dont mean to sound like a asshole or dick but it looks bad, idk if you outer glowed the psd but the one on the left looks to shape and the edges stand out to much, the bg is premade and you wont ever get great by using premades, try to start making your own. also when using premades your work my not look as good cuz the bg isnt made for that piece of work its just generic. No border,
all of them 3/10
You didnt really do much you used a premade put 4 psds on it and used some small effects on the psds to make them be Luminosity and less opacity.