Fantastic, really good to see that you finally took some of my advice. It's a big step up but there are still some flaws. Nice that you changed the font, put some colour into it and transformed it... very good.
Next, the background looks somewhat better than the previous ones again good job. Try to blend in the render more and have the text the same colour as of the background/ render. Over here the text should be red or orange not blue.
Improvement clearly seen.