Is the only thing different about the first 2 your name? :laugh2:
Anyways, it's not bad. You're getting better. The 2 side pics you used though are a bit too blurry. I know they aren't supposed to stand out as much as your main PSD, but that just doesn't look right. Not a real fan of the font you chose either. Keep working though.
EDIT- Ok, now I see a gray outline on the second.