I think you had a good idea with it but it could use a bit more work. The background seems a bit plain with the swirl effect on the green. If you were doing a DX wallpaper this may have worked better but with just Trips I think it lacks depth.
I like the effects on the text but not the actual choice of text. You have a simple metallic BG and a grungy text - don't work well together. Background pics are okay but I would focus more on making this a one image wallpaper. Too much going on for an actual wallpaper.
6/10 for effort and general cleanliness. Everything is blended properly as well.