Andrew~Walker
Length
Very great paragraph wise. Not hard to read at all. I have no complaints.
Flow on the moves sequence of the match
The moves in a sense "Flowed" with each other. It seemed like I was actually watching it on TV. Counter after counter, seemed really "Real" to me. The two wrestler's that you used really worked great with each other.
Coherence on the moves that the wrestler used
Like I said before, the moves really flowed with each other. Both Wrestlers have a great move set, and you used them well. I have no complaints about the moves, both of the wrestlers were in great character.
Finish of the match
The Finish was great, I love how HBK went for the Sweet Chin Music, Cage Counters and went for the uprettier, and HBK throws him to the ropes to follow up with a Sweet Chin Music. Reading this made it look like a regular match that HBK would do on TV.
Overall quality
The Match was great. Both Stars looked to give there hearts out to the crowd. The move were used, and both men flowed with each other.
CT Styles
Length
Great paragraph wise, I have no complaints. I love how you broke them down to smaller paragraphs.
Flow on the moves sequence of the match
I felt kind of awkward reading the match. I really never saw Mat/HBK as a "Dream Match" but you did pull it off pretty well. You pulled off the moves very well and it seemed very real.
Coherence on the moves that the wrestler used
Both stars have great move sets. You showed me that. Hardy used his normal moves that he would normally use, same goes for HBK. However, I really didn't like how Hardy did a moonsault off of the top rope. I may be wrong, but I think that it really wasnt needed. Also, I don't understand why you used "Kips" rather than a "Nip up".
Finish of the match
Both matches seemed similar in there finish. I liked the finish, even though they were similiar.
Overall Quality
There wasn't too much wrong with the match at all. It was an enjoyable read, and I liked it alot.
Both were very great, and very well written matches. If I could, I would pick both of you, but I can only pick one. I loved them both but I got into Andrew's alot more...
Winner: Andrew~ Walker
Length
Very great paragraph wise. Not hard to read at all. I have no complaints.
Flow on the moves sequence of the match
The moves in a sense "Flowed" with each other. It seemed like I was actually watching it on TV. Counter after counter, seemed really "Real" to me. The two wrestler's that you used really worked great with each other.
Coherence on the moves that the wrestler used
Like I said before, the moves really flowed with each other. Both Wrestlers have a great move set, and you used them well. I have no complaints about the moves, both of the wrestlers were in great character.
Finish of the match
The Finish was great, I love how HBK went for the Sweet Chin Music, Cage Counters and went for the uprettier, and HBK throws him to the ropes to follow up with a Sweet Chin Music. Reading this made it look like a regular match that HBK would do on TV.
Overall quality
The Match was great. Both Stars looked to give there hearts out to the crowd. The move were used, and both men flowed with each other.
CT Styles
Length
Great paragraph wise, I have no complaints. I love how you broke them down to smaller paragraphs.
Flow on the moves sequence of the match
I felt kind of awkward reading the match. I really never saw Mat/HBK as a "Dream Match" but you did pull it off pretty well. You pulled off the moves very well and it seemed very real.
Coherence on the moves that the wrestler used
Both stars have great move sets. You showed me that. Hardy used his normal moves that he would normally use, same goes for HBK. However, I really didn't like how Hardy did a moonsault off of the top rope. I may be wrong, but I think that it really wasnt needed. Also, I don't understand why you used "Kips" rather than a "Nip up".
Finish of the match
Both matches seemed similar in there finish. I liked the finish, even though they were similiar.
Overall Quality
There wasn't too much wrong with the match at all. It was an enjoyable read, and I liked it alot.
Both were very great, and very well written matches. If I could, I would pick both of you, but I can only pick one. I loved them both but I got into Andrew's alot more...
Winner: Andrew~ Walker