and Orton was busted open. Umaga threw him back in the ring and covered 1….. 2….. 3.. and a kickout at the last second! Umaga was frustrated want to KO Orton so bad. Armando finally got up all wobbling and started talking to Umaga again and as soon as Umaga turned around Orton dropkicked Umaga with him falling. Orton covered 1… 2… and a kickout by Umaga. Umaga was still down from that dominate dropkick and Orton got out of the ring and got another steel chair. Orton got back into the ring with the steel chair before he hit Umaga Orton started doing his Randy Orton stomps 3 hits to the right arm, 3 hits to the left arm, 3 hits to the left leg, and 3 hits to the right leg. Orton got the steel chair and put it around Umaga’s throat.
JR: I don’t like the looks of this king.
King: I don’t either.
Before Orton did anything he kicked the steel chair making it hit Umaga’s throat with Umaga screaming. Orton got on the turnbuckle and elbowed the steel chair around Umaga’s throat causing Umaga’s throat to bleed. Armando quickly tiptoed into the ring the opening the cell’s door by making the ref do it. Orton pinned Umaga not seeing Armando 1…. 2…. Armando kicked Orton in the back and Orton started saying what do you want? Finally Orton RKOed Armando then pinned Umaga with his throat still bleeding like a running waterhose. 1…. 2….3…. Here’s your winner The Legend Killer Randy Orton.

Umaga had to be taking on a stretcher with the medics putting ice on his throat with napkins with water on his throat. The medics said he’s probably going to be out of wrestling for a month.

Rob Van Dam and John Cena vs Kane and Undertaker

First to come out is Kane and Undertaker the fans kind of booed. Next came RVD and Cena. Ding Ding. First it was Cena and Kane fightning. Cena and Kane locked up, Cena pushed Kane off of him into the turnbuckle tried to clothesine him but Kane stuck his boot up into the jaw of Cena. Kane covered Cena 1… and a kickout by Cena. Kane picked up Cena dropped Cena on his knee into Cena’s jaw making it Jawbreaker. Kane start throwing right and left hands to Cena’s injured jaw. Kane dragged Cena over to his corner and tagged in Undertaker and Kane did a double jawbreaker. Undertaker pinned Cena 1… 2… and a kickout by Cena. Undertaker threw a huge right hand to Cena’s jaw with Cena falling. Undertaker got up on cena still throwing right hands at that jaw of Cena’s. Undertaker pinned 1…2… and a kickout by Cena. Cena was close to his corner and tagged stretched his arm out and got the tag, RVD started punching Undertaker in the stomach, in the face, and one in his jaw, Undertaker was still standing Undertaker kneeded RVD in the stomach with RVD falling to the ground holding his stomach Undertaker let him recover. Undertaker was behind RVD, RVD got up and Undertaker did a huge bulldog to RVD. Undertaker dragged RVD to his corner and tagged in Kane. They didn’t do a double team. Kane kicked RVD in the arm, then in the head, and next to both of his legs. Kane picked him up in a postion for a Tombstone but Cena interfered and kicked Kane in the stomach and did a hard right hand to him. Kane tagged in Undertaker and RVD tagged in Cena. Cena and Undertaker started kicking and punching each other but Cena had the upper hand because he punched and kickout Undertaker more. Cena Irish Wipped Undertaker into the turnbuckle throwing huge right hands to the Phenon, Undertaker started putting his hands up for defense and the ref stopped Cena from doing more. But Cena came back and started kicking Undertaker again and again the ref broke that up. Cena dragged Undertaker to the middle of the ring which was hard because he was heavy and locked in the STFU. Cena had it locked in for about 6 seconds until Kane kicked Cena with his boot to the jaw of Cena. Cena started rolling around cause he knew his jaw was hurt he finally tagged First to come out is Kane and Undertaker the fans kind of booed. Next came RVD and Cena. Ding Ding. First it was Cena and Kane fightning. Cena and Kane locked up, Cena pushed Kane off of him into the turnbuckle tried to clothesine him but Kane stuck his boot up into the jaw of Cena. Kane covered Cena 1… and a kickout by Cena. Kane picked up Cena dropped Cena on his knee into Cena’s jaw making it Jawbreaker. Kane start throwing right and left hands to Cena’s injured jaw. Kane dragged Cena over to his corner and tagged in Undertaker and Kane did a double jawbreaker. Undertaker pinned Cena 1… 2… and a kickout by Cena. Undertaker threw a huge right hand to Cena’s jaw with Cena falling. Undertaker got up on cena still throwing right hands at that jaw of Cena’s. Undertaker pinned 1…2… and a kickout by Cena. Cena was close to his corner and tagged stretched his arm out and got the tag, RVD started punching Undertaker in the stomach, in the face, and one in his jaw, Undertaker was still standing Undertaker kneeded RVD in the stomach with RVD falling to the ground holding his stomach Undertaker let him recover. Undertaker was behind RVD, RVD got up and Undertaker did a huge bulldog to RVD. Undertaker dragged RVD to his corner and tagged in Kane. They didn’t do a double team. Kane kicked RVD in the arm, then in the head, and next to both of his legs. Kane picked him up in a postion for a Tombstone but Cena interfered and kicked Kane in the stomach and did a hard right hand to him. Kane tagged in Undertaker and RVD tagged in Cena. Cena and Undertaker started kicking and punching each other but Cena had the upper hand because he punched and kickout Undertaker more. Cena Irish Wipped Undertaker into the turnbuckle throwing huge right hands to the Phenon, Undertaker started putting his hands up for defense and the ref stopped Cena from doing more. But Cena came back and started kicking Undertaker again and again the ref broke that up. Cena dragged Undertaker to the middle of the ring which was hard because he was heavy and locked in the STFU. Cena had it locked in for about 6 seconds until Kane kicked Cena with his boot to the jaw of Cena. Cena started rolling around cause he knew his jaw was hurt he finally tagged in RVD and Undertaker tagged in Kane punched RVD first before he could and kicked him in the stomach and DDTed him Kane covered RVD 1…2… and a kickout by RVD. Kane picked up RVD to do a backbreaker with his knee and got it, Kane covered 1…2… and a kickout by RVD. RVD was frustrated. Kane started stocking RVD for a chokeslam. Hand around the throat Kane has his hand around RVD’s throat about to pick him up into a chokeslam. Cena tried to stop it but Undertaker focused on that injured jaw of Cena’s. Kane got the chokeslam. Instead on pinning RVD he picked up Cena and tombstoned him. Kane then covered RVD 1…2…3… Here are your winners Kane and Undertaker.
in RVD and Undertaker tagged in Kane punched RVD first before he could and kicked him in the stomach and DDTed him Kane covered RVD 1…2… and a kickout by RVD. Kane picked up RVD to do a backbreaker with his knee and got it, Kane covered 1…2… and a kickout by RVD. RVD was frustrated. Kane started stocking RVD for a chokeslam. Hand around the throat Kane has his hand around RVD’s throat about to pick him up into a chokeslam. Cena tried to stop it but Undertaker focused on that injured jaw of Cena’s. Kane got the chokeslam. Instead on pinning RVD he picked up Cena and tombstoned him. Kane then covered RVD 1…2…3… Here are your winners Kane and Undertaker.

 

[The Ripper]

No offence but was that your PPV, you had 3 matches and the tag match was longer than your 2 main matches.

Also if you are trying to make this realistic you would not have a steel cage and hell in a cell match on the same card( how would you hang both above the ring)

There was 15 hours between both posts so maybe wait a few days work on your shows then post your next show, then post your next a week after that. This way you have time to work on your shows, there is no need to rush your shows out and you wont get as many reviews.

 

[The Anigma]

Obviously there's work to be done here.

First, you should restart this entire thing. Don't create a new thread just create a new "first page" with your next post. You need to increase the amount of superstars on your rosters and with how poorly your shows are done I don't think it's a good idea to have three brands (Raw, SmackDown, ECW). You should just cut it down to one show, one roster. This way it's easier for you to write matches/promos and you won't have to rush into it.

Your first show wasn't impressive and your PPV made no sense whatsoever. You had one show to hype fueds and didn't even begin any. Where did Cena/RVD vs. Kane/Undertaker come from? Your promos are not in character and your matches don't flow through properly at all. There is no details.

I'm not trying to rip into your BTB, I'm just stating facts. You're new and hopefully you can improve but as of now you are not doing a very good job.

Here's what you need to do:
- Increase your roster, cut down to one show (Raw, SmackDown or ECW).
- Be patient with your shows. There's no need to rush your shows because they will come out sloppy and no one will take you seriously.
- You need to utilize at least three shows to build up your shows before you have a pay-per-view.
- Check out some other BTB's such as The Commencement, BTW, HEW, WWE RAW, c. There are quite a few good ones here but those are the top BTB's around here.

On a positive note, your pay-per-view, most notably your tag team match, shows that there is a tiny bit of potential for you to have a decent BTB at this point. You just have to want to have a decent BTB and listen to the advice that's given to you. Again, all hope is not lost but you do need to improve quite a bit.

If you need any advice or questions, anything at all about BTB then feel free to drop me a PM or ask me a question in my thread in the BTB Lounge "Ask Anigma", I don't mind helping you out, dude.

 

[chessarmy]

Well, I guess its a PPV so here is my match by match review...

Chris Jericho vs Jeff Hardy: **, the writing needed work, but other than that I guess this was an ok match.

Umaga vs Randy Orton: **, again, the writing needed alot of work. The match didn't seem to flow very well and it didn't feel special, a HIAC match usually means that you should write an epic match, this wasn't that, it wasn't exciting, it was just...there

RVD and Cena vs Kane and Undertaker: ** 1/2, it wasn't that bad, it needed a little tweaking but I guess it was decent. Good to see Kane and Taker get the win

Line of the night: None.

Additional Thoughts: uhhh, this was a PPV right? You had 3 matches that felt like they were put together randomly and they weren't written well at all. I think you should try and go to the BTB Hand guide so you can learn the basics of BTB, then make a new one or something.

Overall Rating: 4.5 = Poor