Looks like you tryed to hard on this imo.
5/10
Looks to me like you didnt try hard enough. Hate to say it buddy but its terriable.
- The background isn't good at all, not sure if you took a brick wall and just changed the colour or something but that is the first thing not going for me.
- Next is the text, nice MS Word text you got using there. A word of advice, try and avoid the MS fonts cause they aren't upto sig standard IMO. Head over to
www.dafont.com and pick up some deadly ones.
- The top layer has ruined it for me. I can see you were trying to go for the grunge theme but it went horribly wrong.
Sorry but 3/10