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ECW BEGINS
Finlay comes out and calls out the GM.
Finlay: Paul, get out here now.
*Paul comes*
Paul: Finlay, what is it?
Finlay: I need a shot at the World Title, tonight!
Paul: No, I am not just going to give you one am I? But I do have a superstar here that is willing to give you a fight for the No1 contender. The winner will face Swagger at Backlash.
Finlay: Who is it?
Paul: We'll find out.
*Paul leaves ring*
Not a bad match, Hardy had a missed atempt at the Twist of Fate, and Mark Henry hit the Worlds Strongest Slam on Christian and the pin got interuppted by Jeff, who Swantonbombed Herny to get the win.
Match Two
Great match, Finlay eventually gets the win when Hornswoggle distracts Khali with a water pistol and Finlay uses the shellileigh and covers for the win.
We go backstage to see Finlay walking back to his locker room after his win.
Khali comes from behind and dismatles Finlay and Hornswoggle dashes off scared.
Will this lead into a rivalry between the two?
*GM Paul makes his way to the ring*
Paul: Having just seen what has happened backstage, I have an annoucement.
At Backlash it will be Finlay v Great Khail in a Belfast Brawl.
He also announces next weeks Main Event will be Jack Swagger vs Evan Bourne for the ECW title.
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Theres my show. What do you think?
Noiw if someone can write up raw, and someone writes up Smackdown we can get underway.
ECW BEGINS
Finlay comes out and calls out the GM.
Finlay: Paul, get out here now.
*Paul comes*
Paul: Finlay, what is it?
Finlay: I need a shot at the World Title, tonight!
Paul: No, I am not just going to give you one am I? But I do have a superstar here that is willing to give you a fight for the No1 contender. The winner will face Swagger at Backlash.
Finlay: Who is it?
Paul: We'll find out.
*Paul leaves ring*
Match One
Mark Henry and Matt Hardy vs Christian and Jeff Hardy
Mark Henry and Matt Hardy vs Christian and Jeff Hardy
Not a bad match, Hardy had a missed atempt at the Twist of Fate, and Mark Henry hit the Worlds Strongest Slam on Christian and the pin got interuppted by Jeff, who Swantonbombed Herny to get the win.
Match Two
Finlay (w/) Hornswoggle vs Great Khali
Great match, Finlay eventually gets the win when Hornswoggle distracts Khali with a water pistol and Finlay uses the shellileigh and covers for the win.
We go backstage to see Finlay walking back to his locker room after his win.
Khali comes from behind and dismatles Finlay and Hornswoggle dashes off scared.
Will this lead into a rivalry between the two?
*GM Paul makes his way to the ring*
Paul: Having just seen what has happened backstage, I have an annoucement.
At Backlash it will be Finlay v Great Khail in a Belfast Brawl.
He also announces next weeks Main Event will be Jack Swagger vs Evan Bourne for the ECW title.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
Theres my show. What do you think?
Noiw if someone can write up raw, and someone writes up Smackdown we can get underway.
