havent made anything in a while, felt a little artsy and found a bunch of great tutorials so i made this
End of the world | Abdullah Al Haji
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PeepShow
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The Abdullah text is what makes it stand out with the same coloring as the rest of it. Without the same coloring, I don't think it'd be half as good. Everything seems to be flowing well. Great piece here.
Wrestling Station
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I think you should have reduced the opacity of the strips from the top part. Add more light rendering (bigger sizes with less opacity on that light) Then as you check on the trends, modify the strips that the ones near the light are brighter and the top ends are dimmer and so on.
i like the text though. good use of spacing technique.
i like the text though. good use of spacing technique.
i tried making the strips dimmer away from the light, it just did not look good for some reason. thnx for the comments