My Project

[Kaedon]

I have been working tirelessly on. They are a series of 4 PSAs (Public Service Announcements) for my college's Counseling Services. I'd like to get some feedback from everyone if possible. Thanks.



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[Wrestling Station]

1-I think you need to change the soundtrack, as it gives a depressed feeling for the person viewing it.
2-Try another font for the addresses. It looks way too plain imo.
3-Add a logo at the cornor about your project. (stuck it there on the lower right hand cornor as an example).

 

[the dark knight]

whats the number again? i could use their help...

 

[Kaedon]

1-I think you need to change the soundtrack, as it gives a depressed feeling for the person viewing it.
2-Try another font for the addresses. It looks way too plain imo.
3-Add a logo at the cornor about your project. (stuck it there on the lower right hand cornor as an example).

1- Thats the point
2- I didnt want to use Comic Serif
3- I can't identify it as "my" project because it is airing on television and it has nothing to do with the message