GFK Writings

[Petty]

I thought I'd post some of the things I have written in the past and would like honest genuwine feedback from you guys. I thought I'd start it off with someone I wrote tonight.

#foodforthought the rain beats on my glass the mist clouds the intent of men while inneundos are taken out of context I been chillin in marvins room for a minute I think he want me to leave damn lil brah let me tell you overlook my lines cuz they ain't glitz and rims because I'm not a fake and boast my homie laugh I'm like you really think that bitch yours wait until the chips are down watch how q...uick she dips lil brah no chuckling now he seeing it now hey bartender fill me up patron silver and lime hold the ice I like my news straight you blinded by the stars and lights thinking money really save us from everything I'm bout to put you on game most people won't do this do you think Jordan was the man from the start he respected the time invested seen it as a blessing you asked me what's the lesson why am I stressing I laugh as I finish my drink cuz the shit begins within we live and die there so brah that's the lesson I learned it at an early age

This next one was a real old one.

How Do I Say

I sit on mars with the darkness and the stars being my light

The cold chill of space wrapping my lonely embrace

I look to venus and see you are brighter than the sun

I look to you and know all the alien lingo but can't form words

I look at my planet and realize how the plant life and water have dried up

I haven't cried in a century, I died inside, my funeral was empty

My heart hurts, my eyes can't stop looking at the beauty sittin on venus

I wanna leave mars, but unsure how far I can go, Jupiter gots a ring

My heart beats with each comet that passes your planet

I ride the stars to your vortex, I grab a ring from jupiter

Venus is so warm, so close, her heavenly presence melts the ice

But, you look at me as I am unable to still form words

Those precious eyes look so pained

My lip quivers as I merge the courage to leave my peace

How Do I Say Please Forgive Me

they say repetition is the father of learning, if that the case I learned alot from my mistakes, just thrown into the mix, not sure if I can be fixed, so self medication was not for kicks, no enablers, mentally I'm caine, vocally I'm able, my life is like a scripture, long written, no scribbles I can read the print clearly, foreshadowing events that made me, so how can another man break me, when I...already been broke, cast that stone, I wish you would, I got my stripes long before I ever touched a mic, the hype that proceeds you doesn't effect me, put my words in the air without a care, cause I live for today, tomorrow isn't promised, so I don't follow the trends, learned that from makavelli, going through hell to get to heaven, it's worth the trip, to see some old friends, barely remember the faces, it's all smiles in the beginning, than when it's time to go, it's nothin but sorrow, from there on out zoned out, minutes become hours, day's become weeks, months became years, blow a little loud or drink alittle liquer for ya memory, shit still bother me, I know I shouldn't have left, but the devil got in me, don't cry for me, cry for our future, it's so damn bleak, you don't understand me, so I don't expect you to feel me, I don't wanna be admired, I'm the angel who fell from the sky, why lie, we all dying inside

I stand on the outer edge of existence, tip toe on hell's boundaries, I been where no man wants to go, at the bottom of a bottle, perhaps prescription, take a second to listen, some want the blessings but not the curse, some want the fame but don't like the grind, what the fuck are you doing in this lane if you only seeing the cup as half full? These bitches only here when you up, but when you do...wn everyone scatter like roaches....fucking poachers, nah bitch you can't sip my potion nor hit my blunt in rotation, I ran circles round you man, you so mad we not in the same circles, google that and have a change of heart, if you would have played you're part I wouldn't have used one punch line to tear you apart, you in this for the wrong reasons, I'm here cause the reigns were given to me, I didn't want this it was bestowed upon me, you're whole swagg old, you're whole image borrowed, you couldn't even be yourself if Stan Lee provided the manuscript, don't get it twisted you walking on egg shells round me them subliminals don't even phase me be a man coward man up and do it big mention me and watch the whole city come out, mention me by name and watch the beast unleashed causing havoc verbally slaying you with a Prince City level up sound effect remember it's slim not jr to you, I'm not cha dude, not cha fan this isn't a figment of ya imagination you see me everyday Good morning y'all it's gon be 60 degrees today the city scene been cooking since 2010 SBM/Dirty Deacon/Cin.See Media/Trill Testament

you ain't gotta like me baby...cuz ya cousin, sister, friend does...ahahahah...