Personally I dont like it. I think it's just because you've tried to do what they do sometimes on RAW/SD etc, but you havent done it to the same quality, imo. It looks way too relaxed and casual, the top text really bringing that across. I think if you used some more square texts, and tried to create a more serious feel to the sig, it would look a lot better.
Thats just my opinion tho man.