Qwake
Guest
Opening with Hero/Chaos: Great way to start the show, Hero's opening line hooked me into reading the whole show, was brilliant! Nicely written, in character and Hero and Chaos' rivalry is heating up nicely with Chaos doing whatever it takes for Hero to lose the Championship. A fatal 4-Way for the belt should be good, with Whitmer already announced to be there and a match between Quack and Strong later in the show to decide the third man its looking really good. Great start.
Naptown Dragons interview: Don't really know these guys all that well but it was a nice little promo and they got their point across, I don't know about them being tag title contenders and facing Ki and Cide though lol, only because I barely know them. Not a bad promo.
Proving Ground Match: I only know Rhett Titus out of the lot and while he's not the greatest inring wrestler his character is awesome, don't know the other three guys though. I don't think this was the right match to start the show with, I doubt many people know these guys so maybe it could have been better to open with a match with more familiar wrestlers and have these guys later in the show, not a bad match just not sure about opening with it.
Sabian/Chuck segment: This was plain awesome imo. Chucky T is God! Very well written, incharacter and it sets up the 'Final Battle' of the two at the next big event which hopefully Chuck comes out on top. Also the stealing of the briefcase is interesting, nicely done and could be promo of the show for me, mainly cause of Chuck
Delirious Vs Sexxy Eddy: You nailed Delirious' promo before the match >_> Good match and its always good to have title defences on normal shows, it was quite competitive which was good even though I pretty much knew Delirious was leaving still the Champ, the ending to the match was also good, makes them both look good.
Steve Corino Segment: Very interesting, I wasn't too sure where it was going at first. What I liked most about this was Low Ki and Homicide beating the shit out of Pondo out back, good to see the Naptown Dragons make the save, makes things a little more interesting in the tag feud. Mr Chaos' announcements following that were awesome, we get a great tag match up next but also one next week, nice booking!
Whitmer/Dragon Vs Ki/Cide: Great match, very back and fourth and I had know idea as to who would win. Nearing the end of the match I was excited to see who would get the win, I thought Ki was gonna get DQed when he got the belt, I was almost certain that was going to happen but Haze made the save which also adds to the Naptown Dragons feud with Ki and Cide. Great ending to the match, nicely done booking-wise too.
Roderick Strong Interview: Its Roddy and he's speaking so I don't expect much out of this, his feud with Jacobs is awesome and get more interesting as it goes but he just really can't do great promos, you did this well for who you were using and I can't wait to see what happens with these guys next.
Roderick Strong Vs Mike Quackenbush: As expected by me, Match of the Night. I am a huge fan of these two, moreso Roddy then Quack. It was probably the perfect length, it didn't drag but it didn't end in an instance either so that was good. The two mixed well, I'd like to see them have a few matches irl, it was back and fourth and I wish they both could have advanced to the Fatal 4-Way but I guess its good Strong didn't because he has his feud with Jacobs. Nice to see Quack being pushed and the loss to Roddy doesn't make him look bad because he nearly had the win but lost by rollup. Strong kicking Quacks ass afterwards owned too lol.
Lacey/Jacobs aftermath: Good for Jimmy! Good stuff here, adds to the stuff with Roddy, I see Strong somehow disrupting the wedding or something later on down the track which could be good. There are many angles you could take with this so its interesting to say the least.
Overall: Very good comeback show Spiral, I always like reading your shows not only because theyre good but also because it helps me become more familiar with indy talents. Some very good matches and promos and youve left me thinking about many of the storylines, hopefully you post shows and hopefully I can read them 7.5/10
Naptown Dragons interview: Don't really know these guys all that well but it was a nice little promo and they got their point across, I don't know about them being tag title contenders and facing Ki and Cide though lol, only because I barely know them. Not a bad promo.
Proving Ground Match: I only know Rhett Titus out of the lot and while he's not the greatest inring wrestler his character is awesome, don't know the other three guys though. I don't think this was the right match to start the show with, I doubt many people know these guys so maybe it could have been better to open with a match with more familiar wrestlers and have these guys later in the show, not a bad match just not sure about opening with it.
Sabian/Chuck segment: This was plain awesome imo. Chucky T is God! Very well written, incharacter and it sets up the 'Final Battle' of the two at the next big event which hopefully Chuck comes out on top. Also the stealing of the briefcase is interesting, nicely done and could be promo of the show for me, mainly cause of Chuck
Delirious Vs Sexxy Eddy: You nailed Delirious' promo before the match >_> Good match and its always good to have title defences on normal shows, it was quite competitive which was good even though I pretty much knew Delirious was leaving still the Champ, the ending to the match was also good, makes them both look good.
Steve Corino Segment: Very interesting, I wasn't too sure where it was going at first. What I liked most about this was Low Ki and Homicide beating the shit out of Pondo out back, good to see the Naptown Dragons make the save, makes things a little more interesting in the tag feud. Mr Chaos' announcements following that were awesome, we get a great tag match up next but also one next week, nice booking!
Whitmer/Dragon Vs Ki/Cide: Great match, very back and fourth and I had know idea as to who would win. Nearing the end of the match I was excited to see who would get the win, I thought Ki was gonna get DQed when he got the belt, I was almost certain that was going to happen but Haze made the save which also adds to the Naptown Dragons feud with Ki and Cide. Great ending to the match, nicely done booking-wise too.
Roderick Strong Interview: Its Roddy and he's speaking so I don't expect much out of this, his feud with Jacobs is awesome and get more interesting as it goes but he just really can't do great promos, you did this well for who you were using and I can't wait to see what happens with these guys next.
Roderick Strong Vs Mike Quackenbush: As expected by me, Match of the Night. I am a huge fan of these two, moreso Roddy then Quack. It was probably the perfect length, it didn't drag but it didn't end in an instance either so that was good. The two mixed well, I'd like to see them have a few matches irl, it was back and fourth and I wish they both could have advanced to the Fatal 4-Way but I guess its good Strong didn't because he has his feud with Jacobs. Nice to see Quack being pushed and the loss to Roddy doesn't make him look bad because he nearly had the win but lost by rollup. Strong kicking Quacks ass afterwards owned too lol.
Lacey/Jacobs aftermath: Good for Jimmy! Good stuff here, adds to the stuff with Roddy, I see Strong somehow disrupting the wedding or something later on down the track which could be good. There are many angles you could take with this so its interesting to say the least.
Overall: Very good comeback show Spiral, I always like reading your shows not only because theyre good but also because it helps me become more familiar with indy talents. Some very good matches and promos and youve left me thinking about many of the storylines, hopefully you post shows and hopefully I can read them 7.5/10