Undertaker

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Lubay

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Okay, that one looks decent I like it.
But here is what I think might need some of your attention:
1- The lightening on the right looks odd compared to the others. You might need to reduce the brightness of it and add small branches beside it or coming from it.
2-the fog/eraser thing on the lower right of undertaker is done wrongly. Hence the border looks eaten out as well as his body.
3-The star placement on the "N" of the word Undertaker looks not good imo. I think it would be better if it was at the "U" and on an edge not bold centered.
4-You could have added a subtext as well as it looks kinda empty.

Good effort there dude.
 
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See, youre making it seem like he is a mystical space beast like Rayquaza or some shit, but really, he comes from hell, in the depths of Earth. Otherwise, this is phenomenal. WS had a good thing to say about the star, its an eyesore, but I can deal with it. 9/10.
 

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Blend in some effects into the character.and brush some shadows to match the background.the stars are too sharpened.I like the text,composition and depth.
 

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blend taker in a lil with the lightening, the text is awesome. great sig though