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The Xtreme League


This is the first show of the Xtreme League. The GM , Eric Bishoff, decide to give a break to the superstar that have being trade from the other show. Those superstar involved didn't like the way that the Gm act and they will say what they think tonight. Also the qualification for the elimination chamber have now debuted each superstar that earn a place will be in the elimination chamber and this match will also involve the World Xtremist Champion, So the winner will win the Title. For tonight program there is also the Intercontinental championship that will be on the line and also the #1 contender for this same title, that mean that the winner of the #1 contender will face the Intercontinental champion at One Night in Cell in a steel cage match for the title. Hope You Fan's like this show with a lot of action !





Match #1
Finlay Vs Paul Burchill
Normal Match


The match begins and Finlay get completely dominated. Paul Burchill seems to be playing in a sandbox with his toys. He was so powerful when he performs his moves. At the beginning, Burchill and Finlay lockdown. Paul quickly performs a headlock and he transformed it in an arm twist. Finlay gets able to hit Burchill in the face to let he go away. Burchill quickly came back in the match by performing a running STO. After a few moments, Finlay gets up but quickly gets punched By Burchill before getting hit in the face by the knee of his opponent. After a few moments, Burchill grabs Finlay and lift him up on his shoulder. He was in a kind of electric chair clutch. Burchill walk a little bit in the ring with Finlay up on his shoulder trying to get out , but when he saw that Finlay was getting out, he instantly perform the Electric Chair. Burchill get the pin, but it’s was only a two count. After the pin, Burchill lock in a sleeper hold on Finley on the ground. After a few moments, Finlay takes the head of Paul and smashes it hardly on his shoulder. After this moment, Finlay begins to get the control of the situation. He gets up and hardly hit Burchill with a right hand and after with a big European Uppercut. Burchill falls down and Finlay get the pin, but only a two count. Burchill quickly get up and Finlay perform to him an Irish whip to the ropes. Finlay run toward him and perform a shoulder block. Once Paul Burchill down. Finlay bounce on the ropes and perform his signature move, The Celtic smash ( when he jump and smash his ass on the torso of is opponent. ). Finlay Lift up Paul Burchill and lift him up in a Celtic Cross Clutch. Once on , Burchill begins to move tremendously and Finlay don’t have enough power to neutralised his opponent. Burchill get the advantages and hit Finlay in the Head with his elbow and Finlay let him down. Once down, Burchill don’t waste his time, he kicks Finlay in the nuts and put him in a Spinning neck breaker clutch. Finlay try to escape so he move and he try hard , but Burchill was to strong. Once neutralised, Burchill perform his powerful Spinning Neck Breaker. Burchill Celebrate before making the pin because Finlay wasn't moving on the ground. He was like paralyzed. Burchill get the pin and successfully get the three counts for the Pinfall.



After the match Burchill Lift his and the crowd ''boo'' him. He get nervous and begins to walk rapidly to go out of the stage. He didn't know why the crowd was ''Booing'' Him, he try all to be a favourite of the fans but without success.




Match #2
MVP Vs Shelton Benjamin
Falls Count Anywhere
Intercontinental Championship
#1 Contender


Both men where in the ring and the bell rang. MVP quickly lockdown whit his opponent. Shelton Benjamin get the advantages and lock in with a head lock. MVP quickly counters performing an arm twist to Shelton. His opponent hit him in the head with his other hand and he quickly broke the submission. Shelton quickly performs after the submission that MVP did to him a low drop kick to Montel. He gets the pin, but MVP kicks out at a near two count. MVP rolls out of the ring and recover a little bit and he wait until Shelton came out. Once both men out, they exchange a lot of punches until Montel perform a body slam to his opponent. He grabs a steel chair and a sledge hammer from under the ring and he walk to the entrance ramp. Once there he waits until Shelton gets up and he came to him. Once Shelton near, MVP drops the Hammer and run toward Shelton with the steel chair in position to it him, but Shelton perform a drop kick and the steel chair hit the face of MVP. He went down and he has a broken nose, the powerful drop kick of Shelton on the chair that hit his nose just break hit. He was bleeding a lot. Shelton grabs a steel chair and hit him with it, this shot make Montel fall down. Shelton quickly get the pin , but the ref wasn't near so he came and begins to count, but Montel kick out at a two and a half count, but its was really near to a three count. Shelton grabs the Steel chair and he opens it a little bit and placed it on the left leg of Montel. He strongly hit the chair to hurt Montel . MVP was suffering from his nose and now from his left leg. He get the pin, but he kick out another time to a two and a half count. Shelton continue to assault MVP, but this time, he put the chair beyond the head of Montel and he perform a leg drop, but once near, Montel moves is head and Shelton smash his ass threw the chair. This time it was the turn to Shelton to suffer. He was hurt to the back of the leg. MVP get advantages and gets the pin, but only a two count. MVP gets up and he have a little of difficulty to get up but he have enough stability to stay up. Both men where up and they begins to punch each other. MVP connects with a strong uppercut , and Shelton reply's with a combination a jab. After a few moment, Shelton performs another low drop kick to the left leg of MVP. This move hurt Shelton a lot but he degrades the stability of MVP to get up. Montel get is right leg up but the other one stays down, he was semi-up when Shelton lock him in a Suplex clutch and he lift him up in the air to perform his good old finisher, the T-Bone Suplex, but once Montel up, he successfully get down and kick Shelton in the nuts. He grabs with difficulty his opponent and put it in a Playmaker clutch, and he did it ! Both men where in the entrance ramp, so MVP went near to the crowd to make them happy and after he make the pin. The ref was already down and he counts fastly for a three count. Montel Vantavious Porter has successfully won this match and his now the #1 contender for the Intercontinental championship.


Backstage


* The Miz was in his locker room when suddently, John Morrison enters in his room. *

Miz : And !? What did he said ?! Was he angry about our match last week ?!

Morrison : Well, yes he was angry .... Very angry, but he was also angry on Carlito and Primo. So he said that he will let us one last chance. The next time that we lose Vs a superstar from The Hardcore League, we will be fired.

Miz : So .... That mean that we just don’t have to worry about the other show and don’t mess with her to don’t have a match Vs ..... and we will be ok ?

Morrison : And there is the problem ! Next week we both have a match ... Vs. the superstar that have been transfer because of Order of Words (consider revising). So we have to prepare for next week, we don’t have to lose again !

Miz : ok ..... but John ...... Do you ask to The Gm for our Title Match ? For the tag team championship !?

Morrison : Well .. Eric Bishoff said that if we win our match next week, we will face Carlito and Primo .... at One Night In Cell for the Tag Team Championship..... In a Steel Cage Match.

Miz : Nice ... so we got it ! We have our title match all set for One Night In Cell !

Morrison : No Miz .... before we have to win our next match and this wont be easy, face Vladimir Kozlov and Umaga at same time , two monsters in one ring Vs us .... we have to found a good strategies before next week.

Morrison : It’s all what I have to say. I have to go now, if you need me , ill be in my locker room come see me if you have an idea.
* Morrison went out of the room quickly and the show goes on commercial break. *.


Match #3
Brie and Nikki Bella Vs Michelle McCool and Maryse
Normal Match



Brie Bella begins in the ring versus Michelle McCool. Both Women move tranquilly in the ring since Michelle McCool lock in a head lock. Brie Bella perform whit her strong abilities a kick in the back of the head of McCool. She fall down and brie make a pin , but without chance it was only a two count. Maryse enters in the ring to help her partner, but she quickly gets escorted by the ref to the apron. The match continues, when both women’s were in the ring in the same way that in the beginning. This time, they lockdown and Maryse get the advantages when she took the hair of Brie Bella and she begins to shake them wildly. The ref count to four for the DQ , but McCool let Brie down and she get back a little bit. She went to tag Maryse. Brie tries to do the same thing for their team , but she was enabling. Once Brie near to reach her partners, Maryse came and drag her near to her team corner. Once there she performs a sharpshooter. Maryse lock in very well the submission, they were no escape, but Brie ramp a little moment and she grabs the rope and that made her get out of the submission. After the rope break, Brie quickly get up and perform a drop kick to her oppent even if she was hurt. Maryse get hardly hit, she gets push back very fast and she enters in her partner. McCool fall down from the apron and Maryse was down. Brie goes desperately tag Nikki Bella. She enters in the ring and performs a victory roll pin, but the leg of Maryse touches the ropes. Maryse get up before Nikki and when she was up, Maryse throw her in the corner. She lifts her up the top rope and took her in a power bomb clutch. Maryse lift her in the air and begin to walk in the ring. Maryse pass near of Brie, and at this moment, Nikki tags her without being seen by Maryse. Brie get in the ring and perform a back pin. Nikki fall down and hit Michelle McCool that was trying to interfere during her fall from the power bomb clutch. Brie was holding the pin and the ref begins to count until a three count to give a victory to the Bella Twins.


Backstage


Jay Lethal, Shark boy, Eric Young , Sting and Aj Styles were all walking together in the backstage with the GM Eric Bishoff. He was doing a guide tour to show all the offices and the lookers room to each wrestler.

Eric Bishoff : Well I think that I show all to you guys, now its time to me to go.

Sting : Wait,wait,wait.* He grabs the shoulder of the Gm that was walking howay* We wanted to know when will we be in action ! Tonight we was supposed to be in a match ,but we didn't !

Eric Bishoff : Calm Down ... I have good plans for all of you guys. I already think for the matches of next week and all of you will be in action.

Aj Style : Can we know ,at least , what will be ours matches ?

Eric Young : And also know if its 100 % sure that we compete !

Eric Bishoff : Yes ... yes, all of you will compete for sure, but for the matches ...its supposed to be a mystery before all the card are revealed but ... Ok ill tell it. first, Jay Lethal you will face Sharkboy and Eric Young in a triple threat normal match and the winner will face MVP and the Intercontinental champion at One Night In Cell for the Championship in a steel Cage match. Second , Sting you will face Aj Styles ! and the winner will earn a spot in the elimination chamber match at One Night In Cell for the World Xtremist Championship. Well that’s all I can say ... Now I have to go.


* Eric Bishoff walk to his office *

Jay Lethal : I know that we are supposed to be allies, but I wont give any chances in this match. This is the best chance for all of us to grave our name in this great historic show, and I won’t let this opportunity pass in front of me without trying to get it.

*Jay Lethal push a little bit Aj Styles and continues is way without saying a word and without looking the other superstars. Every superstars present in this moment get freeze by the act of black machismo when suddently Dolph Ziggler appeared in the screen*

Dolph Ziggler : Hi ..... I'm Dolph Ziggler .

* Nobody look at him. They just all walk away in a different way without saying a word.*

Dolph Ziggler : Him Happy to meat you ...

* Ziggler look at them with a disgusted face and the shows goes on the commercial break. *

Match #4
Kane Vs JBL Vs Mike Knox
No DQ
Intercontinental Championship Match


All three monsters were in the ring and the bell rang. Mike Knox was the first to move. He furiously attacks Kane and after a few moment, JBL came to help Knox to assault Kane. The assaulted superstar fall down and roll out of the ring. Mike Knox look at him when suddently Lawfield came and perform a back pin to Knox, the ref count until two when suddently Kane enters in the ring and broke the pin. Kane lift JBL and throw him on Knox that was up near of him. Knox grabs John in the air and performs a bear hug. After a few moment, Kane came near of them and smash their head together. Knox and Bradshaw were confused a few second and after they allies to perform a coco nut crush to Kane combine with a successfully clothesline. Once Kane down , JBL turn his head on Knox. JBL grabs the head of Knox and bring him on the corner. JBL begins to punch furiously Knox with some uppercut and some straight punch in the stomach until the ref came interfere , but JBL doesn't care of the ref because it was a No DQ. He told him to stop a few time but without chance, John continues to punch Knox until Kane kick up. Once up he look at JBL. Kane touch the shoulder of JBL and when he turns his head, Kane choke him, and lift him in the air and begins to walk in the ring. Mike Knox quickly come from the back and smashes his shoulder on the knee of Kane and JBL successfully get down. John hit Kane with his elbow in his head. Knox helps JBL to beat Kane once he was down. After a few moment, JBL prepare himself for a clothesline from hell to Kane. Once Kane up, he run ,but suddently he change his trajectory and hit Knox with the clothesline. JBL get the pin, but Kane quickly kick him to break the pin.
Kane kick Knox until he fall out of the ring. Kane lift up JBL and throw him on the corner. He lifts him up on the third rope and chokes him. Kane perfome a super chokeslam from the top turnbuckles. The crowd was crazy ! cane get the pin and the ref count until a three count for the victory. Kane goes out of the ring and go get his Title.

Suddently the ref saw the leg of JBL touching the ropes. He went to see the replay and he saw that the leg was touching the rope before the three count. The ref calls back Kane in the ring and he tells that the match wasn't finish.

Kane enters furiously in the ring to end the match rapidly and get out of the ring with the title the fastest possible. Kane take his title with both hand and he strongly hit JBL right in the skull. JBL didn't fall but he was tumbling in the ring. Kane take him in a chokeslam clutch and he slams it ! At the second that finish performing his finisher, Mike Knox came from the back and strongly hit Kane in the back of the head with a steel chair. Mike Knox when near of JBL and he get the pin. He successfully get a three count for the victory. Knox grab his title and he didn't celebrate, he just take it and went out of the ring and he walk until he get out of the stage.


Backstage


*Matt Hardy was preparing himself for his match that was up next when suddently Chris Jericho enter in his locker room where he was.*

Matt Hardy : What do you want to me ! get out of here !

*Matt bring Jericho out of his locker room and close the door but Chris stop it*

Chris Jericho : Wait I come to talk with you about our match of tonight, I came here like a allies.

Matt Hardy : Chris I don’t trust you ! Just get out of here !

Chris Jericho : No ! I'm serious, at least let me tell to you my proposition.

Matt Hardy : Ok ! Fine ! But do this quick !

Chris Jericho : Ok, lets start. Tonight we both have to face The Undertaker. I know that he is able to destroy everything that come to his hand and he will try to destroy us in this ring, but if we allies together, we have a lot of chances to beat the hell up of Taker. what do you think about this ?

Matt Hardy : Ok... lets see something. I help you and you help me. We both destroy The Undertaker and after ? I do my finisher .... ok ... and after ?! You will get the opportunity to knock me down and pin Taker to get the win ?! Chris seriously I don’t trust you !

Chris Jericho : Well for this I have a plan. The people that make his finisher have the opportunity to pin Taker. If you knock me down or I do it to you to pin Taker , you will decide my match for next week and the same thing to me !

Matt Hardy : Ok ... Like this its perfect! But Now get out of my locker room !

*Matt let Chris get out of the room and slam the door when Jericho was out.*


Match #5
Undertaker Vs Matt Hardy Vs Chris Jericho
No DQ
Qualification for the elimination chamber



*Before the match begins, Chris whisper something in the ear of Matt Hardy *

All the three superstar were in the ring. Matt and Chris were together in one side of the ring and in the opposite side of the ring they were only the Undertaker. This match seems like a handicap but it wasn't. The bell finally ring to announce the debut of the match. Chris and Matt quickly get out of the ring. They both grab a weapon from under the ring. Matt grabs a steel chair and Chris takes a candle stick. Both superstar went on the opposite side of the ring to assault the Undertaker more easily. They enters in the ring at same time and The Undertaker was ready to fight, but he completely get dominate by Matt and Chris because of they're weapon. After a few moment both men throw their weapon out of the ring and they begins to kick and punch Taker down. After, both men lift him up and they throw him in the corner. They both combine punches and kicks that were strictly illegal but it was a NO-DQ so its doesn't matter even if the ref advertise her a few times. They were both assaulting Undertaker until he choked them. Undertaker holds the two superstar and he bring her in the middle of the ring. Once in the middle, he tries to perform his choke slam, but both men counters and perform a double DDT. None of the superstars make a pin, they just wait until He gets up. Once up, Taker looks with a scary face both superstar. He run and perform a clothesline to both superstars. This clothesline made fall both superstars out of the ring. Chris directly fall on the steel chair that Matt throw out of the ring before and Matt just fall down. After a few moment, the ref tells to the superstars out of the ring to get in, but they totally ignored him and they stay out to recover their energies. Chris tells something in the ear of Matt , but it was incomprehensible for the crowd. Chris enters in the ring and Matt stay out. In the ring, Chris lives is more terrible moment in the ring. He completely get dominated by The Undertaker. The Phenomenal perform a powerfully combination of punches. After, he throws Jericho on the corner and he performs a Old School. Matt stays out of the ring. The plan was supposed to be that Matt come help him but he didn't. Taker puts Jericho in a Tombstone clutch, but once in this position, Jericho hardly hit the nuts of Taker with his head. Jericho gets on his feet and quickly performs a code breaker. Matt Hardy quickly gets in the ring to interfere once Taker down. Matt looks at Jericho and makes a sign of acceptation for him to do a pin. Jericho get the pin, but Taker kicks out at two. Everyone was thinking that the match would end there but they were wrong. After this, Matt lift up the Undertaker and quickly perform a twist of fate. Matt and Chris went both nose to nose. Chris told to Matt that he was a honest men and that he wont interfere to pin The Undertaker. Matt goes on Taker to make the pin. When the ref count to two, Chris goes over Matt. He grabs is legs and put it on a Walls of Jericho Cloth. Chris bring him in the middle on the ring and successfully lock the submission. they were no escape. After a few moment, Matt wasn't able to get the ropes so he tap out to let the victory to Chris Jericho.

After his victory to earn a place in the elimination chamber, Jericho quickly get out of the stage looking at Matt and to the Undertaker. Once Jericho out, Matt was afraid of Taker so he quickly get out of the stage to and the shows goes on commercial break.



Match #6
Cm Punk Vs Triple H
Xtreme Rules
World Xtremist Championship


The match begins and both men prepare herself before this match for the main championship of the Xtreme League. The bell rang and both superstar lock down. Triple H get the advantages and perform a head lock. Cm Punk counters the Head lock and perform a arm twist. Triple H quickly get out and perform a powerfull right hand punch in the face of Punk. He fight back and perform a combination of back slap until Triple H get in the corner. Once there, Punk goes back and run toward Triple H to perform is knee to the face combine with a bulldog , but once Punk in the air, Triple H make himself fall to dodge the move of Punk. Once down, Hunter roll out of the ring. He search under the ring and pick up a table. He open it and let it there. He searches for another weapon and this time he pick up a Steel Chair. He enters in the ring with it and tries to hit Punk with it, but he counter passing under is arm and quickly performs a kick to the foot of Hunter. That makes him fall down. Punks quickly perform a leg drop, but Hunter counters and get up. triple H throws punk on the corner and he run with him to perform a spear when he arrives on the corner. Punk was realty hurt and he stays on the corner. Triple H goes back and run toward Punk to perform another spear, but this time Punk roll under Triple H and he Hit his shoulder on the steel post. Once he came back with his two feet touching the ring, Cm Punk perform a back pin, but Triple H successfully get out after a two count. Cm Punk gets up before Hunter and he wait until his opponent get up. Once up, Cm punk performs to the kings of kings a combination of kick. After the last one, Triple H fall down, but quickly get up. Cm Punk run toward him and Hunter counter performing a spine buster. Triple H does his taunt and he was ready for the pedigree. Cm Punk gets up and Triple H kicks him in the nuts. He put him in a pedigree clutch and try to perform the pedigree but Cm Punk begins to move furiously to get out of the pedigree and he successfully get out of the clutch, but Triple don’t let him go like this, he quickly run toward punk and perform a spear and he combine punching him in the face once he was down. Triple H get up and lift up Punk with him. He performs a Irish whip to Cm Punk and Punk goes on the corner. Triple H lift up very easily Punk on the third rope. Hunter was thinking to perform a inverse electric chair so punk will fall down head first and He will fall on his back. Triple H puts is head into the middle of the legs of Punk to lift him up , but once his head there, Punk squeeze his leg and Triple H couldn't move. Cm Punk grabs the two hand of Triple H * the same thing that triple H do when he do his pedigree. * and he bring him on the top of the turnbuckles. Once there, Triple H try to get out but it was to late. Punk perform a Pepsi Plunge to Triple H from the top to the table that Triple H have put in the beginning of the match. After performing his finisher, Punk was down with Triple H ,but he get up before his opponent. He lifts up Hunter and brings him in the ring. Triple H was semi-unconscious he didn't do nothing to enter in the ring, Cm Punk has throw him in the ring and after make him roll to get him in the middle of the ring. Punk gets in the ring and jumped on Triple H to get the pin. The ref count slowly, but its was a three count ! Cm Punk has won the Championship !


After the match, Punk grabs his title with his two hand and does a hug to it. After he climbs on the top turnbuckles and celebrate with the crowd his victory. During this time Triple H stay down in the ring. After celebrating, Punk get out of the ring and takes some photo with the fans before going out of the stage. Once Punk out, Triple H ramp to the first rope in direction of the Titration. The cams focus him and we could see his lips saying :You will pay it to me Punk !



********


What's New ?

Xtreme League

Negociating With Rob Van Dam for a contract of 3.89 M$
Accepted
Negociating With The Brian Kendrick for a contract of 2.85 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Paul London for a contract of 2.56 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Sandman for a contract of 1.50 M$ Failed


Hardcore League

Negociating With Jack Swagger for a Contract of 2,43 M$
Accepted
Negociating With Ted Dibiase Jr. for a contract of 2.90 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Cody Rhodes for a contract of 1.54 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Kofi Kingston for a contract of 1.55 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Snitsky for a contract of 1.28 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Elijah Burk for a contract of 1.61 M$ Accepted
Negociating With Joey Mercurey for a contract of 1.41 M$
Failed


 

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That was a nice show. Now, I will write the worst match, the best match, the best promo, the worst promo. and the OMG moment of the episode.I don't rate the divas matches because it is not fair. Normally, the divas matches are allways the worst. So here it goes...

The Best Match:
Match #5
Undertaker Vs Matt Hardy Vs Chris Jericho
No DQ
Qualification for the elimination chamber

Reason: At the end, I did not see that coming and It was exciting. I loved that match. I feel bad for Matt Hardy tho. :p Anyways, a good advise, you should make a great storyline with this. Hope you will.

The Worst Match:
Match #2
MVP Vs Shelton Benjamin
Falls Count Anywhere
Intercontinental Championship
#1 Contender

Reason:In a falls count anywhere match, It's normaly the best match of the show but that was the worst match of the episode. It should've been longer and they could've went backstage or in the crowd to make It more exciting. They just when onto the entrance ramp. Damn. I'm just sayin'.

The Best Promo:
Jay Lethal, Shark boy, Eric Young , Sting and Aj Styles were all walking together in the backstage with the GM Eric Bishoff. He ...
reason: It was the best promo because It was long and interesting. and most of all, I liked the idea of Dolph Ziggler. If he would be on my show, I would forget about it. Anyways, it was the best promo.

The Worst Promo:
* The Miz was in his locker room when suddently, John Morrison enters in his room...reason:I don't know man. Normally, John Morrison and the Miz are cocky and confident. but John Morrison... gosh. I looked like he was sick or something. He wasn't confident as he is normally. Anyways maybe its part of your storyline... I don't know.

The OMG moment of the show:
Punk perform a Pepsi Plunge to Triple H from the top to the table that Triple H have put in the beginning of the match. After performing his finisher, Punk was down with Triple H ,but he get up before his opponent. He lifts up Hunter and brings him in the ring. Triple H was semi-unconscious he didn't do nothing to enter in the ring, Cm Punk has throw him in the ring and after make him roll to get him in the middle of the ring. Punk gets in the ring and jumped on Triple H to get the pin. The ref count slowly, but its was a three count ! Cm Punk has won the Championship !
reason::It's been a long time since Cm Punk did the pepsi plunge and I did see that coming. And CM Punk wining the Heavyweight Championship against The King Of Kings was amazing! Way to go!.

Negative things:
The thing the more negative I have to say about that episode was... There wasn't In ring segments. I love to read In ring segments. PLus, to start a premiere show with a match, is definitly boring. You should start with a greater match. But the first match was one of the best. There was no ''Intro'' for example. You should make the commentators speak. I'm just sayin'.

Positive things:
The matches were long and simple. Which was fun to read. You don't write all the info. I love your style of writing. It is different from others. Your segments are long and simple.

Great Show!

LuigiTheMan

Continue writing...!
 

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Nice Show. I really like the concept you used for the show, with the cap salary, and free agents. It works out well. I hope you post you're next show soon.
 

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My review


You need some kind of opening, not just starting it with match. Have the announcers welcome everybody with like a preview of what is going on or some kind of promo. These are the kinds of things people like to read not really matches.

The Finlay/Burchill match for me was terrible as it was hard to read because of the grammar errors. This stopped the match from flowing. Everybody has mistakes but as long as they don't effect what is going on I overlook them. You strangely capitalzied words that shouldn't be and just used phrases that didn't make sense.Go back and read the matches yourself before you post.

Two matches in a row without anything else is another bad move. Stick some kind of promo in there my man. I was hoping the first match was just bad and things would get better but the MVP/Shelton match was just as bad. It almost makes it impossible to read really. I'll give you some examples....MVP locks down whit his opponent...get the advantages....Shelton quickly performs after the submission MVP did to him a low drop kick....Once both men out....He strongly hit the chair....suffering from his nose....Its just bad my man.

The first promo is just as bad as the matches. Take time and read your stuff my man instead of quickly posting stuff please.

I don't know if you are young or something is getting lost between me being an American and you are Canadian but truthfully this is a total disaster. It is so bad and the show doesn't get better in the other matches so I'm not commenting the same things over and over again. I'm just being honest my man.
 

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Well its toff to get all this in on shot , but its ok :p Now i' m making my Hardcore show and it will be much better with a lot of promo and with commentators. It will be much better ! Scuse me for this last scrape
 
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I don't know if you are young or something is getting lost between me being an American and you are Canadian but truthfully this is a total disaster. It is so bad and the show doesn't get better in the other matches so I'm not commenting the same things over and over again. I'm just being honest my man.

His first language is not English, and he still doesn't get it. Thumbs up for persistence and enthusiasm, but almost everybody turns the other way when he posts a show.

What advice you give will be lost in translation.

He's flogging a dead horse repeatedly, and it's excruciating. So why am I reading? I like car crashes.

Ok. That's it. Until I have something constructive to add in this thread (which I will not), I will refrain from posting on here.
 

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The Hardcore League
Show #1
Western Australia; Perth - Burswood Dome
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Mick Foley: Welcome everybody to the first show of The Hardcore League!
Hot Rod: Last Night, Some superstars have been trade here thanks to the great victory’s superstars here.
Mick Foley: and there his some superstar that will be felicitated by the GM.
Hot Rod: and it’s the cause and to Team 3D
Mick Foley: Yeah they will have to title match because of there win.
Hot Rod: the Gm gives them a great gift
Mick Foley: Yeah it’s the best opportunity for that team to win this title.
Hot Rod: Also tonight, the qualification for the elimination chamber begins here tonight! I can’t wait to see who will be in it!
Mick Foley: Me to Rod! And I have to say that here the title will be put on the line only at one night in cell! So this match will shows us the first World Heavyweight Champion ever here!
Hot Rod: it’s a different way of the Xtreme league that already has their champion! Cm Punk! Congratulation if you are watching it was an amazing match with a lot of action.
Mick Foley: Well its now time for the action!
*Brutus Magnus Music Hits*
Hot Rod: Its Brutus Magnus making is way to the ring,
Mick Foley: And we will find out his opponent after the break!


==Commercial Break==



Match #1
Chavo Guerrero Vs Brutus Magnus
Normal Match

Both men make their entrance and the fight begins. Chavo shot some powerful right punches on Brutus, but his opponent gets strong enough to resist and to fight back performing a powerful body slam. Chavo grabs the ropes to get up and once up his get punch again in the skull. This powerful punch make him fall, but he instantly get up and this time when he was up, Magnus run toward him to perform a clothesline, but Chavo pass under his arm and rapidly get a back pin. Chavo doesn’t hold his opponent strong enough to hold the pin so Brutus easily gets out. Both men were up in the ring and the combine with a lockdown. Magnus get the advantage and throw Chavo on the corner. He runs to perform a clothesline on the corner, but once near of Chavo, his opponent jump holding the ropes and kick him in the face. Brutus Magnus get hurt to the nose and get stun. Chavo get the opportunity and he jumped in one shot on the third rope. When Magnus turn back, he saw Chavo on the top. He tries to hit him to make him fall, but Chavo counter him by pushing him away. Chavo jumped from the top to perform a body splash pin. When this superb maneuver end, the ref quickly began the count until he get to two and Brutus kick out. Chavo was impressed by his opponent, but e doesn’t give up. He lifts up his opponent and performs an Irish whip, but Magnus counter it and perform him the same thing. Chavo was in the corner and Brutus Magnus begins to punch him in the stomach. After the ref tell hi m to stop, he stop but came again assault Chavo. After a few moments he lifts him up on the third turnbuckles. He grabs Chavo in a Superplex clutch and tries to perform it, but Chavo fights back and get the advantages and push his opponent down. He put his two feet on the third turnbuckles and he jump to perform a frog splash. Once he it his opponent with this strong attack, he get the pin and successfully get a three count.


==Commercial Break==


Mick Foley: We are back here live and what a great victory from Chavo
Hot Rod: I wasn’t really in favor of Chavo but he proves to the fans that he has a lot of talent and I love this!
Mick Foley : Yeah he is a great superstar with a lot of ability but some time he don’t give the 100 % and that’s why the GM doesn’t put him in serious match.
Hot Rod: but that wasn’t the case of Tonight!
Mick Foley: Well now lets see who will make is entrance.
* MCMG Music hits*
Hot Rod: The HWF Tag Team Title is on the line right here right now!
Mick Foley: Be Tuned this match promise a lot of action! I can’t wait to see the first champ here in this show!


Match #2
Alex Shelley and Chris Sabin Vs Brother Ray and Brother Devon
Normal Match
HWF Tag Team Title Match

The match starts up and Alex Shelley enters in the ring at the same time that Brother Devin in the other team. Both superstar’s lockdown, but Devon quickly gets the advantage. He hit him with his elbow and combines with a right hand on the face of Alex. After those strong punches, Brother Devon throw his opponent on the ropes and when he come back , he run toward him and perform a powerful knee to the stomach. Once he gets hit, Alex makes a front lift and crash on the middle of the ring. Brother Devon grabs Alex by the head and brings him on his corner to complete with a tag. Ray enters in the ring and Devon was holding Alex. Ray begins a great combination of punch on the stomach of Alex and finish it with a powerful punch in the head, but Alex gets fast enough to dodge this punch. Devon gets the powerful punch of his partner right on his face. Ray quickly goes near of Devon to help him and to say that it wasn’t is fault. Alex quickly performs a drop kick to both superstars at the same time and they both fall out of the ring. The Head of Ray knocks the apron before he smashes himself on the ground.

==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: We are back here live and what a great match!
Hot Rod: Yeah! It was amazing! But maybe the Fan’s didn’t saw it.
Mick Foley: Well let’s show the replays of what happened during the commercial break.
*Replay: Alex Shelley waits until Ray gets back in the ring. Once there he grab him and went to tag Chris. Both men were in the ring and they perform a Double suplex slam.
Hot Rod: That was amazing! They combine their forces to lift up Ray!
Mick Foley: That’s a real tag team the help each other to win the match. I hope they can have the opportunity to win this title here tonight.
Hot Rod: Me to but well … Let’s focus on the match now.

Alex Shelley was now on the apron and Chris Sabin was in the ring. In the other team Brother Ray was encore in the ring. Chris Sabin dominates Ray because of his fast abilities. After a few moment of dodging all the attack of Ray, Chris decide to perform a Hurricuranna, but once on top of his opponent, Ray counter and perform a front face buster. Once his opponent down, he combine performing a knee drop. He gets the pin, but Chris kicks out a two. Ray brings him on his corner and tag Devon. Devon climb on the top turnbuckles and Ray was holding Chris down. Devon jump and smash with his two feet the torso of Chris. He quickly gets the pin but it was only a two count. Chris was hurt on the torso and he have a lot of difficulty to get up so he stay down to recover a little bit, but during this time, Devon run toward the ropes to get more speed and when he come back he perform a elbow drop on the torso of Sabin. Devon lift his opponent up and push him with is shoulder until he knocks him on the corner. Once there, he performs in the same position a combination shoulder smash on the torso of Sabin. Alex Shelley was in the apron on the same side of this assault and he was looking. After a second, Alex runs on the apron and kicks Devon in the back of the head. Devon was confused from this last shot from Shelley and Chris get the opportunity to get out of this situation and to recover a little bit. Chris went in from of his opponent and goes for a Cradle Shock, but he didn’t get the force to lift his opponent up. Chris was trying to lift him up, but Brother Devon quickly strikes with an elbow right beyond the face of Sabin. Devon takes him by the air and by the pants and throws him shoulder first on the steel post. Brother Devon waits until Chris Sabin gets back on his two feet in front of him, but that didn’t happened. Devon wait, but Sabin didn’t move he was to hurt to move, so Shelley quickly gets in the ring without being seen by Devon. He run and grabs his head and he jumps on the third rope and quickly finishes performing his finisher the Shellshock. Brother Ray enters in the ring but he quickly gets kick in the face and because of the power he fall down and get out of the ring. The ref brings Shelley on the apron and during this time, Sabin goes for the pin. The ref count and successfully get the win.

Shelley went out of the ring and gets the both title and brings them in the ring. He gives one of them to his partner and they both celebrate a long moment in the ring.

Mick Foley: That was amazing! I didn’t see that coming miles away!
Hot Rod: Me to! Before the last moment I was sure that the victory will go for the Team 3D, but I was wrong!
Mick Foley: In this show, all its possible! There is a lot of surprise now.
Hot Rod: and they will be more! I’m sure!
Mick Foley: Well … Now there is something happening backstage lets see what is about.
*All the new superstar sign plus the GM appeared on the Titration talking Backstage.*
Hot Rod: Well it seems to be all the new superstar here, with the GM! What are they doing there?!
Mick Foley: We will find out after the break.

==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: We are back here live and let’s see what this is about.
Hot Rod: It should be interesting.

Backstage
*On the Titration*

Jonathan Coachman: Well hi everybody, it’s your Gm talking now Jonathan Coachman and I have a special announcement to say now. Well as you see, a convict all the new superstars recently sign in my office to talk about something. This something is very interesting because it will let an opportunity for one superstar to get a spot in the Hardcore Elimination Chamber match at One Night in Cell.

* Every superstar has a cocky smile on there face*

Jonathan Coachman: But, only one of you guys will go in this match and to get this spot you will have to eliminate the other one the be the last one standing in the ring. Yup! This match is a 6-Man over the top rope match and the winner will be in the elimination chamber match like I said before.
Jack Swagger: Ok… ok …. Enough coach. I know that I am the first choice of this show and everybody knows that I will win this match! Why put a match if you know that I’m better then everyone.

Ted Dibiase Jr.: Wow … what you say?! You …. Win the match….. Ha ha ha ha ha! Well I don’t know if you know that we are tag team me and Cody and be sure that we won’t let win this match. Be Ready!

Kofi Kingston: Maybe you guys will both allies to eliminate Jack but be ready I will be near to eliminate you! I am the one that will win!

After that Kofi Kingston finishes his last word, Snitsky take his head and throw him on Elijah Burk. Dibiase and Rhodes quickly jumped on Snitsky and begin to punch him. Jack Swagger retires him back and let the other’s fights.

Jonathan Coachman: Stop! STOP!!!!!!!! GET OUT OF MY OFFICE!!!!! I WONT TOLERATE THIS ANYMORE!! YOURE PROBLEME WILL BE SOON FINISH AFTER THIS MATCH!


Mick Foley: Well …. That was it … A great 6-man over the top rope.
Hot Rod: I think that Jack Swagger wasn’t wrong. He is bigger and stronger then the other superstar. He has a lot of chance to win and he is the favourite of the fan.
Mick Foley: Well I’m happy for them, but I’m more exited for the next match!
Hot Rod: Yeah and we have some Beautiful Divas here!
*Awesome Kong music hits*
Mick Foley: Well … this is not my type of girl … but if you like it like this ….
*Trish Stratus music hits*
Hot Rod: That is the girl that I like! She is so great and beautiful! Trish Stratus! Omg I can’t wait to see her fighting!
Mick Foley: Well its right after the break!

==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: Trish Stratus just finish her entrance and its now time for the match!
Hot Rod: Remember that the winner of this match will earn a match for the women’s championship! And her opponent will be decide next week.
Mick Foley: Do U know in witch match?
Hot Rod: No But It will be announce next week! Here!



Match #3
Trish Stratus Vs Awesome Kong
Hardcore Match
#1 contender for the Women’s Championship


The match begins and both women’s look each other. Awesome Kong was bigger and stronger then Trish Stratus, but she was faster then her. The match begins and Kong quickly smash Trish and she fall down. She lifts her up and hit her again and she fall once again. Awesome Kong lifts her and throws her in the rope and when she came back Awesome Kong perform a shoulder block. She combines with an elbow drop. Kong goes on Trish and she begins to punch her in the head and after combine by grabbing her hair. He begins to shake them wildly and at same time she smashes her head on the ring. The ref wanted to stop the match but he couldn’t it was a Hardcore match, so the match continues and Trish get completely dominated. After a few moments, Trish could neutralised her opponent using her flexibility by kicking her in the back of the head. Awesome Kong get stun but he didn’t fall. Trish strike again with another kick and this time Awesome Kong get off of Trish. Trish gets up and begins to kick Awesome Kong until this monster get up. Once up, Trish didn’t play with fire, she just gets out of the ring. Once out, she takes from under the ring a steel chair. She throws the chair in the ring and Kong quickly gets it before her opponent. Trish get in the ring and Awesome King quickly put the chair over her head to hit her opponent, but once near, Trish perform a drop kick in the head of Awesome Kong and she get stunned. Trish quickly perform a Stratus faction, the crowd was crazy! Trish gets the pin and successfully wins to earn a match at One Night in Cell!


Mick Foley: That was incredible I didn’t see this coming! Trish Stratus beat Awesome Kong! No way!
Hot Rod: But this is actually possible she just prove it! It was short, but great!
Mick Foley: Evan if the match is boring just looking at Trish you get in love with the match.
Hot Rod: That’s a real fact!
*Elijah Burk Music hits*
Mick Foley: Well it seems to be the Battle Royal right now!
Hot Rod: Yes it is! The newest superstar here will all be in the same ring trying to put the other out of the ring!
Mick Foley: Well its now time for a break and we will back soon with a lot of action.

==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: We are back here live and during the break, all the superstars make their entrance excepted for one.
*Jack Swagger music hits.*
Hot Rod: Yeah the good old All American American Jack Swagger the favourite of the fans here!
Mick Foley: Yeah and it was a good buy for the company. I think he can revolutionize the show with some good idea.
Hot Rod: Well now that he make his entrance it’s now time to focus for the match.
Match #4
Swagger Vs Dibiase Vs Rhodes Vs Snitsky Vs Burk Vs Kingston
6-man over the top rope
Qualification for the elimination chamber


The match begins and every superstar went on Snitsky except for Jack Swagger. All the other superstar tries to eliminate Snitsky but they were enable because of his size. This monster fights back and punches every superstar in the ring except for Swagger. Once he demolishes everyone in the ring, Jack Swagger run toward him and perform a clothesline. Snitsky get hit and he pass over the third rope, but he gets on the apron with a lot of luck. Swagger didn’t let him a chance, he perform a big boot on is face and this time he completely fall out of the ring. Jack was the author of the first elimination.


Mick Foley: And it’s the first elimination!
Hot Rod: How can Snitsky can be eliminated first! He is bigger and stronger then the other!
Mick Foley: But when they are five versus you, you have no choice to quit.
Hot Rod: Yes and whatever, the fans didn’t like him and me to!
Mick Foley: Well these are strong words but …. Let’s continue the match.
Hot Rod: Actually there are only five superstars in the ring and four may go out to have a winner.

The match continues and the five superstars remaining were in a circle looking at each other and thinking of a strategy. Elijah Burk quickly run toward Kofi and perform a shinning wizard. Burk combine, once Kofi down, a combination of punches. Ted Dibiase and Cody Rhodes quickly involved themselves in the fight by assaulting Elijah Burk from the back. Ted Dibiase holds Burk in a full nelson clutch and Cody Rhodes begins to punch Burk in the stomach and in the face. Both superstars have no mercy, they just demolish his opponent, until Kofi came from the back and perform a Trouble In paradise to the three superstars in one shot because they were all close. All three superstars that were hit by this finisher fall down and they were now only two superstars up in the ring. Jack Swagger was watching the action and when he saw that they were only him and Kofi up, he decides to do something. He quickly locks down with Kofi and he quickly gets the advantages. He performs to Kofi a body slam and he combine with a elbow drop. Once Kofi get up, Jack was waiting for him and he performs his powerful finisher to Kofi to throw him out of the ring. Jack Swagger was celebrating in the ring and he think that Kofi was out, but Kofi holds the ropes and only one of his foot have touch down so he make a back flip and get on the apron. Jack Swagger was encore celebrating when suddently, Kofi jump on the third rope and perform a spring board face crusher to Swagger. After this strong hit, Jack Swagger was bleeding! All the fans react badly after this last shot. The fans favourite stays down for a long moment. During this time, Cody and Ted gets up and they both lift up Burk. The begin to punch and kick him before the finish him throwing him out of the ring with a powerful tag team suplex.


Mick Foley: Wow I loves how those guys wrestle ! They make thing about me when I was younger and I was wrestling with WWE.
Hot Rod: Well that was the good old time….
Mick Foley: Yes …. But now we are old enough to never wrestles again … Ok well now let’s talk a little about the situation of the match.
Hot Rod: The only thing I have to say it’s that Jack Swagger is doesn’t proving anything now …. He’s just playing safe watching the fights from his corner.
Mick Foley: I’m totally with you ,but I have to admit that it’s a good strategy because like this he will have more energy in the end of the match to throw out the last ones.
Hot Rod: It may be a good strategy but now … he is the only one bleeding … and that doesn’t make sense…
Mick Foley: But he still strong enough to beat the hell of all the other superstars.
Hot Rod: Maybe if you said it ….. We will see this after the break.

==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: We are back here live and nothing interesting happened during the commercial only one good action from the part of Kofi
* Replay : After that Cody Rhodes and Ted Dibiase eliminates Burk, Kofi Kingston come behind and perform a drop kick to both superstars, The made a flip over the ropes but quickly stand up on the apron. Kofi run toward them to make them fall, but Ted and Cody were faster them him because once he was near, they both hit him in the head before him and they enters in the ring. *
Hot Rod: Well you guys didn’t miss nothing special else except for this.
Mick Foley: Now let’s see what the fight will continue.
Hot Rod: With only four man in the ring.

Ted Dibiase and Cody Rhodes quickly perform a tag DDT to Kofi. During this time, Jack Swagger gets up and once the both finish their move to Kofi, He begins to punch them one at the time in the head. Swagger throw Rhodes on the corner and he combine by throwing Dibiase on him. Once Dibiase smash Rhodes on the corner, Jack run toward the both superstars in the corner a body splash. Rhodes was completely squeeze and Dibiase was confused, but both men get out of this position and they stay close. Swagger gets speed run to the ropes and he get in front of both superstars and he perform a double clothesline. From out of nowhere, Kofi gets came from the back and lift up the leg of Jack to throw him out of the ring, but Swagger only gets on the apron and from there, he perform a suplex to Kofi to throw him definitely out of the ring. After this elimination, he quickly enters in the ring.

Mick Foley: Now I recognised the good old Jack Swagger ! It was awesome ! That prove is strong ability to dominate the other superstars in the ring.
Hot Rod: Well now I’m convicted that he have good future here. I can also say that he will go far because he really know how to control his opponents.
Mick Foley: Well now only three superstars remaining ! Lets the fights begins again.

Jack Swagger make on step in the ring and he quickly get assaulted by the tag team. Jack Swagger could neutralised them easily by performing a big boot to both superstars. They quickly get up and Dibiase run toward him to perform a sleeper hold. After a few moment, Jack Swagger wasn’t moving anymore. Ted Dibiase drops Jack Swagger on the ropes. The Tag team runs on the ropes and came back to perform a clothesline to eliminate Swagger, but once near, Swagger get down and lift up the feet of the two superstars running and he throw them over him to eliminate both superstars at same time. He successfully throw them out and he was the last one standing in the ring. The crowd was crazy and they were all yelling Swagger ! Swagger ! Swagger. He celebrate in the ring for a long moment until the commercial goes on and quit the stage.


==Commercial Break==


Backstage
*On the Titration*

*Jack Swagger was walking backstage all happy after his victory when suddently a door open and it was the Gm office. Jonathan Coachman gets out of his office and saw Swagger. *


Jonathan Coachman: Hey Champ! What a great match! I’m very happy for you. How do you feel man you’re first match and you begins with a big victory.
Jack Swagger: Well Coach, You know me better then that. Before the bell rang I was already sure to win this match.
Jonathan Coachman: Well if you say it champ. Oh … and are you ready for the elimination chamber? It’s a cruel match and you should be prepared.
Jack Swagger: Cruel… yeah it will be … for all my opponent because I won’t let them any moment to breathe.
Jonathan Coachman: I like this attitude man, continue like this and you will go far. I already see your future.
Jack Swagger: excuse me now but I have to take my shower and I have to go home … so its time for me to go.
Jonathan Coachman: Ok… perfect ….. Ciao

* Jack Swagger continues his way and The Gm look at him with a lot of admiration. *

Mick Foley: I hope that Jack Swagger has a great future, but the way that he talks with the Gm it was impolite.
Hot Rod: But the Gm likes him like wrestlers so he don’t punish him and that can turn in a bad situation.
Mick Foley: Well at least I hope that he don’t abuse of the Gm…..
* Mark Henry music hits*
Hot Rod: Me to I hope this Mick …. And now it’s the world strongest man making his way to the ring.
Mick Foley: And we will soon know who will he be facing after the break.

==Commercial Break==


Match #5
Mark Henry Vs Umaga Vs Samoa Joe
Hardcore Match
Qualification for the elimination chamber


The Match begins and Umaga quickly wants some action. He quickly strike on Mark Henry with some powerful punches, but they didn’t affect his opponent a lot. He resist and he fights back performing a knee attack to the torso of Umaga. Samoa Joe came in the fights and perform a Back Breaker to Umaga. Mark Henry quickly perform a shoulder bloc to Samoa Joe and combine performing a splash pin to Umaga. His opponent kick out at one and all the three man gets up. They all look each other and Umaga didn’t attack the other because he was aware for the consequences and for the ability’s of his opponents. Mark Henry try to perform a double clothesline, but they both pass under his arm and they combine their power to throw the world strongest man out. Mark Henry pass over the top rope and fall down near to the announce table. The Both Samoan’s in the ring look each other and they don’t fight each other, they just get out of the ring and they begins to kick Mark Henry. After a few moment, Samoa Joe took a chair from under the ring and he begins to hit Henry with it wildly. During This time, Umaga took off all the thing on the second announce table where they were nobody sitting behind it. Once all off, Samoa Joe lift up Henry and bring him up the announce table. Samoa Joe put Henry in a Power Bomb Clutch. He try to lift him up, but he was enable. Mark Henry counters by getting out if the clutch and he rapidly perform a DDT. The announce table broke and Samoa Joe was extremely bleeding.


Mick Foley: That’s match begins to be Hardcore ! I like That !
Hot Rod: You may like but the superstars involve doesn’t thing the same way. They put their body on the line during this match.
Mick Foley: Well I did a lot of those match and I’m here tonight.
Hot Rod: Yeah and you have a broken ear and with a lot of cicatrices!
Mick Foley: Ha,Ha,Ha ! Remind me my good old days.
Hot Rod: Well now lets return to the fights.
Mick Foley: Right after the break.


==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: We are back live.
Hot Rod: And we have no time to waste! This match have a lot of action and we don’t went to miss any little thing.




After that Mark Henry perform the DDT to Samoa Joe, Umaga quickly hit him right in the skull with the chair. Henry fall down and stay there for a long moment near of Joe. Umaga perform his taunt and he was crazy. He took the cable that he remove before from the table and he used this to strangle Henry with it. After a long moment, Mark Henry was bleeding from his mouth. Umaga gets the pin, but Samoa Joe quickly interrupted the pin. He hardly get up and he perform to Umaga a suplex front slam on Henry. Joe took Umaga and bring him on the barricade and he begins to punch him and to kick him, Once Umaga down, he took form under the ring a baseball bat and he hit him with it until it break. Samoa Joe turn to go see Henry, but he get surprise when he saw Henry just behind him. At the second that he turn and he saw his opponent, Mark Henry perform a World Strongest Slam. He get the pin and the ref came from the ring to there and he begins to count. He slowly count but successfully get a three count to give a spot in the elimination chamber at One Night in Cell to Mark Henry.


Mick Foley: That Was Amazing ! It was 100% Hardcore !!!!
Hot Rod: And 100 % destroyers ! They broke the announce table and a few chair plus a baseball bat !
Mick Foley: Yeah and the fan’s like this so who cares.
Hot Rod: That a good fact …. But poor the one that have to submit this great pain.
Mick Foley: But …. When you are paid to wrestle … you have to suffer like I did!
Hot Rod: I’m Not 100 % with you but it’s a good point.
Mick Foley: Well lets change of subject because the main event is now !
Hot Rod: Yes and what a great Main Event! 6 men , 3 in each team and the winners will automatically be in the elimination chamber!
Mick Foley: Only one fall for one team and they’re all qualified for this match.
Hot Rod: But before this match begins, Suicide have call his partner’s in his locker room to be ready for the match.
Mick Foley: And we have a secret cam in the room to know what they are saying.
Hot Rod: Lets see what are they saying.

Backstage
*on the Titration*

Suicide: Well guys we are all here unit in my locker room to talk about our match of tonight. I know that everyone here want to win, but we will have to act like partners because I don’t want that the match finish like the one at the Draft when You!, Angle decide to don’t take the tag and you let your partner in the ring.
Kurt Angle: That was before! I promise to be good this time and I will help you to beat the hell up of our partner! This time it’s for the World Heavyweight Championship that I do this.
Petey Williams: Me to I wont let my chance to win this title to other then me, but to be in this match if we need to help us, I will, but once in the elimination chamber their will be no more alliance.
Suicide: I have no problem with this, but I want to be sure that nobody will make is independent during this match.
Kurt Angle: No its ok for me.
Petey Williams: For me to …..
Suicide: So we are officially a team for tonight match.
Kurt Angle: Yes ….
Petey Williams: Well … for this match … YES!

Mick Foley: Well that will be interesting to see in the match.
*Booker T music Hits*
Hot Rod: Well we will see this after the break.

==Commercial Break==

Mick Foley: Well now everyone is in the ring.
Hot Rod: So lets the match begins.



Match #6
Booker T, Abyss and Vladimir Kozlov Vs Suicide, Kurt Angle and Petey Williams
Normal Tag
Qualification for the elimination chamber


After a quick discussion before the bell ring, Kurt Angle and Booker T enters in the ring. The bell quickly rang and the superstars in the ring quickly lock down. Kurt Angle get the advantage and lock in with a arm lock. Booker T quickly get out and counter performing a elbow hit in the face of Angle. He quickly connects with a slap on the face of his opponent. Kurt Angle feel insulted by Booker T and he wanted to destroy him. He quickly spear him and connects in the same position , once down , performing a great dirty combination of punches until the ref came to bring him back, on his corner. Once Booker T a little up, Angle run toward him to perform a shinning wizard. He get the pin, but Booker T kick out at two. Angle connects with a leg drop, but Booker T dodge him and tags Abyss. This Monster enters in the ring and perform a clothesline to Angle that was running toward him. Abyss lift his opponent up and perform a flapjack. Once Angle was falling down, he reach Petey Williams for the tag. After the tag, Angle roll out of the ring and stay out for a long moment recovering from this last powerful move. Petey Williams enters in the ring and get completely dominated by the size of his opponent. Abyss grab him in the air and begins to hit him with his head. After a few hit, Abyss perform a Swing Bottom. He get the pin, but it was only a two count. Abyss lift up Williams and lift him in the air in a suplex clutch. Williams counter him by connecting whit a face crusher. Once Abyss down, Williams perform a head lock, but Abyss quickly grab him by the arm and make him to a front flip from the back to the front of him. Williams stay up and perform a drop kick directly in the face of Abyss that was in the same position that before. Petey Williams get the pin, but Abyss quickly project him completely on the other side of the ring. Abyss gets up and once Williams up, he run toward him and connects with a sidewalk slam pin. The ref count until two and once near of three, Kurt Angle came interfere to stop the pin.


Kurt Angle knocks Abyss down with a powerful axe kick. He brings Williams on their corner and Suicide makes the tag. Angle brings Williams out of the ring and looks if he was ok. Before the action start, both men went on the apron.

Suicide enters in the ring and begins to punch Abyss in the head wildly until he get choke by him. Abyss gets up and propulse his opponent on the corner. He quickly went to tag Vladimir Kozlov. The Moscow Muller came in the ring and Suicide run toward him. Once Suicide near, Kozlov perform a head butt that knocks Suicide for a long time. Kozlov get the pin, but Angle quickly interferes. Suicide ramp to is corner and try to get the tag, but Kozlov bring him back, but without that Kozlov seem it, he get the tag to Petey Williams. This Superstar jump over the top rope to enter in the ring, but once in the air, Kozlov lock him in a power bomb clutch. Suddently, Petey Williams counter the power bomb and lock the victory roll pin. The Crowd goes wild! All the fans were yelling for the team of Suicide. Booker T and Abyss quickly enter in the ring to interfere. At the same time, Suicide and Kurt Angle enters to and they both spear their opponent. The ref continue the count and it’s was the lucky night of the Team of Suicide, because they successfully win vs. the monsters.

Mick Foley: Omg! History have been made tonight in the first épisode !
Hot Rod: Ohhh Yes ! Those three superstars are now in the elimination chamber ! plus the other one that will qualifide for this elimination chamber, and remember for The Hardcore League elimination chamber the Heavyweight championship will be on the line !

Mick Foley: That mean that maybe one of those will be the first Heavyweight champion !
Hot Rod:
Yes and that all for tonight épisode ! Be tuned for the next épisode and soon, the Xtreme League will have their épisode on air.

Mick Foley: Here its Roddy Piper and Mick Foley thats says good bye from Australia and Good Night ;)




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Whats New ?


Nothing really important. The card for the Xtreme League will be soon posted. For Tommy Dreamer, he is ok, but he’s injury length have increased for two more week that the normal. Also, some superstars from other organisation have been fired and they will soon be in the free agent. Those superstars will be very cheap to buy and they are really athletic. That’s all for the news be tuned for the next episode.

 

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That was nice and fun to read I love your style of writing. Hope you won't change nomatter what anybody says.
Great Show
 

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That was a pretty good show and I like the lay out better then the last shows for sure. I am happy you are sticking with this and you are doing a great job. You may want someone to edit your show each week for grammar errors so it is easier to understand, until your english is good enough to work alone. Keep up the good work and I will continue to tune in.
 

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I've always trusted this show. Good work man. The layout like my fellow co-user said is getting better, really easier to read ( I should take Note on your layout). Continue the good work.

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After a long break, HWF continues with a lot of action. This week, The Xtreme League promise to be good. The Gm as revealed earlier today the card for the next show. Like it was supposed to be, The Miz and John Morrison will face Mark Henry and Vladimir Kozlov, if they lose they are fired for this league. Also on this week show, the chase for a place in the elimination chamber continues, but with all the matches they will still be one place in this chamber. Be Tuned because it will be Xtreme!


HWF
The Xtreme League
Show #2 Card

Match # 1
Carlito Vs Dolph Ziggler
Xtreme Rules match

Match # 2
Jay Lethal Vs Sharkboy Vs Eric Young
Normal Match
#1 contender for the Intercontinental

Match # 3
John Morrison and The Miz Vs Vladimir Kozlov and Mark Henry
Normal Match
If J-M and Miz lose they are fired

Match # 4
Sting Vs Aj Styles
Normal Match
Qualification for the elimination chamber

Match # 5
MVP/Melina Vs Helms/Maryse
Normal Match
Winners gets a spot in the chamber and a #1 contender for the women

Match # 6
Rey Mysterio Vs Jeff Hardy
Normal Match
Qualification for the Elimination chamber

Match # 7
Shawn Michaels Vs Edge
Xtreme Rules Match


P-S: Prediction Are Welcome
 
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Match # 1
Carlito Vs Dolph Ziggler
Xtreme Rules match

Match # 2
Jay Lethal Vs Sharkboy Vs Eric Young
Normal Match
#1 contender for the Intercontinental

Match # 3
John Morrison and The Miz Vs Vladimir Kozlov and Mark Henry
Normal Match
If J-M and Miz lose they are fired

You cant fire Mizorisson

Match # 4
Sting Vs Aj Styles
Normal Match
Qualification for the elimination chamber

Match # 5
MVP/Melina Vs Helms/Maryse
Normal Match
Winners gets a spot in the chamber and a #1 contender for the women

Match # 6
Rey Mysterio Vs Jeff Hardy
Normal Match
Qualification for the Elimination chamber

Match # 7
Shawn Michaels Vs Edge
Xtreme Rules Match
 

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Match # 1
Carlito Vs Dolph Ziggler
Xtreme Rules match
Xtreme rules is the perfect match for a heel like Carlito.

Match # 2
Jay Lethal Vs Sharkboy Vs Eric Young
Normal Match
#1 contender for the Intercontinental
Lethal is way better then any of those superstars.

Match # 3
John Morrison and The Miz Vs Vladimir Kozlov and Mark Henry
Normal Match
If J-M and Miz lose they are fired
Morrison and Miz are to good to just let go in the 2nd show. Kozlov and Henry are strong, but I can see M and M pulling something out of there bag of tricks.

Match # 4
Sting Vs Aj Styles
Normal Match
Qualification for the elimination chamber
AJ Styles is younger, stronger and a much better contender for a title at this point in his career. Sting is past his prime.

Match # 5
MVP/Melina Vs Helms/Maryse
Normal Match
Winners gets a spot in the chamber and a #1 contender for the women
Can anybody say squash. No to big of squash but definitly a pretty easy run for these two.

Match # 6
Rey Mysterio Vs Jeff Hardy
Normal Match
Qualification for the Elimination chamber
Mysterio is fast and a much better contender for the world title then Hardy.

Match # 7
Shawn Michaels Vs Edge
Xtreme Rules Match
another good oppourtunity for a heel and Edge is the king of matches with no rules.

Good show and can't wait to see what you put forth. You get better every show and I'm excited to see what you do to hype your coming PPV. Good to have u back man.
 

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Match # 1
Carlito Vs Dolph Ziggler
Xtreme Rules match
Ziggler sucks :)


Match # 2
Jay Lethal Vs Sharkboy Vs Eric Young
Normal Match
#1 contender for the Intercontinental
SharkBoy deserves a title


Match # 3
John Morrison and The Miz Vs Vladimir Kozlov and Mark Henry
Normal Match
If J-M and Miz lose they are fired
Too good to be fired


Match # 4
Sting Vs Aj Styles
Normal Match
Qualification for the elimination chamber


Match # 5
MVP/Melina Vs Helms/Maryse
Normal Match
Winners gets a spot in the chamber and a #1 contender for the women


Match # 6
Rey Mysterio Vs Jeff Hardy
Normal Match
Qualification for the Elimination chamber


Match # 7
Shawn Michaels Vs Edge
Xtreme Rules Match
Shawn Michaels is too good to lose.


Hope it will be a great show.
 

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For all HWF fan's I have the regrets to announce that HWF is now down. It's to difficult to wright a show with a lot of superstars. I will creat a new show that is only a 1h hour show and this one wont failed because i'll do it whit my good old friend Luigi The Man.

Thanks for all fan's,
Zarhan